[考研类试卷]考研英语（写作）模拟试卷71及答案与解析.doc

1、考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 71 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) support you

2、r view with an example/examples. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 2 Study the following photos carefully and write an essay in which you should 1) describe the photos briefly, 2) interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and then 3) give your point of view. You should

3、write 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 3 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 4 Study th

4、e following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should 1) describe the drawing, 2) interpret its meaning, and 3) support your view with examples. You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 71 答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 word

5、s based on the following information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 As can be seen from the cartoon, different persons hold different views towards one thing. In the picture, the striker doesnt believe himself and magnifies that the chance of a successful shoot is slim. While the goal-keeper simply thinks in

6、a different way that he can t defend the goal successfully.There is no doubt that the cartoonist wants to emphasize the importance of self-confidence in our daily life. With the rapid development of global economy, competition is becoming increasingly fierce in all walks of society, imposing tremend

7、ous pressure on all individuals. Subjective mental status may result in distinction in personal views, just as the goal-keeper and the striker in the drawing. Facing different challenges and difficulties, we should hold enough self-confidence and optimism for better survival and more achievements. S

8、uppose one always doubts his or her ability when trying something, he or she is supposed to have little chance to win. Therefore, it is necessary to embrace the strong faith that we can fulfill our task and make a distinction.From my perspective, we should keep positive and optimistic in the face of

9、 difficulties and any other situations. Only in this way can we have more chances to win during our limited lifetime.【试题解析】 本文分为三段：第一段简要描述了两张图画的内容。第二段将图画信息联系到社会现实，指出图画背后所代表的社会现象，并且对这种社会现象进行了深入分析。第三段提出自己的观点，全文布局合理紧凑，主题突出，要点明确。【知识模块】 短文写作2 【正确答案】 There are two pictures: the first is a photo of a man s

10、 face on which the name of Beckham can be seen; in the second picture we can see a man in a barbershop, his hair being done in Beckham s hair style, costing 300 yuan.Obviously, the two persons are fans of Beckham. These pictures make me ponder: Why does this phenomenon appear? Nowadays, more and mor

11、e people are influenced by celebrities, and there are many fans who run after and imitate themfilm stars, athletic stars, even super-girl singers. Firstly, they do so because they admire them and want to obtain their fame and reputation. Secondly, there is no denying the fact that some people do thi

12、s out of pure adoration, yet, some just want to become wealthy overnight without hard work, and sweat, just effortlessly.Anyway, I think young people must know that famous people get their reputation because they have made great contribution to our societyfor example Liu Xiang. Wed better turn our a

13、dmiration into practical action to learn from them so that we can make even greater contribution to our motherland in the future.【试题解析】 范文结构清晰，内容安排有序。第一段对图画进行了简洁生动地描述：三个儿子和一个女儿正在把他们的老父亲当球踢，各尽所能不让父亲进自己的“门”。第二段指出画面反映出来的社会问题：子女推卸赡养老人的义务。第三段发人深省，呼吁人们应该继续传承和发扬传统美德，照顾老年人。【知识模块】 短文写作3 【正确答案】 As is shown in

14、 the picture, there are four siblings: three sons and one daughter in the four corners of the picture, each keeping a goal net seriously as goalkeeper. Their old father crouches like a football and rolls all about on the ground, being kicked around by his children.This picture indicates the current

15、deteriorating old-caring circumstance: many grown-up children refuse to provide for their aged parents, regarding them as heavy burdens; those miserable senior citizens have no strength to fight for their rights and benefits, only to be maltreated by their children that have been raised by their own

16、 hands and sweats.This picture is thought-provoking to me. I feel sorry for those parents who have spent half of their lives breeding their children but at last become the deserted. People should reflect on this issue and on what has happened to our ethical values including the traditional filial du

17、ty. We should enhance our education on the traditional virtue and fight against the morbid social backdrop. Its time that our traditional value should be restored and the senior citizens be taken good care of.【试题解析】 本文结构清晰，表达连贯。首段采用先人物后背景的顺序描写了图画的主要信息。第二段揭示了图画的主旨，论述了图画反映的社会问题。第三段用居里夫人发现镭和农村改革的两个具体事例

18、层层展开论证，清晰严谨。全文主题思想鲜明，准确达意，词汇量丰富。【知识模块】 短文写作4 【正确答案】 As the picture given above depicts, a runner, summoning up his last ounce of strength, is dashing to the finishing line, hot sweat rolling from his forehead. He is overjoyed to have won the race. Besides, on both sides of the finishing line are two

19、 big words in Chinese: Start and Finish.What does the drawing intend to tell us? In my opinion, the information it conveys is what one has achieved so far is merely a new staring point for what he is going to do next. Owing to the fiercer competition and the quickening pace of life, people must keep

20、 striving for a higher goal. Once he stops or lags behind others, he will be eliminated by this competitive world.There are a lot of examples to support my view. The most obvious one is the discovery of the radioactive element radium, which means the successful result of Curie s research work. Yet i

21、t is just a good beginning of the scientific study on atomic energy. Lets take another example to illustrate the view. We have achieved great success in rural reforms, which has greatly raised the living standards of farmers in the country. But it serves only as the starting point for pushing forwar

22、d rural reforms in a comprehensive way. In conclusion, it seems obvious that the finish of a thing signifies a new start of another one.【试题解析】 文章第一段分别描述了两幅图画展现的不同场景，比较了花朵在移出温室前后面对暴风雨时的不同遭遇。第二段作者就联系了现实来做深层剖析，即被宠坏的孩子们正如温室中的花朵，过度保护反而会造成孩子们的脆弱，并用Since 引出对原因的进一步阐述。最后，文章用 There is an old saying 做生动总结，鼓励家长们让孩子学会自己奋斗。全文联系现实，立意准确，结构及逻辑清晰，俗语引用得恰到好处。【知识模块】 短文写作