[考研类试卷]考研英语（写作）模拟试卷28及答案与解析.doc

1、考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 28 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 Attend Parents Meeting with a Good Image Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended m

2、eaning, and 3) give your comments. 2 Company Is More Important than Gifts Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 3 Cant Talk Now Write an essay of 160-200 words bas

3、ed on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 4 Love Is Limitless Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended mea

4、ning, and 3) give your comments. 5 Dilemma Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. 考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 28 答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on

5、 the following information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 In the picture, a son is presenting a parents meeting notice to his father. In the meantime, he is asking his father to “polish shoes, use mousse, and best of all, drive a car to school“. His father is astounded by the succession of requests. The pictu

6、re offers us a lesson about the shocking vanity of some children at such a tender age, and peer pressure and social phenomenon like comparing may account for the vanity.As far as I am concerned, teachers and parents need to work together to prevent children from being affected by materialism. First,

7、 teachers should guide students not to compare with each other about their family status and wealth. Let students bear in mind that their business is to learn, regardless of their backgrounds. Second, parents are advised not to keep up with the Joneses, showing off their wealth or superiority over o

8、thers. Instead, they must teach their kids the importance of sharing things and offering assistance to each other.In short, children are the mirror of parents and teachers. To rid kids of vanity, adults around them must pay attention to their own words and deeds.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一名孩子向他的爸爸转达家长会的通知，同时提出了

9、各种做好表面功夫的要求。年纪小小就如此虚荣，成年人应该反思我们的虚荣心是否也毒害了年轻一代。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：反思孩子在这么小的年纪就如此虚荣的原因及解决办法。第二段提出个人看法：教师和家长应该共同合作，防止孩子们受物质主义的毒害。其一，教师应该引导学生不要互相攀比财富和社会地位。其二，家长应以身作则向孩子传达正确的价值观。第三段总结全文，发出呼吁。【知识模块】 大作文写作2 【正确答案】 In the picture, an elderly couple is at the dinner table, which is

10、filled with nice food. But their children are not present. Instead, they send various presents to compensate their absence. This picture vividly illustrates the loneliness many parents experience and calls on us to spend more quality time with our parents.We should realize that being with our parent

11、s means more to them than giving them gifts only. First, love is hard to be bought by money or traded with gifts. Gifts, though as a token of childrens love, resemble one another. But the chatting, sharing and laughing with parents are unique and could not be substituted by the run-of-mill gifts. Se

12、cond, accompanying parents could bring a strong sense of satisfaction and joy to them. Gifts are material comfort, while quality time is the spiritual one. As Maslow, a renowned psychologist, pointed out that the latter was more superior to the former. This is especially true for parents who are lon

13、ging for reunion with their children.In conclusion, parents enjoy their kids company and no gift can replace quality time.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻面了一对老年夫妇孤独吃团年饭的情景，孩子们送来了礼物，人却未能到场。可见，儿女的陪伴比物质的慰问更重要。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，指出图片的意图：呼吁孩子们花更多时间陪伴父母。第二段提出个人看法：陪在父母身边比送他们礼物更重要。其一，金钱或礼物难以换来爱。与父母共聚的感觉是独特的，无法礼物所替

14、代。其二，陪伴在父母身边能为他们带来满足感，以心理学家马斯洛的需要层次理论为佐证第三段总结全文：没有任何礼物可以替代孩子与父母相聚。【知识模块】 大作文写作3 【正确答案】 In the picture, a mother is trying to talk to her kid. But her kid, with his eyes fixed on the computer screen, waves no to her, saying: “Cant talk nowIm chatting.“ This picture vividly captures the irony in the I

15、nternet age: we refuse to communicate with people around us, and instead seek strangers online to talk with.It is sad that our interpersonal relationship has been weakened by the convenient and ubiquitous access to the Internet. Years ago, when we tried to communicate with our friends and relatives,

16、 we probably had to wait for months for the letters to arrive. The communication back then was infrequent but highly valued by us. Now, however, as the Internet has made the means of communication much easier, we do not take personal contact seriously. Driven by the curious desire for novelty, we ch

