[外语类试卷]大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷41及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 41及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Ideals. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below: 1人人都有理想。 2实现理想的因素是 什么。 3你的理想及实现的途径。 2 For this part, you are allowed

2、 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic The Sense of Social Responsibility. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below: 1什么是社会责任感。 2如何加强社会责任 感。 3呼吁：让我们肩负起自己的社会责任。 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the t

3、opic Should We Help Others in Need? You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below: 1现在经常有这样的现象发生：路上有人摔倒， 没人敢上前帮忙。 2这是人们的公德心缺失还是其他什么原因呢 ? 3你对此有何看法 ? 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic How to Enhance the Se

4、nse of Happiness. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below: 1人们对于如何提升幸福感有不同看法。 2幸福感提升不仅包含物质层面，也指 大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 41答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 Ideals Everyone has his ideal. (1) A businessman wishes to make greater profit; a farmer expe

5、cts good harvests; a student tries to learn more and better. However, one should (2) be sensible about whether his ideal is well founded or not. If it is, one has to plan and work hard for its realization. (3) Effort, skill and persistence are all necessary. (4) And very often, one has to get help f

6、rom others, including advice and support in one form or another. My ideal is to become a doctor. It is said that the field of medicine is a well-paid profession, but I (5) take it as a lofty profession entrusted with saving people s lives. (6) To realize my goal, I must concentrate on laboratory wor

7、k to develop the analytical skills necessary to become a qualified doctor. Im sure I will persevere in this pursuit. 【试题解析】 (1)举例说明不管身份如何，每个人都有自己的理想。 (2)be sensible意为 “清楚；了解 ”。 (3)指出必要因素：努力、技巧、恒心。 (4)还有其他必要因素。 (5)takeas 意为 “把 看作是 ” 。 (6)不定式表目的，提出实现理想的途径。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 The Sense of Social Respon

8、sibility (1) Each individual is closely related to and bears obligations to others that is what we call social responsibility. The sense of social responsibility is very important to us. If everyone has a good sense of social responsibility, we can build a better society and a more prosperous countr

9、y. (2) How can sense of social responsibility be strengthened? To start with, children should be taught about good (3) moral outlook, so that when they grow up, they can become (4) law-abiding and responsible citizens. Furthermore, the humanistic education is vital, especially for university student

10、s because they are the future pillars of our country. (5) Last but not least, it is necessary to encourage people to care for others and help others through all kinds of propaganda. If all the citizens have a (6) sound sense of social responsibility, it is hopeful that the world will enjoy a better

11、future. Therefore, lets take our social responsibility and contribute to our society. 【试题解析】 (1)开篇对社会责任感下定义，说明这是每个人的责任。 (2)使用问句引出如何才能加强社会责任感这个话题。 (3)moral outlook意为 “道德观 ”。 (4)law-abiding意为 “遵纪守法的 ”。 (5)使用 to start with， furthermore， last but not least上下衔接，自然而不单调。 (6)sound意为 “合理的；健全的 ”。 【知识模块】 作文 3

12、【正确答案】 Should We Help Others in Need? (1) Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture. (2) But what s strange nowadays is that people dare not give a hand to those in need. I would like to elaborate my views on this issue. (3) Firstly, I think people s moral sense has degr

13、aded. When egoism gains the upper hand, many people find it growingly hard to help others. (4) Secondly, there is no denying that some tragic events turn out to be traps by people with evil intentions. So common people are becoming more risk-conscious and are more wary of traps and deceits. (5) In g

14、eneral, I contend the idea that we should be warm-hearted and offer help as well as looking out for potential hazards so as not to be deceived. 【试题解析】 (1)第一句话介绍背景，使用 “美德 ”一词 。 (2)第二句话为转折句，除了使用 but这个表示强烈转折意味的连接词， strange一词的使用和首句形成鲜明对比。 (3)第二部分开始阐释人们公德心缺乏的原因，原因之一为自私。 (4)原因之二是外因，使用了 trap， deceit等词语。采用主

15、客观因素结合的方法，全面解释了公德心缺失的根源。 (5)最后一段表明作者立场，提出既要坚持善良之心也要有防备之心。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 How to Enhance the Sense of Happiness (1) The sense of happiness is of great significance. As a vital factor of life, it brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for loving life, and helps us to create a promising future. (2

16、) However, in contemporary China, it has become a trend for Chinese people to hold different views about happiness and the way to enhance it. (3) In addition to material basis, the sense of happiness also concerns several other aspects. (4) Firstly, based on a recent survey, a majority of individual

17、s admit that they are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately, and their happiness depends more on their success in careers, friendship and love. (5) Secondly, a great many people claim that health is the key to their sense of happiness. It is health that enables them to build up a s

18、olid foundation for anything significant. (6) As a college student, I am convinced that never can money be equal to happiness. To enhance our sense of happiness, we should advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to enrich our knowledge, broaden our horizon and cultivate our ability. 【试题解析】 (1)开篇使用三个排比句从多个方面指明了幸福感的重要性。 (2)通过转折，引出在当代中国，人们关于幸福感以及如何提升幸福感有不同的看法。 (3)这句话使讨论重点转移到了幸福感的非物质层面。 (4)首先从外在方面论述了成功、友谊与爱情在幸福感方面的作用。 (5)其次说明了健康的重要性。 (6)引出自己的观点，并提出如何才能提升幸福感。 【知 识模块】 作文