[外语类试卷]大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷141及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 141及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short composition describing an accident on Sports Meeting following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 假如你报名参加了学校的运动会，写一篇文章描述在运动会上发生的一件事，内容包括：

2、1学校召开了运动会 2你参加男子 400米赛跑，你和李刚处于领先位置。他摔倒了，你扶起他。但被后面选手赶超，你没有获得好名次 3你对这件事的感受 2 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short composition entitled Arbor Day on Campus following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 学生会号召大家在今年的植树节 (Arbor Day)

3、绿化校园，同学们纷纷响应号召。你也参加了这次活动，请写一篇文章描述这件有意义的事。内容包括： 1简单介绍学生会的号召 2你的行动 3这样做的意义 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short composition describing how you help a boy who fall into a lake by accident. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given

4、 below. 假如你 “五一 ”期间去公园游玩，遇到一个小男孩不慎掉人公园的人工湖里。湖水较深，小男孩挣扎求救，会游泳的你奋不顾身地跳人湖里将他救起。在众 人的帮助下，两人顺利地上了岸。你的行为赢得了众人的赞扬。请写一篇文章描述此事件。 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short composition entitled A Volunteer Activity following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no

5、 more than 180 words. 学校学生会组织 青年志愿者利用双休日到交通拥挤的路口维护交通秩序，请就此写一篇文章，内容包括： 1介绍学生会组织的活动内容 2我是如何维护交通秩序的 3我的感受 大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 141答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 An Accident on Sports Meeting A sports meeting was held this Morning on the playground. My fellow students took park in various kinds of track

6、 and field events were taken by my fellow students and I signed up for mens 400-meter race. Upon hearing the starting guns firing sound, Li Gang, a competitive player, and I dashed forward like wind and led the race. But unfortunately, in the middle of the race he tripped and fell down heavily. At t

7、he sight of this scene, I stopped to help him up without hesitation and waited for the medical workers to come. At the same time, other players passed us quickly. After the medical workers took him away, I ran to the finish line. Of course, I was the last one in the race. But I felt I did the right

8、thing, for there exists something more important than awards. 【试题解析】 本文描述学校运动会上发生的一件事。 第一段简单介绍了学校运动会和自己参加 的项目。 第二段详细描述在比赛过程中李刚摔倒，自己因为帮助他而没有取得好名次。 第三段表达自己的感受：这样做是值得的。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Arbor Day on Campus As Arbor Day is approaching, the Students Union called on everyone to plant trees on our campus

9、. All of us believe it is meaningful to the environment. Personally, I believe it was very helpful to create a green campus, so I responded to the call actively. First, I took several tree seedlings from the Students Union with my roommates and came to the given location to dig deep holes for the tr

10、ee seedlings. After that, we put them in the holes. Then, the soil around was well trodden down, so that the tree seedlings were firmly rooted. At last, we watered the tree seedlings. With the issue of pollution becoming increasingly serious, every citizen should put in his effort to make our enviro

11、nment better. The activity called for students awareness of the severe pollution around us and actual action to preserve our environment. 【试题解析】 第一段简单介绍学生会号召大家在校园里植树。 第二段描述自己和室友一起植树的过程，要注意在描述过程时所用的连接词：First， Afterthat， Then和 At last。 第三段阐述此次活动的意义。我们意识到污染问题的严重性，为保护环境付出了自己的努力。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 Be Re

12、ady to Help Others During the Labor Day holiday, I went on an outing to the park. When I wandered around a lake, I saw a boy aged 7 or 8 falling into the lake by accident. “Help! Help. “ I heard him crying and saw him struggling in the deep water. Immediately, I jumped into the water and struck out

13、for the drowning boy. Though the water was cold, I had no time to think about it. Finally, I reached the boy and took him to the nearest bank. People on the bank caught hold of us and lifted us up. Fortunately, the boy was still conscious and kept crying. My courageous deed won peoples admiration. I

14、 smiled and left. I got wet all over, but I really think I did the right thing. I believe when we give a hand to people in trouble, the world will be full of love. 【试题解析】 文章第一段交待事情发生的时间、地点和起因。 第二段具体描述事情发生的过程： “我 ”跳入冰冷的湖水中，将落水的小男孩带到岸边，在众人的帮助下，两人都顺利地上了岸。 第三段说明 “我 ”的行为赢得了众人的赞扬，并表达对见义勇为行为的看法：我们都帮助有困难的人，

15、世界就会充满爱。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 A Volunteer Activity Students Union of our university held a volunteer activity several days ago. They organized young volunteers to help to direct the traffic and spread the traffic rules on weekend. One of my classmates and I stood at the busy crossroads to do the job.

16、Some passersby would obey the traffic rules. When seeing the red traffic light on, they stood behind the stop line. Whereas, others would ignore the traffic lights and hurry to cross the road. We came up to persuade them to observe the traffic rules when such things happened. Most of them did as we

17、said and stopped to wait. I firmly believe that observing the traffic regulations is beneficial to everyone. If everyone in our society observes the traffic regulations, our traffic situation will get improved. Whats more, the mass media are expected to publicize the “cherishing life“ idea to people. Only in this way would it help people to realize the importance of our lives. 【试题解析】 文章叙述了学生会组织的一次青年志愿者活动。第一段概括性地交待了活动的内容。 第二段具体描述所做的事情：维护交通规则，规劝违反规则者遵守交通规则。 第三段说明对这次活动的体会：遵守交通规则对每个人都有利；此外，大众媒体要向人们宣传 “珍惜生命 ”的思想，让人们真正重视自己的生命。 【知识模块】 作文