1、17 步成文第六步打磨开头和结尾， “与众不同”把分添近三年高考英语全国卷的书面表达以应用文为主，一般要求写一封书信，书信一般有自己专门的开头格式。但固有的、模式化的开头会让阅卷老师多读生厌、疲惫不堪，因此要想给阅卷老师留下好的第一印象，就得有一个引人入胜、新颖别致的开头，这能够激发阅卷老师的兴趣，博得好感。有了一个好的开头，若再加上一个画龙点睛的结尾，那就真可谓锦上添花，无可挑剔了。 “头好一半文” “尾好更添韵”说的就是开头和结尾的重要性。一、 “四档” “五档”差在哪典例感悟 (2017全国卷)假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友 Leslie 学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容
2、包括：1时间和地点； 2.内容：学习唐诗； 3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。“冤屈的”四档作文(得分 17 分) 升格后的五档作文(得分 23 分)Dear Leslie，Ive decided to teach you Tang poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours. Tang poetry is a symbol of Chinese traditional literature and plays an
3、 important part in Chinese culture, so its necessary for you to have a good knowledge of it. Besides, in order to learn Tang poetry well, youd better get some information about Tang Dynasty before class.Looking forward to your earliest reply.Yours，Li HuaDear Leslie，I am writing to tell you my plan f
4、or the coming Chinese lesson.Ive decided to teach you Tang poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours. Tang poetry is a symbol of Chinese traditional literature and plays an important part in Chinese culture, so its necessary for you to have a good knowledge of it.
5、 Besides, in order to learn Tang poetry well, youd better get some information about Tang Dynasty before class.Would you tell me if its convenient for you? Furthermore, when you meet with some puzzling questions, dont hesitate to turn to me.Yours，Li Hua名师左栏的文章运用了定语从句、并列句结构等，a symbol of, play an impo
6、rtant part in, have a good knowledge of 的应用恰到好处，总体是一篇不错的作文。但2点评美中不足的是缺少了文章开头的点题和恰当的结尾，不仅使得文章读起来稍欠流畅，而且未达到词数要求。右栏的作文加上开头和改编了结尾使得文章总体上得到了升华，并且达到了词数要求，从而上升了一个档次，从四档跨入了五档。二、如何由“四档”升“五档”(一)应用文常见开头段的写法开门见山应用文的特点是开门见山，用简洁的语言引出文章的主题，使读者清楚文章要表达什么内容，常用的开头有：求职信Im writing to apply for the position of . Learning
7、 from ., Id like to apply for the post .(2018浙江高考)Learning that our English Association needs some volunteers to meet the foreign students visiting our school, Id like to apply for the position.咨询信 Im writing to inquire/ask for some information about .(2018衡水模拟)I am writing to ask for some informati
8、on about the preparation of the English contest.感谢信Im writing to express my thanks for . Id like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for .(2018杭州模拟)From the bottom of my heart, I would like to convey my thanks to you for your service of high quality.建议信Im writing to express my view concerning ./to
9、inform you of .(2018全国卷)Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.投诉信 Im writing to complain about .(2018芜湖模拟)I am Li Hua, a consumer from China. I am writing to complain about your poor service.道歉信 Im writing to make an apology to you for .(2018烟台模拟)Im writing to make an apology to y
10、ou for my being not able to attend the party.邀请信Im writing to invite you to . Im writing to tell you that there will be a . Would you like to .？(2018天津高考)I am writing to invite you to help us to take part in the World Adolescent Robotics Competition to be held in Tianjin at the end of this July.3通知M
11、ay I have your attention, please? Recently, a/an .will be过去分词in . In order to ., all the students are welcome to . There is going to be a/an .时间地点(2018全国卷)May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus.(2018全国卷)In order to learn more about the developme
12、nt of our school, all the students are welcome to watch the short film Growing Together, which is a documentary on the history of our school.(二)应用文常见结尾段的写法表示期待在应用文的结尾处我们常使用一些功能句式，向对方表示友善的感谢或亲切的问候，表达愿望或期待等。常用的结尾有：求职信I would be grateful if you could consider my application/give me the chance. I hope t
13、o have the opportunity of an interview.(2018浙江高考)I would be grateful if you could give me the chance.咨询信 Im waiting for your early reply.(2018济南模拟)I am waiting for your reply at your earliest convenience.感谢信I must thank you again for your generous help. Please accept my gratitude, now and always.(20
14、18新乡模拟)I must thank you again for your timely help.建议信In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful. I hope you will find these suggestions practical. Ill appreciate you taking my suggestions into account.(2018全国卷)Hopefully, these suggestions would be of great help to you. I am l
15、ooking forward to your good news.投诉信 Id appreciate it if you . as soon as possible.(2018萍乡模拟)I would appreciate it if you could 4make up for the loss as soon as possible.道歉信Once again, Im sorry for any inconvenience caused. I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.(2018太原模拟)I sincer
16、ely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.邀请信 Im looking forward to your participation.(2018天津高考)Im looking forward to your joining my team.通知We hope that you would make it to our activity. We are looking forward to your warm participation.(2018全国卷)Hopefully, you
17、 would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time then.课堂应用体验 翻译下列开头和结尾句1我代表学生会给您写信请求帮助我们的校友。I_am_writing_to_you,_on_behalf_of_the_Students_Union,_to_ask_for_help_for_our_schoolmate.2如果方便的话，我希望你能接受我们的邀请。We_hope_that_you_will_accept_our_invitation_if_it_is_convenie
18、nt_for_you.3我写信申请在您的大学里学习。Im_writing_to_apply_to_study_in_your_university.4我写信告诉您我的问题，这个问题困扰了我很长时间。I_am_writing_to_tell_you_my_problem,_which_has_troubled_me_for_a_long_time.5我写信给你是因为我有些确实严肃的问题想要和您交流。I_am_writing_to_you_because_I_have_something_really_serious_to_communicate_with_you.67 月 25 日至 8 月 1
19、0 日在北戴河将有一个英语暑假夏令营。There_is_going_to_be_an_English_summer_camp_in_Beidaihe_from_July_25_to_August_10.7我的确希望你能考虑我的建议。I_do_hope_you_will_consider_my_suggestion.58对于您慷慨的帮助，我再次表示感谢。Thanks_again_for_your_generous_help.9我为给你带来这么大的麻烦再次向你道歉。I_apologize_to_you_again_for_having_put_you_in_such_great_trouble.10我想向你致以最诚挚的祝贺。I_would_like_to_congratulate_you_with_all_my_heart.11如果你能认真对待我的投诉，我会非常高兴。I_would_be_very_delighted_if_you_could_consider_my_complaint_seriously.12请一定按时参加。Be_sure_to_attend_it_on_time.6
