[外语类试卷]大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷143及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 143及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an application letter. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese. 假设你是李明，化学系的一名大二学生。请你就申请助学贷款一事给学校有关部门写封申请信。 申请信的内容

2、包括以下几点： 1提出申请 2申请的理由 3恳请批准 2 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an apology letter. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words and base your composition on the information given below in Chinese. 假设你是王云，你与张老师约好十点见面，但因为在去学校的途中遇到了一个被汽车撞昏的女学生，你与其他路人将这个受伤的女学生送往医院，而没有准时

3、赴约。请给张老师写一封道歉信表示歉意，并另行约定见面时间。 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a complaint letter. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese. 假设你是张朋，几天前买了一部手机，这部手机存在一些问题，请写一封投诉信，内容包括： 1说明新买的手机存在的问题 2描述具体的情况 3表示期

4、待问题得到解决 4 For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter recruiting new members. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese. 请为某大学的功夫社团写一篇招募新社员的启事，内容包括： 1介绍本社团的历史 2说明参加本社团的益处 3参加本社团的联系方式 大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟

5、试卷 143答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 An Application Letter To whom it may concern, Im writing to apply for a student loan. As a sophomore from the Chemistry Department, I have much financial difficulty in continuing my study. My father is the only breadwinner while my mother was laid off two years

6、 ago. My grandmother has been suffering illness for many years. My younger brother is now studying in a high school. To support the study of my brother and me, my family has witnessed a sharp increase in the debt to an unbearable amount of ￥ 130 000 in the past two years. I took part-time jobs durin

7、g the summer vacation, but what I have earned is far from enough for me to pay the required tuition fees. In order to continue my study, I have to apply for a student loan. If my request is granted, I will make good use of the money and put my mind to study. I will definitely pay back the loan accor

8、ding to the requirements. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【试题解析 】 文章第一段开门见山，向有关部门提出贷款申请，同时简要说明申请的原因是家境困难。 第二段具体阐述申请的理由，分析了家庭的收支情况，给读信的人真实可信的印象。本段中的货币符号和数字很容易吸引阅卷老师的眼球，同时 witness， a sharp increase， an unbearableamount of等闪光词及短语的使用，无疑增加了文章的得分点。 第三段表明自己会充分利用贷款以及按照要求偿

9、还贷款的决心。 第四段为客套语，以示礼貌。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答 案】 An Apology Letter Dear Mr. Zhang, I would like to express my apologies for not being able to keep our 10:00 oclock appointment. I witnessed a traffic accident on my way to school. The victim was a school girl. She was hit by a car from the back and fell down

10、 from her bicycle. She was badly injured and lay unconsciously at the side of the road. It was annoying that the car driver ran away after hitting the girl. Several passersby and I took the trouble to send the girl to the hospital. I will come over to your apartment the day after tomorrow, Tuesday,

11、Feb. 26th, at 9:00 oclock in the morning if that is convenient for you. Otherwise, please notify me of the time and place that is feasible for you. Yours truly, Wang Yun 【试题解析】 本文要求写一封道歉信。 第一段说明因没有按时赴约而向张老师道歉。 第二段具体说明没有及时赴约的原因：将交通事故中受伤的女孩送往医院。 第三段征求对方意见，另约见面时间。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 A Complaint Letter

12、Dear Sir/Madam, I am very upset to find that the mobile phone I bought a week ago at your shop doesnt work well. There are so many problems with the mobile phone that I wish to bring them to your attention. For one thing, there is something wrong with the call quality of the phone. I can hardly hear

13、 clearly what the caller is speaking even though I turn the volume to the highest level. For another, it frequently shuts down by itself. As a result, I can scarcely finish one call to my friend. Moreover, the screen often goes black and thus I have to restart it from time to time. To solve the abov

14、e problems, I hope you can exchange it for another one or give me a refund. Your effort to provide good services will be highly appreciated. I look forward to your earliest reply. Yours sincerely, Zhang Peng 【试题解析】 本文要求写一封投诉信，投诉手机存在质量问题。文章第一段简要说明新买的 手机存在质量问题。 第二段具体说明手机存在的三个问题：一是通话质量差，二是频繁自动关机，三是时常黑屏

15、。 第三段提出希望问题得到解决的方式，并表示了对对方将要付出行动的感谢。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Welcome to the Chinese Kungfu Club Welcome to the Chinese Kungfu Club! The Students Union established the club 10 years ago, with the purpose of serving all the students. Many wonderful activities are organized and arranged in our club. Partici

16、pating in our club will benefit you a lot. As is known to all, the training on how to perform Chinese kungfu is open and free to all new members. Besides we can keep fit by performing kungfu, during which the participants have a chance to appreciate the great charm of Chinese kungfu culture. In addi

17、tion, kungfu contests will be held to show your progress. Moreover, by participating in these activities, you can carry forward the Chinese traditional culture. Anyone who is interested in Chinese kungfu is welcomed warmly. What you need to do is just call us at 8765-4321 or e-mail us at chinesekungfu 123. net. We are looking forward to your participation. 【试题解析】 本文是一篇中国功夫社团招募新社员的启事。文章第一段介绍功夫社团的历史：本社团十年前由学生会发起；社团组织过很多精彩的活动。 第二段说明参加本社团的益处：免费向社员教授功夫；练习功夫能够保持身体健康；领略中国功夫文化的无穷魅力，弘扬发展中国传统文化。 第三段交待参加功夫社团的联系方式。 【知识模块】 作文