[外语类试卷]大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷39及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 39及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 You re allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of time.“ You should write at least 120 wor

2、ds but no more than 180 words. 1坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。 2意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命。 3学生也是这样，通过刻苦学习才能成为国家有用之才。 2 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things befor

3、e undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Wealth and Happiness. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below: 1有人认为拥有

4、财富就拥有了幸福。 2你的看法。 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Silence Is Gold. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below: 1 “沉默是金 ”在一些场合中是正确的。 2但也有例外的情况。 3你的看法。 大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 39答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正

5、确答案】 Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will (1) With the coming of a brand new era full of opportunities, the issue of how to succeed has aroused growing concern in public. (2) Although there are thousands of ways to success, a strong will is the important guarantee just as a proverb says, “Where th

6、ere is a will, there is a way“. (3) The long history of human being has proved that only those who have a strong will can fulfill great missions and achieve success at last. Take Mao Zedong, one of the great founders of the People s Republic of China, as an example. (4) Without the strong will to sa

7、ve Chinese people from misery and to build a (5) prosperous, democratic and civilized new country, how could he (6) drive the Japanese out of China and to become such a famous leader in the world? (7) If we students want to be successful in the future, the strong will of hardwork is the most importa

8、nt. (8) Therefore, studying hard to get more knowledge and improve our ability to handle complicated problems is the only way to lay a (9) solid foundation for future success. 【试题解析】 (1)开篇点题，指出如何成功受到广泛关注，并引出坚强的意志对于成功的重要性。 (2)使用 Although转折，使上下文过渡更加自然。 (3)用一句概括性的话语引出实例。 (4)使用反问句，强调语气。 (5)三个连续的形容词更能说明实

9、例的成功。 (6)driveout 意为 “将 赶出去 ”。 (7)将话题引向学生，指出学生如何才能成功。 (8)最后点题，说明刻苦学习为我们未来的成功打下坚实的基础。 (9)solid foundation意为 “坚实的基础 ”。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Doing Small Things Is Important (1) From this picture, we can see that the boy is worried about disposing of nuclear waste. However, his father thinks he should emp

10、ty the dustbin first. Maybe some people think highly of the boy because he cares about the environment. But I agree with the father. (2) Only if we do every small thing well can we deal with something great. (3) Doing small things is of great importance. On one hand, by doing so, we are able to accu

11、mulate experience and master essential skills. We must be fully prepared before we do something big. On the other hand, doing small things also helps to develop good habits. If so, we can be calmer and know exactly what to do and how to do when we meet something difficult or important. (4) Those who

12、 can do small things perfectly are more likely to make achievements. Doing small things enables us to learn basic skills to do something big. Therefore, we should try our best even when we re doing small things. 【 试题解析】 (1)开篇描述图片，并且点名这篇作文的主旨 做小事非常重要。 (2)使用强调句加强语气。 (3)从两方面论证做小事重要的原因。 (4)说明做小事的好处，再次点明

13、其重要性，并且呼吁大家做小事也要尽力。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 Wealth and Happiness Everyone wants to be wealthy. (1) Having great wealth symbolizes a persons success and capability. Many people try to make money at all costs. They claim that wealth can bring everything they want. (2) In my opinion, people cannot do anythi

14、ng without money, but money is not everything. What money will bring you depends on your personal belief and goal in life. (3) If you are kind enough to help others, especially the poor, then money is a good thing to you. With it, you can do much more for the benefit of people and your country, and

15、it will bring you happiness as well. If you want money to buy large apartments and luxury cars to keep up with others, or to pursue your materialistic enjoyment, youll never get the true happiness and even lose some happiness you once owned. (4) In a word, money is a double-edged sword for happiness

16、. You should adopt a proper attitude towards money, and (5) only in this way can money be the source of your happiness. 【试题解析】 (1)开篇指出人们对待财富的看法。 (2)指出自己的观点 没有钱是不行的，但是金钱也不是万能的。 (3)用两个假设来论证自己的观点。 (4)结尾概括自己的观点，并指出财富是一把 “双刃剑 ”。 (5)倒装句起强调作用。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Silence Is Gold (1) When we talk of the famo

17、us proverb “Silence is gold“, we should not simply label it as right or wrong, but explore it in depth. This proverb is true under several situations. (2) First, if we have made a promise not to (3) let out a secret, we should always keep silent. Second, we should avoid talking about facts or statis

18、tics of which we are not sure. Third, whenever we are expressing our ideas, brevity is the soul of wit and talking too much will always lead to faults and mistakes. (4) Nevertheless, there are also some exceptions. If we find out a flaw in others speaking or writing, we should not hesitate a moment

19、to (5) point it out. And to friends or acquaintances who are seeking advice, we should feel free to help them. (6) In a word, we can draw the conclusion that in most cases silence is gold, but in certain circumstances, talking is the right choice. 【试题解析】 (1)以谚语开篇，引出话题，指出不能单以对错评判这句话。 (2)分别指出 “沉默是金 ”适用的三种场合。 (3)let out a secret意为 “泄露秘密 ”。 (4)通过转折指出例外情形，并举例说明。 (5)point out意为 “指出来 ”。 (6)做出总结，收尾照应。 【知识模块】 作文