17、ange our online chatting buddies on daily or even hourly basis. Bit by bit, we find ourselves in a relation vacuum, estranging friends and relatives in reality while making friends who come easy and go easy in the virtual world.In conclusion, we need to be wary of the disruptive impact the Internet

18、does on our interpersonal relationship, and remember that nothing feels more real than the people around us.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一个年轻人拒绝与他妈妈交谈，因为他正忙于网聊。从年轻人的厚此薄彼看出，网络似乎拉远了我们与身边的家人和朋友之间的距离。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，指出网络拉远了我们与身边人的距离。第二段论述网络让我们的人际关系变得日益疏远。以前，我们要实现人与人之间的沟通需要等很长时间。现在网络使沟通变得迅时可达，但受猎奇心理的影响，

19、我们不停地变更网聊对象，少有深交的网友，同时也因此忽略了身边的亲戚朋友。第三段总结全文：我们应珍惜身边人，警惕网络给我们的人际关系所带来的负面影响。【知识模块】 大作文写作4 【正确答案】 In the picture, a hand stretches out from the Wen Chuan earthquake ruins, hoping to get help. Many helping hands are extended to it, among which are from PLA, the masses, medical professionals, foreigners

20、and armed police. This picture intends to highlight that love, the kindness of human nature, transcends borders in times of devastating crisis.In my opinion, love is the purest and the noblest form of human relation. First of all, love is not limited by borders, races or professions. Just like the p

21、eople who are giving helping hands, they show their love without considering who they are or where they are from. In addition, love gives us hope and strength when we are in the darkest time. Just as what is portrayed in the picture, the love extended to the earthquake victims in Wen Chuan has helpe

22、d them survive the calamity and rebuild their homes. This is also true in the Yu Shu earthquake and many other natural disasters.In short, human beings should be proud of being able to love and to be loved. It is a unique source of power that has worked and will continue to work wonder.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画

23、了众人帮助汶川灾区的情况，社会各界人士都伸出援手，体现了大爱无疆的思想。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，指出图片强调了面对灾难时人性的善良，大爱无疆。第二段提出个人看法：爱心是人类关系中最纯洁、最高尚的。其一，爱心不受国界、职业的限制。其二，在最黑暗的时候，爱心给我们带来希望和力量，以自然灾难为例加以说明。第三段总结全文：爱能创造奇迹，为人类能爱和能被爱感到骄傲。【知识模块】 大作文写作5 【正确答案】 In the picture, an elderly man is tripped over. A young man is thinking about wh

24、ether to help him up or not. His conscience urges him to go ahead, while his fear of being framed holds him back. The picture, in its simple yet meaningful way, draws its readers attention to the dilemma people face nowadays: sometimes the good Samaritans are wronged by people they have helped. To h

25、elp or not to help those in need is indeed a question.In my eyes, we should help those in need, but at the same time, we should also learn to protect ourselves. First, if there are people around, we could ask them to bear witness that we are the ones who offer a helping hand, not the ones responsibl

26、e for the accident. Second, if we are alone, we could record the whole process by using a cell phone, which would help clear our names when disputes occur. Of course, if we are really scared of being wronged, the least thing we could do is to call 110 for help. Under no circumstance should we walk a

27、way indifferently.In conclusion, we should be willing to help those in need, while at the same time be able to protect ourselves from being wronged.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一个年轻人在犹豫是否要去扶跌倒在地的老人。良知驱使他去扶，但是他又怕被冤枉，因此陷入两难境地。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，指出图片意在引发我们思考是否应该帮助有需要的人。第二段提出个人看法：我们应该帮助有需要的人，但同时，我们也要学会保护自己。其一，我们要学会让周围的人帮忙作证，证实我们是在帮助别人。其二，我们可以通过现代拍摄工具为自己留下证据。如果行不通，我们至少要打 110 帮忙求助，不能漠然地走开。第三段总结全文：乐于帮助别人的同时要保护好自己。【知识模块】 大作文写作