1、,Why cant the bear go through the revolving door?,The Revolving Door,李仕才,Proof Reading,Teaching Objectives,1）To obtain the ability of identifying errors in an essay and revising the discouse.(语篇)识别错误并正确校正语篇的能力 2）To acquire the comprehensive(综合的) application of the English knowledge.综合运用英语知识的能力,2012-
2、2016年NMET短文改错题测试点的分布情况：,考情分析,考题要求假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 允许修改只10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。,1. I can go to home now.2. I like playing piano.3. I am fond at English
3、.,the,Wrong word （错词）,Missing word （缺词）,of,Unnecessary Word（多词）,短文改错格式,How to do it？,Any skills？,Any rules？,三 四 五 六,三步法,“四不改”原则,标点符号不改.大小写不改.词序错误不改.单词拼写不改.,“五改动”原则,忠实于原文原则(不可改变原文的意思),一对一原则(一错一词),错误以改动最少为原则,虚词以添加或者删除为原则,实词以改变形式为原则, verb noun adj&adv pronoun preposition art. &conj.,专项训练,1.So far, he m
4、ade a living by picking up wastes.2. You are not permit to take them out.,has,permitted,动词,3.Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish.,wishes,4. Seeing from the top of the mountain, the city looks beautiful.,Seen,动词小结：1.注意时态 2.注意语态 3.注意主谓一致 4.注意非谓语动词,1.Your knowledges of Greece can help the wholecl
5、ass.2. When you fail, you should never lose hearts.,_,heart,knowledge,名词,名词小结,1.名词单、复数形式的用法；2. 注意固定搭配中名词的用法。,1.The bad news made us feel sadly.2.The children learn to read and write; they play games as good. 3.I remember my grandfather very much.,形容词和副词,sad,well,well,形容词和副词小结,修饰名词做定语，系动词后做表语,以及部分动词后
6、做宾语补足语要用形容词； 修饰动词，形容词，副词，或整个句子用副词； 注意形近词组的辨析,1.Knowing is one thing; doing is other. 2.I also enjoyed the days when we spent together.,代 词,another,(that/which/或去掉),3.On the first day of Camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone.,me,人称代词主格和宾格的使用 2. 反身代词oneself 的使用 3. 指示代词it，this, these等的使
7、用. 4. 疑问代词，连接代词，关系代词（who, whom, which, that, whose, what )的使用,代词小结,1.Dont get into the habit at smoking. 2.The film star is very popular with the mainland.,介 词,of,in,主要考查固定短语，固定介词的搭配。,如：at + 时间点 ;in + 时间段;on + 具体的某日或某日的早、午、晚等 at 3 oclock in the afternoon on May 1st on the morning of May 13th,介词小结,1.
8、At a very beginning, I choose a play and actors. 2.On one hand the dress is expensive; on an other hand, it is of poor quality.,_,the,_,the,冠词,1.Though it was cold, but he went out without a hat. 2.He likes sports, but I like music. 3.Hurry up, and youll be late for school.,_,while,_,or,连词,. 冠词a, an
9、和the的用法. 并列连词but，and，or, so和从属连词although的用法,冠词连词小结,动词形，名词数 还要注意形和副 代词格，细领悟 介词短语常常出 冠词连词常关顾,六口诀,三步法 四不改 五改动 六句诀,Drills,At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Ji
10、m was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights was shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily.,At Christmas Eve, Jim went with hisfather to cho
11、ose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!They put them in the corner of the sitting,_,On,_,chose,_,tall,_,it,动词形（时态）,介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住,还要注意形和副,代词格，细领悟,room. Jim was covered it with a lot ofChristmas light. The sitting room lookedreally beautifully at the moment.
12、 There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmastree lights was shinning brightly. Jim and hisparents singing and dancing happily.,_,lights,_,beautiful,_,and,were,were,动词形（语态),还要注意形和副,动词形（缺be动词）,名词数,冠词连词常光顾,动词形（主谓一致）,_,Self-assessment,What have you learnt from this lesson?,小 结,做短文改错应采取
13、,三步法 四不改 五改动 六句诀,短文改错口诀,动 词 形,名 词 数, 还 要 注 意 形 和 副; 非 谓 语,细 辩 别, 代 词 格,细 领 悟; 介 词 短 语 常 常 考, 习 惯 用 法 要 记 住; 句 子 成 分 多 分 析, 逻 辑 错 误 须 关 注, 冠 词 连 词 常 光 顾.,Homework,When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was onl
14、y one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money.He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.,Thank you! Bye!,
