1、Unit 6 An old man tried to movethe mountains.,单元主题写作六,Unit 6 An old man tried to move the mountains.,单元主题写作六,话题分析,本单元的话题是“Legends and stories”。故事类的书面表达是我们在初中阶段经常接触到的一种作文类型。在写故事类的书面表达时，要注意人物、地点、事件以及故事发展的线索等。,单元主题写作六,典 型 例 题,假如你是江华，下周一你所在的班级将举行英语课外阅读交流会。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向同学们介绍“The Famous RabbitTortoi
2、se Race”这个故事。,单元主题写作六,要求： 1文章必须包含表格中所提供的信息，可适当发挥； 2文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3词数：90词左右(开头已写好，不计入总词数)。 The Famous RabbitTortoise Race We all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise. _ _,单元主题写作六,思 路 点 拨,本文属于记叙文，要求写一篇关于龟兔赛跑的故事。可以按照如下思路进行： 1开头引起下文。可以用“We all know that the rabbit lost the fir
3、st race against the tortoise.”引起下文。 2具体描述每次比赛的过程以及比赛结果。,单元主题写作六,3描述自己的感受：I have learned that with teamwork all of us can achieve success.,素材积累,常用词汇 1擅长跑步 _ 2团队合作 _ 3反对，对抗 _ 4第一场比赛 _ 5轮流 _ 6获胜，赢 _,be good at running,teamwork,against,the first race,单元主题写作六,take turns,win,7失败，失去 _ 8最终 _ 9放弃 _ 10尽某人最大努力
4、做某事 _ 11继续做某事 _ 12坚持做某事 _ 13获得成功 _,lose,at last/in the end/finally,give up,try/do ones best to do sth.,单元主题写作六,continue to do sth./continue doing sth.,keep on doing sth.,achieve success,单元主题写作六,常用句子 1I was attracted by her story. 我被她的故事吸引了。 2This story reminds me of my childhood. 这个故事让我想起了我的童年。 3Hav
5、e you heard of the story of The RabbitTortoise Race? 你听说过龟兔赛跑的故事吗？ 4The story is so interesting that everybody loves it. 这个故事如此有趣，以至于每个人都喜欢它。,单元主题写作六,The Famous RabbitTortoise RaceWe all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise. After that the rabbit decided to have a second rac
6、e. This time he didnt sleep. Since he was good at running, he won the race. However, the tortoise didnt give up. He had a third race with the rabbit. There was a river on the way. The tortoise swam across it quickly and won. The story does not end here. In the last race, they took turns to put each
7、other on the back and reached the finishing line together. From the story I have learned with teamwork all of us can achieve success.,高分模板,单元主题写作六,名师点评,since引导原因状语从句，交代了兔子获胜的原因。 用however表转折，说明事情一波三折，突出乌龟不放弃的精神。 这句有承上启下的作用，引出文章的主题：合作会带来双赢。,小试身手,单元主题写作六,下面六幅图描述的是今天早晨发生的一件事。假设你是图中的小男孩，请用英语写一篇日记，记叙事件发生的
8、经过。 要求： 1.语句规范、通顺，情节合理、完整。 2写作过程中要适当使用对话，使描述更加生动、形象。 3词数：80100词。 4文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。,单元主题写作六,单元主题写作六,One possible version：Monday, June 13 This morning Mom didnt go to work and she wanted to do some washing at home. First, she put some dirty clothes into the washing machine, and then she went back to
9、the bedroom to look for other dirty clothes with its door open. At that moment, my pet cat ran out of the bedroom happily and rushed into the washing machine. When Mom returned, she didnt notice the cat, and she closed the door of the washing machine. Just then, I found a dirty Tshirt. “Mom, could you please help me wash my Tshirt？” “Of course, my dear.” Mom opened the door. Suddenly, my pet cat rushed out of the washing machine. Mom and I were both shocked. My God! What would happen if I didnt give Mom the Tshirt?,
