[外语类试卷]大学英语四级（作文）模拟试卷5及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 5及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing (30 minutes) 1 On Updating Knowledge 1在现代社会，更新知识很重要 2更新知识的途径多种多样 3我的观点 2 Job Satisfaction 1工作满意度对个人很重要 2工作满意度包含哪些因素 3工作满意度如何实现 3 The Etiquette Course in University 1有些人建议大学开设礼仪课 2有些人认为没有必要 3我的看法 4 How to Increase Your Working Experience in the University? 1大学

2、期间，大学生有必要获得一些工作经验 2获得工作经验的途径 3我的观点 5 Traveling Craze 1旅游已经成为一种时尚 2旅游热出现的原因和存在的问题 3我的观点 大学英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 5答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing (30 minutes) 1 【正确答案】 On Updating Knowledge Living in the society of knowledge explosion, it is really important to update our knowledge. Only by doing so can we be able to

3、catch up with the rapid development of the society. Today we can easily get access to many ways of updating our knowledge. Firstly, school education is the most common and easiest one to acquire knowledge. However, it is not sufficient. Secondly, people can also attend private schools, have training

4、 classes and go to libraries to enlarge their horizons of knowledge. Whats more, with the development of the Internet, people can have training sessions online. As the English proverb goes, “It is never too late to learn. “ To update our knowledge is a lifelong process. As long as we are willing to

5、learn, we can find an effective way to do it. 【试题解析】 开篇点题，指出更新知识的重要性。 使用 Firstly， Secondly， Whats more 结构指出更新知识的几种方法。 horizons of knowledge“知识范围 ”； training session“培训班，辅导班 ”。 用谚语说明更新知识永无止境。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Job Satisfaction A job provides an individual with the necessary means to remain satisfied

6、 in almost every aspect of life such as leisure, health and social life. Several key factors are thought to be critical for an employee to achieve job satisfaction. A reasonable salary is of course the most important factor in job satisfaction. In many peoples minds, an ideal job is first of all a w

7、ell-paid one, which makes the employee feel that he is fairly rewarded for what he has done for the company. Another important element of job satisfaction is the nature of the job itself. Job satisfaction can never be achieved if the work is boring, or if the work is not suitable to the employees ed

8、ucation, skills and interests. Finally, job satisfaction is closely associated with being part of the decision-making process in the company as well as having opportunities for promotion. In conclusion, for an employee, finding the right job and trying to stay positive might be the first step toward

9、s achieving job fulfillment. 【试题解析】 开头概括工作满意度对个人很重要。 be critical forto“ 对 来说做 很重要 ”； be closely associated with “与 紧密相连 ”。 说明 “合理的薪水 ”是工作满意度的第一个因素。 用 Another important element引出了工作满意度的第二个因素。 用 Finally引出最后一个因素。 用 In conclusion作总结，简单陈述了实现工作满意度的方法。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 The Etiquette Course in University

10、Do you know the table manners when eating with westerners? Do you know the appropriate way to shake hands? Do you know the dress code in different situations? If you are confused with these questions, you may agree to the suggestion that the etiquette course should be offered in colleges and univers

11、ities. However, there are also people who hold the opinion that it will be a waste of both the schools money and the students time. They say that not all the graduates will get into the jobs involving international communication. Whats more, people can quickly grasp the skills when necessary and it

12、doesnt make sense to make it a full course. Personally, I would find it very helpful if I can learn about etiquette in colleges. I was brought up in a small town and never experienced any formal situations. I am sure learning all the rules and practicing them in advance can prepare me better for my

13、future job. 【试题解析】 连续几个问句形成排比，强化效果。 引出话题：有些人建议大学开设礼仪课。 用 However转折，点明反对方的观点。 给出反对的理由。 Whats more 表示递进，进一步给出论据。 给出个人看法。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 How to Increase Your Working Experience in the University? Certainly the academic knowledge is the foundation for future job, (2) but it is not the only thing tha

14、t students have to acquire. Some working experience is also indispensable for them to adapt themselves to the future occupations. How do college students gain working experience without the sacrifice of studies? Firstly, I think students should get mentally and physically prepared for the coming par

15、t-time jobs. Secondly, they should widen the scope of choices. Whenever mentioning the part-time jobs, students will inevitably think of the tutor job or working in the supermarkets. In fact, there are a lot of other choices, such as working as volunteers for some associations and writing articles f

16、or newspapers. In my opinion, gaining working experience while the students are studying in universities will benefit them throughout their life. 【试题解 析】 开篇为转入主题埋下伏笔。 用 but转折，表明了自己的观点。 indispensable“不可缺少的 ”； inevitably“不可避免地 ”； tutor“家教 ”。 用 Firstly， Secondly结构表达了获得工作经验的途径。 用 In my opinion结构引出自己的观点。

17、 【知识模块】 作文 5 【正确答案】 Traveling Craze In the past years, traveling has become a new fashion. Especially on Labor Day, National Day and Spring Festival holidays, numerous people swarm into the scenic spots around the country. The traveling craze can be attributed to the following reasons. Firstly, peop

18、les living conditions have been improved so greatly that many people can afford traveling. Secondly, the higher requirement for quality of life also makes traveling one of the most important amusement among common people. But the traveling craze comes up with many problems as well, such as the highe

19、r prices, the over-crowded scenic spots, the lower quality of services, etc. As for me, I think people should be fully aware of the disadvantages. Reasonable plans should be made before taking a trip. 【试题解析】 开篇点题：旅游近几年已经成为一种时尚。 swarm into“涌入 ”;scenic spots“名胜，风景区 ”。 指出出现旅游热的原因。用 Firstly， Secondly结构从两个方面进行阐述。 But一词笔锋一转，接着阐述了旅游热带来的问题。 用 As for me结构引出自己的观点。 【知识模块】 作文