[考研类试卷]考研英语（写作）模拟试卷72及答案与解析.doc

1、考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 72 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should 1) describe the set of drawings, interpret its meaning, and 2) point out its implications in o

2、ur life. You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 2 Study the following picture carefully and write an essay entitled “CulturesNational and International“. In the essay you should 1) describe the picture and interpret its meaning, and 2) give your comment on the phenome

3、non. You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 3 Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it. There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to

4、 1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below, 2) give a specific example, and 3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love. You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 4 A Study the following two pictures carefully and write an essay of at l

5、east 150 words. B Your essay must be written neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points) C Your essay should meet the requirements below: 1. Describe the pictures. 2. Deduce the purpose of the painter in the pictures. 3. Suggest counter-measures. 考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 72 答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 16

6、0-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 The picture above depicts a flower sheltered under a greenhouse, safe and sound from the heavy rain. The next picture shows the same flower under a different condition with no shelter exposed to the storm and lightening. And the flo

7、wer withers with peddles falling on the ground.These pictures remind me of the spoiled kids in todays society. Nowadays parents pay too much attention on their children and provide all that the children ask for without restraints, which results in the appearance of many “little princes“ and “little

8、princesses“. These pictures make us aware that if we over-protect the children, they will be too fragile to the danger and difficulties outside. Since parents can not accompany their children through their life, children must be given the opportunity to be independent and self-responsible, or the “o

9、ver-love“ will finally harm the children.There is an old saying, “spare the rod and spoil the child“. Now it is high time that parents brought their children out of the greenhouse and let them fight on their own.【试题解析】 本文首段简要地描述了图画的客观信息，并加了作者的主观设想。次段阐述其含义，指出图中女孩代表的是东西方文化的融合，中国和世界的交流越来越频繁、紧密。末段给出评论，指

10、出这一趋势是有利的，跨文化交流是世界的大趋势。在描绘图画时，考生可以增加亮点词汇，如发带 ribbon、少数民族minority group、妇女饰品 accessories 等。【知识模块】 短文写作2 【正确答案】 At first sight of the picture, my eyes are brightened by the pretty girl, beaming with a simile on her face. She is a typical American girl, but she dresses in our traditional Chinese costum

11、e. It seems that the girl is very proud of the Chinese costume.It goes without saying that the picture indicates that a culture of one nation may become international, which is beneficial to all human beings. Actually the girl stands for two different culturesnational and international cultures. Her

12、 charming smile is the essential touch of the whole picture, which symbolizes the harmonious blending of the two cultures. With economic globalization, the blending of different cultures has become a necessary trend of the times. On the one hand, a large number of people from different countries hav

13、e been pouring into China. On the other hand, Chinese people are also exposed to different foreign cultures when they go abroad or when more foreign people come to China. In this way, people from various nations in the world will be able to acquire better understanding of each other.As far as I am c

14、oncerned, this phenomenon is good to all of us. It is an effective way to achieve efficient cross-cultural communication and promote world peace and prosperity.【试题解析】 按题目要求，本文分三段成文。第一段写了对于图画象征意义的理解，重申爱是黑暗中的一盏灯。第二段提到了希望工程，是一个与图画所表达的道理相匹配的典型事例。第三段提出了自己的建议，最后以一个长句子做了较强的结尾。全文段落层次清晰，语言表达自然流畅，词汇使用丰富，长短句结合

15、。【知识模块】 短文写作3 【正确答案】 This picture shows a light in the darkness. I think the oil lamp stands for the love and help, and the darkness is the troubles and the hard time we have. The darker the room is, the brighter the light looks. It is true that the harder the situation is, the more valuable love is

16、.One good example to illustrate this love is the “Hope Project“. As we all know, although our economy is much better than that years ago, a great gap still remains between the east and the west regions, and between large cities and rural areas. Thousands of poor children are forced to quit school be

17、cause of poverty. All works of life have worried about this situation. “Hope Project“, which is proposed just in time, calls for people to show their love for those children unable to go to school, and tens of thousands of people have lent their hands without asking for any return.The best way to sh

18、ow love, I think, is to stay beside others when they are in trouble. Just as the picture shows, love is most needed when it is dark and those who stand by you when you are in trouble are the most precious. So, when you see others in a dilemma, do not flee or stand by. You should give him or her a ha

19、nd, and you will also be illuminated by your virtue.【试题解析】 按照试题的三条要求可顺理成章地将短文分成三个自然段。第一段抓住要点，在全面理解作者创作意图的基础上描述图画内容。第二段先在第二句点出主题 our ways of thinking and doing thingsare unreasonable and dangerous，接着具体到人类的索取要充分考虑环境的承载能力。第三段结合提纲集中讨论应对的措施，如政府制定法律和作者呼吁公众改变错误观念等。段末表明了作者的美好愿望。【知识模块】 短文写作4 【正确答案】 These two

20、 pictures display a sharp contrast: there were a lot of fish with one fishing boat in the sea in 1900 while the situation was just the opposite in 1995. Obviously, the fishing industry has been facing a serious problem, with all the ocean resources being exhausted so quickly.The painter is not exagg

21、erating or joking about commercial fishing. On the contrary, he is seriously warning us that our ways of thinking and doing things are unreasonable and dangerous. Our resources are limited and our ecosystem needs careful consideration and protection. If we only care about the present, we will suffer

22、 in the future. Its just like building friendship and saving money: the more you put into it, the more you can get; the more you take out, the less it is left.Measures should be taken if such disappointing situation is to be avoided. I suggest that government make laws and regulations to guide and s

23、upervise people s fishing activity, punishing those who only care about their own interest and bring harm to others and the environment. I also appeal to the public that money is not the only thing we should pursue and fish is not the only food we can eat. Whether for the benefit of the human race or for the interest of our own, we should show concern for others and make plans for the future. Only in this way can we live happily and affluently.【知识模块】 短文写作