1、健康生活,【话题解读】在日常生活中，大家经常谈论到有关健康的话题，在中考作文中也不时出现此类话题。针对此话题的文章通常具有说明和议论的性质，有时涉及观点的表达，有时是事理分析。介绍健康生活的内容通常包括：什么是健康的生活方式，如何获得健康和保持健康(一般可从饮食、运动、睡眠、情绪等方面来介绍)。,基础篇,【实例讲解】十，一百，一千，一万即使有再多的零，没有了一，一切都归为零。在我们的生活中，如果没有了健康，财富、地位一切也都失去了意义。请以“Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，参照图表的信息，完成文章。,注意： 1. 书写清晰、字迹工整；行文流畅、语句通顺； 2. 词数：80 词左
2、右； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。,Get enough sleep,Eat healthy food,Ways to Keep Healthy,Do exercise,Ways to Keep Healthy _ _ _,【分析】该书面表达任务是命题写作。根据所给题目可知要介绍保持健康的一些方法，再根据图表提示可知要从以下几个方面入手：睡眠、运动和饮食。要注意的是图表中省略号代表的内容是要考生补充发挥的部分，一定要在介绍完前三项之后，再罗列出至少一条与前三项不同的方法。,文章是说明文，应以一般现在时态为主。写作时要介绍清楚每种方法，并注意各方法间的衔接，可以使用firstly
3、, secondly, lastly等连接词。,【标准范文】 Ways to Keep HealthyWe all know it is very important to keep healthy. Here are some ways to keep healthy.Firstly, we must eat healthy food. Breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy.,And remember to eat more fruit and vegetables. Secondly, its necessary for us to do e
4、xercise. It helps to keep us active and strong. Thirdly, never stay up late. If we cant get enough sleep, the whole body will work slowly. Lastly, learning to reduce stress is also important for our health.,提高篇,【高分突破】 Ways to Keep HealthyHealth is wealth. Here is some advice on how to keep healthy.F
5、irstly, we should eat healthy food. Its necessary to eat enough fresh vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. Having breakfast is very important because it can provide us with energy. Secondly,doing exercise regularly is a good way to make us healthy. Remember not to sit for too long. Thirdly, af
6、ter a days work or study, enough sleep is necessary. And we shouldnt stay up late. Besides, keeping the balance between study and play can also help us stay healthy.Follow the advice, and we will be healthy.,【高分揭秘】1. 文章段落层次清晰，时态使用正确，连接词的使用使文章富有条理性和逻辑性。2. 作者在开篇用了Health is wealth，该比喻简明、形象地表明了健康的重要性。,3
7、. 作者以Follow the advice, and we will be healthy 结尾，与首段内容呼应，使文章在结构和内容上更加完整。 4. 作者使用了一些地道的表达，如instead of, provide . with ., keeping the balance between .等，这为文章增色不少。,【素材积累】1. 词汇疾病：toothache, flu, fever, high blood pressure, heart disease, overweight, have a cold不健康的生活方式：eat junk food, stay up, take litt
8、le exercise, couch potato,健康的生活方式：have a balanced diet, take regular exercise, go to bed early, have meals on time,2. 句子 As a matter of fact, it is health that counts. We can benefit a lot from eating all kinds of healthy food. As is known to us all, health is of great importance to us.,Washing hands often can be a good way to protect us from the diseases. Playing computer games not only takes much time but also does harm to health. Smoking is dangerous because it leads to many diseases like cancer and heart disease.,
