[外语类试卷]大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷140及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 140及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Western Culture following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1随着全球化的发展 ，西方文化正越来越多地渗入中国文化 2对待中西方文化融合的不同观点 3你的看法 2 For this p

2、art, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Caring for the Aged following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1向老年 人致以节日的祝贺 2从一件难忘的事回忆老年人对你的影响 3你如何关爱老年人 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short composition e

3、ntitled Helping a Sick Passerby following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1简单叙述遇到一位路人生病的情况 2其他人是怎样帮助他她的 3这件事给你的感受 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an eye-witness account of a fire accident following the outline given below.

4、 You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1火灾发生的时间和地点 2你所见到的火灾情况 3你对火灾原因的分析 大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 140答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 Western Culture With the development of globalization, Western culture is gradually creeping into Chinese culture. Some Western cultural elements,

5、 such as the Hollywood blockbusters, coffee and coca-cola, are packing into every corner of Chinese peoples daily life. How to view the combination of traditional Chinese culture and Western culture? Some people hold that it is in fact the result of the invasion of Western culture, and all Chinese p

6、eople should say no to westernization. On the contrary, some people believe that Western culture is better than Chinese culture, and Chinese people ought to study the essence of Western culture. In my opinion, people should neither accept Western culture totally, nor turn it down completely. The bes

7、t policy is to “discard the dross and select the essence“, so as to take advantage of its virtue to serve for the development of our country. 【试题解析】 文 章第一段指出随着全球化发展，西方文化元素正越来越多地渗入中国文化。 第二段陈述了对待西方文化的两种观点，一种认为要完全拒绝西方文化，因为它在一定程度上是文化侵略。另一种观点认为西方文化优于中国传统文化，要学习西方文化精华。 最后一段作者表明自己的观点：对西方文化，既不能全盘接受也不应完全排斥，要取

8、其精华、去其糟粕，使其有利于中国的发展。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Caring for the Aged The Double Ninth Festival is the day for everyone to show his sincere respect and heartfelt gratitude to the senior citizens, who have contributed so much to our society as well as their families. My former neighbor Mr. Wang, a retired work

9、er, has left a deep impression on me. When I was a kid, he took good care of me when my parents were busy. One day, he taught me to fly a kite. After trying many times, I still could not make it. In a fury, I threw the kite to the ground and wanted to stamp on it. Mr. Wang patted me on the head, “Pr

10、actice makes perfect. Next time youll do it better. Lets try again.“ I still remember his words clearly. I would never forget Mr. Wang and other senior citizens, from whom I have learnt virtues such as persistence, integrity and selflessness. In return for this, the best thing I should do is spend m

11、ore time with them and bring them happiness, as what they did during my childhood. 【试题解析】 第一段通过重阳节来临之际向老年人表示感谢，引出主题。 第二段叙述童年时一位老邻居通过教自己放风筝给予自己的启示和教育。由于是记叙文体，整个段落使用了过去时态。谚语 Practice makes perfect增加了老人话语的说服力，为文章增色。 第三段表示作为回报，要多用一些时间来陪伴老人。本段两个句子都是复合句，这种句式值得借鉴。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 Helping a Sick Passerby

12、 Yesterday when I was on my way to the supermarket, suddenly a girl walking slowly in front of me fell to the ground. Immediately I ran to the girl to see what happened to her. The girl fainted and sweated heavily. At the same time, several pedestrians came up, one of whom told us that he was a doct

13、or and asked us to help him move the girl to the shade of a tree. The girl was thought to have come down with heatstroke. Someone called an ambulance. We waited there for the girl to regain consciousness. At last, the ambulance arrived, but the girl was still in the state of unconsciousness. As soon

14、 as the girl was carried in the ambulance, it roared off. What happened moved me deeply. Everyone will encounter ups and downs in his life. Then he may need others care and help. If we are willing to help each other, the world will be more harmonious. 【试题解析】 第一段交代人物、事件发生的时间和地点。第一句中 walking slowly in

15、 front of me为现在分词短语作定语，修饰主语 a girl，这样的安排使句式更加紧凑。 第 二段以事件发生的时间为主线叙述人们对生病女孩的照顾。其中第三句是带有非限制性定语从句的长句，使句式既多样化又紧凑。 第三段是由此事件引发的感想。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 A Fire Accident At about 7:30 in the morning of APril 20th on my way toschol, I witnessed a fire accident. That morning I went to school by bike as usual, su

16、ddenly I was startled to hear people screaming loudly “Fire! Fire!“ I saw a shoP not far away was on fire. I rushed to the spot and more and more people gathered there. There was no extinguisher, so we found every possible tool to carry water to put out the fire. At the same time, someone called 119

17、. Soon the fire fighters arrived. With fire-extinguishing equipments, they quickly put out the fire. In my view, there are two possible reasons for the fire accident. The first reason might be that the shop stored something inflammable and somebody threw a burning cigarette butt at random. The secon

18、d reason might be that the shopkeeper wanted to save money by keeping using some household appliances for too long, which caused the disaster. No matter what the real cause is, life is the most precious. 【试题解析】 第一段简要交代目击火灾的时间和地点。 第二段按照时间顺序描述了火灾的情况。注意时态的正确使用。 第三段从两个方面分析了引发火灾的原因。第一，商店内有易燃物，有人随意扔烟头导致火灾；第二，店主所使用的电器老化导致火灾。本段的整体框架借鉴了议论文列举理由的模式。 【知识模块】 作文