[外语类试卷]雅思（写作）模拟试卷68及答案与解析.doc

1、雅思（写作）模拟试卷 68及答案与解析 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of ti

2、me you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear_ 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Being a celebrity - such as a famous film sta

3、r or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. 雅思（写作）模拟试卷 68答案与解析 1 【正确答案】 This m

4、odel has been prepared by an examiner as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches. Dear Jennifer I am writing to request some unpaid leave next month. My parents 60th wedding anniversary is on March 21st, and they are planni

5、ng to celebrate this significant achievement with all their children and grandchildren. To do this, they have rented a house big enough to accommodate the whole family. To participate in this special occasion, I would need to be away from work for four days, from Monday 19th to Thursday 23rd. My sch

6、edule for that week is relatively light, apart from two meetings with clients. Netta would be able to attend these in my place, as she has had previous dealings with both companies and knows the relevant staff there. I have no other urgent work commitments at that time. I would be very grateful if y

7、ou could allow me this time. These few days are very important to my parents and the whole family, and it would be a way to thank them for all the support they have given me. Best wishes 2 【正确答案】 This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 6 score. Here is the examiners comment:This

8、 answer addresses all parts of the task, though the disadvantages of fame are covered more fully than the advantages. Main ideas are relevant, though the answer would be better if they were developed further. The conclusions drawn are at times repetitive. The organisation of ideas is coherent and so

9、me are linked effectively, but the openings of paragraphs 2, 3, 4 and 5 show some limitations. Paragraphs 2 and 3 do not develop a central topic well. Vocabulary is adequate for the task, although inappropriacies indicate that the range is restricted. However, the errors which occur in word choice and spelling do not prevent meaning being communicated. Simple and complex sentence forms are used, and although a number of inaccuracies are noticeable in structure and punctuation, communication is rarely affected.