[考研类试卷]考研英语（写作）模拟试卷5及答案与解析.doc

1、考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 5 及答案与解析Part ADirections: Write a composition/letter of no less than 100 words on the following information. (10 points)1 You are studying at a Science and Engineering University where a great majority of students are afraid of making public speeches. You want the university to offer su

2、ch a course as an elective one for those who want to improve themselves in this aspect.1. You should write about 100 words.2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei“ instead.3. Do not write the address.2 Your university is going to hold a “ Chinese Dream“ themed art perfo

3、rmance and you are responsible for this activity. Write an invitation letter to your classmate Zhang Wei. Please specify the time, location, rehearsal information and express your wish for his attendance.1. You should write about 100 words.2. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter. Use

4、“Li Ming“ instead.3. Do not write the address.3 You are a student of Beijing Science and Engineering University. Write an application to get a scholarship for your overseas study in a university in America.1. You should write about 100 words.2. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter. Us

5、e “Li Ming“ instead.3. Do not write the address.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)4 Write an essay of 160 - 200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1. describe the drawing briefly, 2. interpret its intended me

6、aning, and then 3. give your comments. 5 Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1. describe the drawing briefly, 2. interpret its intended meaning, and then 3. give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. 考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 5 答案与解析Par

7、t ADirections: Write a composition/letter of no less than 100 words on the following information. (10 points)1 【正确答案】 Dear President,I am writing to suggest that a public speaking course be offered in our university. I am, like many others in our school, afraid of speaking in public and unable to ex

8、press myself well. So such a course is highly recommended.Actually, many universities at home and abroad have set the public speaking course as a compulsory or elective one. Numerous students have benefited a lot from it. This kind of course will not only endow us with a silver tongue but build up o

9、ur confidence in whatever we do.I would be most grateful if you could take my recommendation into consideration.Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei【试题解析】 本文要求向学校提议增设公共演讲课程，因此收信人应是学校的相关负责人，称谓可以使用 SirMadamProfessorPresident 等。信函的主体内容是提建议，但是除建议的具体内容外，像为何提出建议、想要取得的成效等相关信息也需阐述清楚。应用文写作中，投诉信的内容也涉及提出建议和改进措施，但要注意二者的区

10、别，建议信没有“投诉”之意，因此语气应礼貌周到。第一段：说明目的，阐述缘由。首先开门见山，表明信件的意图建议增设演讲课程，接着说明原因如学生害怕在公众面前说话，不善自我表达等。第二段：晓之以理，说明益处。主要论述该课程的必要性和重要性。可先通过其他学校开设该类课程取得的效果从侧面说明该课程的必要性，再从一至两个方面具体阐明该课程的益处。第三段：再次点题，表示期待。表达自己希望建议被采纳及感激的心情。【知识模块】 应用文写作2 【正确答案】 Dear Zhang Wei,Our university is going to hold a “Chinese Dream“ themed art pe

11、rformance at the assembly hall. As a versatile person who is enthusiastic in all kinds of activities, you are invited to participate in the performance and present your talents.The activity will begin at eight oclock in the evening on January 15th. With no limitations on the performance content and

12、form, you can bring your talents and creativity into full play. The hall will remain open for rehearsal during this month. But please check the schedules of other rehearsals and avoid time conflicts.We look forward to your participation and your amazing performance.Yours sincerely, Li Ming【试题解析】 阅读指

13、令要求可知，本文属于邀请类信函，要求考生向自己的同学张伟发出邀约，请他参加即将举办的文艺汇演。邀请信中可对本次活动的性质、内容、举办时间和地点等进行简要介绍。鉴于写信人与收信人是同学，写作时不宜使用过于正式的语言，但语气应诚恳真切。此外，信件的称谓可直接使用“Zhang Wei”，以符合二人的同学关系。第一段：点明主题，发出邀约。可先简要介绍此次汇演，然后邀请张伟前来参加，以展示他的才艺。第二段：介绍细节，提醒注意。详细介绍本次汇演的时间、要求以及其他相关注意事宜。第三段：再次点题，表达期盼。再次点明写信的目的，并表达自己对张伟精彩演出的期待。【知识模块】 应用文写作3 【正确答案】 Dear

14、 Sir,I would like to apply for one of the scholarships your department may be specifically offering to students from other countries. Would you please send me the necessary application forms and any further details about the scholarships?I am a student in Beijing Science and Engineering University.

