[外语类试卷]雅思（写作）模拟试卷67及答案与解析.doc

1、雅思（写作）模拟试卷 67及答案与解析 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where r

2、elevant.Write at least 150 words. 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree o

3、r disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. 雅思（写作）模拟试卷 67答案与解析 1 【正确答案】 This model has been prepared by an examiner as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is

4、 just one example out of many possible approaches. The graph shows energy consumption in the US from 1980 to 2012, and projected consumption to 2030. Petrol and oil are the dominant fuel sources throughout this period, with 35 quadrillion (35q) units used in 1980, rising to 42q in 2012. Despite some

5、 initial fluctuation, from 1995 there was a steady increase. This is expected to continue, reaching 47q in 2030. Consumption of energy derived from natural gas and coal is similar over the period. From 20q and 15q respectively in 1980, gas showed an initial fall and coal a gradual increase, with the

6、 two fuels equal between 1985 and 1990. Consumption has fluctuated since 1990 but both now provide 24q. Coal is predicted to increase steadily to 31 q in 2030, whereas after 2014, gas will remain stable at 25q. In 1980, energy from nuclear, hydro- and solar/wind power was equal at only 4q. Nuclear h

7、as risen by 3q, and solar/wind by 2. After slight increases, hydropower has fallen back to the 1980 figure. It is expected to maintain this level until 2030, while the others should rise slightly after 2025. Overall, the US will continue to rely on fossil fuels, with sustainable and nuclear energy s

8、ources remaining relatively insignificant. 2 【正确答案】 This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 4 score. Here is the examiners comment:This answer expresses a position on the topic, but the ideas are not always clear because of repetition and a lack of development (the answer is unf

9、inished and underlength). The information is not organised coherently and it is difficult to follow a progression through the answer. Although some linking devices occur, substitution and referencing are not used, and connections between the ideas are unclear. The range of vocabulary is limited and

10、repetitive, and inappropriate word choices, e.g. small country language; invest, make it difficult for the reader to follow the meaning. There are some attempts to produce complex sentences and some grammatical structures are produced accurately, but frequent errors and omissions in basic sentence formation and in punctuation make the writing difficult to understand.