[考研类试卷]考研英语（写作）模拟试卷38及答案与解析.doc

1、考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 38 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 Teach Children in Accordance with Their Aptitude Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its

2、intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 2 Happy Teachers Day! Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 3 The Lighthouse of Knowledge Write an essay of 160-200 word

3、s based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 4 Expensive Kindergarten Education Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explai

4、n its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 5 Disparity between Ordinary Middle School and Key Middle School Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 考研英语（写作）模拟试

5、卷 38 答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 In the picture, a duck mother is requesting a monkey, who is the teacher, to teach her baby duck to climb a tree. The monkey feels startled and awkward. The picture vividly illustrates

6、 the importance of teaching kids according to their aptitude, without which any teaching would be thoughtless and futile.As far as I am concerned, I quite agree with this teaching principle and I think parents need to set realistic goals for their kids. There are times when parents overreach their k

7、ids and force them into learning something they are not interested in or good at. For instance, some parents spend a fortune to train their daughters to be a pianist. Sadly, “one mans meat is another mans poison“. If what the kids are really fond of is dancing, why not follow their interests and tra

8、in them to be excellent dancers?In conclusion, parents should not force kids to undertake an impossible mission, but rather be sensitive to their interests and create a favorable environment for them to flourish.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了鸭妈妈要求猴子老师教会小鸭爬树。鸭妈妈的要求可谓有点强人所难，忽视了因材施教的重要性。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要

9、描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：任何教学，如果没有考虑孩子的资质和才能，都可能是徒劳无功的。第二段提出个人看法：家长应为孩子制定现实的目标，因材施教才能更好地培育孩子。第三段总结全文：应该根据孩子的兴趣和潜能对孩子加以培养，而不是把大人的期望强加于孩子。【知识模块】 大作文写作2 【正确答案】 As can be seen in the picture, a group of people are presenting flowers to an elderly lady sitting on a wheel chair. They are all wishing the lady a “Happ

10、y Teachers Day“. This picture intends to convince us of the importance of paying tribute to teachers. We should never forget what our teachers have contributed to us even though we have graduated and become successful in our own profession.Personally, I think most teachers are respected and deserve

11、recognition. First, good teachers guide us to think independently. Take my literature teacher as an example. He never told us the answers to the discussion questions directly. Instead, he often asked a succession of questions according to our responses. Gradually, we developed our critical thinking

12、ability and until today I still benefit from his “interrogation“. Second, good teachers are our spiritual mentors. They know how to encourage us, motivate us, and make us confident. They are attentive listeners, empathetic with what we have been through, and always ready to help us out of dilemma.Al

13、l in all, we need to express our heartfelt gratitude to all the teachers who have shaped us, enlightened us and guided us.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一群成年人向坐在轮椅上的教师传递节日祝福的情景。尽管当年的学生都长大成才了，但是他们还是不忘师恩。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：即使我们已经毕业，事业有成了，也要不忘师恩。第二段提出个人看法：大部分的教师都值得我们尊敬和赞美。其一，教师引导学生独立思考，以教师训练学生

14、批判性思维为例加以说明。其二，好的教师是学生的精神导师，他们知道如何去鼓励学生，带动学生的积极性，让学生对自己充满信心。第三段，总结全文。【知识模块】 大作文写作3 【正确答案】 In the picture, two kids are rowing a boat across the sea in the dark. In the distance, a lighthouse is visible and a shaft of light is coming from it. The lighthouse is indicative of “school“ and the source of

15、 light “knowledge“, which is represented by a book held up in a teachers hands. This picture gives us graphic illustration of the importance of knowledge, which enlightens us when we are lost or in difficulties.As a student, I value knowledge and also believe that a knowledgeable person is often hap

16、pier and wiser. To begin with, knowledge keeps our mind open. A study in America shows that those who receive more education tend to be more patient and less prejudiced. They are more open to new ideas and are more likely to live a colorful and non-confrontational life. Besides, knowledge enables us

17、 to make judicious choices. There are times when we confront dilemmas, having no idea which to choose. If we refer to the information and knowledge relevant to the options, we could better weigh the pros and cons, and make a wise decision.Therefore, we should try our best to master all kinds of know

18、ledge, which can illuminate the direction for us.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了两名孩子在海上航行的情景。在远处的学校，老师高举的课本犹如灯塔，为他们照亮了航行的方向。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：当我们迷失或遇到困难时，知识能启迪我们。第二段提出个人看法：有知识的人通常更开心、也更睿智。其一，知识让我们思维开阔，以美国一项研究结果为例加以说明。其二，知识能让我们更好地权衡利弊，做出明智的选择。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 大作文写作4 【正确答案】 In the picture, a ￥

19、-shaped scale is featured. On the left side is kindergarten while the right side is university. The balance is tilted to the left side. This picture illustrates that kindergarten is more costly than college, and asks us to have a rethink of whether paying an exorbitant fee for kindergarten is justif

20、ied.In my view, high-priced kindergarten must be avoided and money should be better spent elsewhere. Despite the famous saying “you get what you pay for“, I rather doubt whether it is true for Chinese kindergartens. Earlier this year, a newspaper reported that a private kindergarten, with a monthly

21、day-care fee up to 5,800 RMB, served only plain and mediocre food. The so-called nutritious meals were nothing but plain porridge and diluted milk. If parents save the 5,800 RMB, they could buy various kinds of nutritious food for their kids.To sum up, high-cost kindergarten is more like a gimmick a

22、nd a placebo for parents who care for their kids too much. I believe parents had better allocate their resources for greater benefits.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了幼儿园成本和大学成本的对比。从图中的天秤来看，现在幼儿园的花费比大学的花费更加高昂。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：质疑上费用昂贵的幼儿园的合理性。第二段提出个人看法：花一大笔钱上幼儿园是不值得。以幼儿园收取昂贵的费用，但给小孩提供普通食物的新闻

23、报道为例，说明一分钱并不一定有一分货。第三段总结全文：高昂的幼儿园费用有时候只是父母的安慰剂，父母应将钱用在更有效益的地方。【知识模块】 大作文写作5 【正确答案】 In the picture, two schools are featured. On the left is an ordinary middle school with small and shabby buildings. On the right is a key middle school with high and glamorous buildings. Both of them are middle school

24、s intended for compulsory education. This picture vividly illustrates the great disparity between ordinary middle schools and key middle schools, with the latter receiving more and better resources than the former.In my opinion, this disparity should not be allowed in the stage of compulsory educati

25、on, because the purpose of compulsory education is to ensure equal education opportunity for school-age children and teenagers. If the gap exists, the Matthew effect will occurthe good get better and the poor get poorer. With better resources, the key middle schools will attract more excellent stude

26、nts and teachers, resulting in producing better graduates. On the contrary, given the poorer resources, the ordinary middle schools will end up with ordinary students and teachers, leading to producing ordinary graduates.To sum up, we should not label or make a distinction between ordinary middle sc

27、hools and key middle schools in the stage of compulsory education, for it violates the principle of educational equality.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了普通中学和重点中学之间的差别。重点中学明显比普通中学拥有更多的资源。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：普通中学和重点中学之间的差距巨大，教育资源分配不均。第二段提出个人看法：义务教育阶段，学校之间不应存在巨大的差距。义务教育的目的是要保证适龄儿童和青少年得到平等的教育机会，而划分普通中学和重点中学会引起“马太效应”(指强者愈强、弱者愈弱的现象)，使得重点中学越办越好，普通中学越办越糟糕。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 大作文写作