15、I major in microelectronics engineering, having done some research work during my study years. I hope to further my study and continue to do my research work if I succeed in obtaining the engineering scholarship.Enclosed please find two letters of recommendation and my transcript.Thank you for your

16、consideration. I look forward to your reply.Respectfully yours, Li Ming【试题解析】 应用类作文因其实用性较强，通常要求语言简明，信息具体，因此明确指令要求是写好此类作文的关键。此指令要求是关于申请留学奖学金写一封申请信，则所需的基本信息包括：你的学校、专业、申请理由、能力证明等。而由于此类应用文篇幅有限但要求信息完整，因此需要对这些信息加以整合，详略得当地呈献给读者。此外，既然是奖学金申请，那么收信人应该是学校的相关负责人，写作时，语气应当礼貌谦恭。第一段：开门见山，点明主题。先指出该信件是为申请留学奖学金而写，接着可咨询

17、相关信息或所需材料。第二段：自我介绍，证明能力。简要介绍自己的学校、专业(要符合申请的基本要求)等，并叙述自己在校的成绩或收获，最好是能体现自我能力的相关资料，以增加申请的成功几率。还可提供具体的成绩证明或推荐信(这一信息也可另起一段，以免信息过于冗杂，并增加材料的醒目度)。第三段：感谢考虑，期盼回复。表达自己对阅信人的感谢以及希望得到回复的心情。【知识模块】 应用文写作Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)4 【正确答案】 The agi

18、ng population in China is posing unprecedented challenges to our medical and health industry. As is shown in the chart above, with the number of people aged 60 or above constantly rising, the governments spending on healthcare has increased accordingly, yet it hardly kept up with the rapidly aging p

19、opulation, especially in the latest three years.Numerous influences on this situation can be found, but the primary ones are as follows. For one thing, the medical system in China is not sound enough, unable to treat the country with the worlds largest population, a massive cohort that is rapidly ag

20、ing. For another, quite a few elderly people are plagued by chronic illnesses with high treatment costs thus, limited medical subsidies cannot meet their needs and ensure them appropriate medical treatments.To be sure, the future is not all rosy. But we are now knowledgeable enough to reduce the com

21、ing risks, such as formulating a series of policies concerning the pricing and insurance reimbursement of drugs, to ease the burden on patients. Additionally, the standards of basic medical insurance and governmental medical subsidies need to be raised. And the final point is that the reforms of pub

22、lic hospitals should be carried forward, in order to provide safe, effective, convenient and affordable medical and health care services for the elderly.【试题解析】 分析图表数据可知，近十年来，我国老龄人口的数量在逐年递增。按照国际惯例，当某一国家 60 岁以上人口占人口总数的 10，或 65 岁以上人口占人口总数的 7时，该国即处于老龄化社会。毫无疑问，中国已然迈人了老龄化社会的行列。如图所示，虽然政府不断加大医疗卫生支出，但仍然无法赶上人

23、口老龄化的步伐，且近三年来，该情况尤为明显。这意味着有一大批老年人无法获得充分的医疗保障。文章主题由此确立。行文时，考生可先分析这一现状的严重性，然后揭示其背后的原因并给出相应的解决措施。第一段：点明主题，描述图表。具体描述时，对有效数据进行整合并提炼总结出其中所反映的社会问题即可，无需详述所有数据。第二段：充分延展，分析原因。先以过渡句承上启下，表明本段的中心是阐述原因。接着可从 2 至 3 个方面分析引发老龄化医疗问题的原因，如人口基数庞大、老龄化程度加深、医疗经费有限等。第三段：总结评论。针对老龄化医疗问题提出相应的解决措施。【知识模块】 短文写作5 【正确答案】 From the ch

24、art given above, it can be seen that some demographic changes, whether in urban or rural areas of the city, have taken place in the past five years. What is particularly striking is that, in 2014, the population in urban areas of the city has increased roughly by 30,000, while that in rural areas ha

25、s increased approximately by 10,000, experiencing a slow growth.There are several driving forces behind this trend. One rational explanation for this disparity is that the bulk of labor forces flood into large cities, such as Beijing, Shanghai and Guangzhou, to seek more working opportunities. An in

26、vestigation conducted by an expert group reveals that 70% of the youngsters from the countryside claim that they yearn for dwelling in large cities. Another notable fact is the acceleration of Chinas urbanization process, which is a lure for the agricultural population. Last but not least, the syste

27、matic antinomy should share part of the blame.Given the arguments above, in the next few years, the city will also witness a bigger, faster and imbalanced population growth. However, we ought not to be panic, but to be confident in that this tendency bestows more benefits on rural citizens, boosts e

28、conomic growth and even pushes the society forward.【试题解析】 图表类作文考查考生对图表中数据的分析、归纳能力。图中的横坐标为年份，纵坐标为增长人数。分析图表可知，2010 年至 20014 年，农村居民人口和城镇居民人口的增加数量均在逐年递增，且城镇居民人口的增长速度远高于农村居民人口的增长速度。第一段：描述图表，分析数据。先总述图表所反映的现象该市农村和城镇居民人口发生了变化；再分别对图表中农村居民人口和城镇居民人口的增加数量进行描述。需注意图表中与各个年份对应的具体数值无需一一列出。第二段：充分延展，分析原因。可从两到三个方面分析城乡人口差距以及该差距逐渐变大的原因。论述时需详略得当，可由略到详或由详到略。也可在论述中辅以相关报道或调查结果，使论据充实有力。第三段：总结全文，展望未来。在预测该市人口增长趋势的同时，呼吁人们对未来充满信心。【知识模块】 短文写作