1、专业八级-146 及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、PROOFREADDING meanwhile if the brain is derived of 5 sufficient oxygen levels, it can cause confusion and dizziness. “Fast breathing is basically a bad habit, often results from 6 period of elevated stress, back or neck pain, emotional trauma or 7 surgery,“ says
2、 Ms Troup. One seminal study suggested as many as 10 per cent of those attending general practice suffered this 8 problem. Over-breathing, as it is known, shouldn“t have any long-term health implications, says Stephen Spiro, professor of respiratory medicine at University College London Hospitals an
3、d deputy chair of the British Lung Foundation. Therefore, rapid 9 breathing and breathless can be a sign of lung disease, particularly 10 asthma and bronchitis. With these conditions, the airways in the lungs narrow, so it“s physically harder for the air to travel in and out.（分数：25.00）专业八级-146 答案解析(
4、总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、PROOFREADDING meanwhile if the brain is derived of 5 sufficient oxygen levels, it can cause confusion and dizziness. “Fast breathing is basically a bad habit, often results from 6 period of elevated stress, back or neck pain, emotional trauma or 7 surgery,“ says Ms Troup. One
5、seminal study suggested as many as 10 per cent of those attending general practice suffered this 8 problem. Over-breathing, as it is known, shouldn“t have any long-term health implications, says Stephen Spiro, professor of respiratory medicine at University College London Hospitals and deputy chair
6、of the British Lung Foundation. Therefore, rapid 9 breathing and breathless can be a sign of lung disease, particularly 10 asthma and bronchitis. With these conditions, the airways in the lungs narrow, so it“s physically harder for the air to travel in and out.（分数：25.00）解析：on on 解析 词汇错误。concentrate
7、on 意思为“集中精力于”，当 concentrate之后没有接宾语时，应去掉介词 on，意为“集中精力”。解析：leadsto解析 词汇错误。lead 单独作动词时，表示“领导；领先”的意思。词组 lead to则意为“导致”。此处是指上句提到的“用口腔呼吸而不是通过鼻子深呼吸”会导致血液内二氧化碳水平的下降。故应在 leads后加上 to。解析：of of 解析 词汇错误。短语 as a result意为“作为结果；因此”，一般单独使用，前后用逗号隔开。as a result of 表原因，意为“由于；作为的结果”，后面须接名词性的单词或短语。此处应该删掉 of。解析：wherewhich
8、解析 语法错误。此处 colon后接的从句是定语从句。从该定语从句的意思和结构来看，引导词充当从句的主语，其先行词是 muscle spasms，而不是 in the colon。所以应该选用关系代词，而不是关系副词，而此处定语从句和它所修饰的词之间用逗号分开了，故选择关系代词 which。整个句子意为“这经常会在结肠内引起肌肉痉挛，并进一步加剧和导致肠易激综合症”。解析：deriveddeprived解析 词汇错误。此题考查形近词的辨析。derive 常与 from搭配，表示“从获得；源自”的意思，be deprived of 意为“被剥夺，被夺去”，此处要表达的意思是“如果大脑缺乏足够的氧
9、气，就会导致混乱和眩晕”，故选择 deprived。解析：oftenand 或 resultsresulting解析 语法错误。此处逗号之后的部分并不是一个完整的句子，所以可以在逗号之后加上 and使前后句成为一个享有共同主语 fast breathing的并列句，或者将results改为 resulting，使后句变成现在分词短语作状语。解析：periodperiods解析 语法错误。名词的单数形式通常不会单独使用，一般应加上一定的限定词，修饰词或者以名词的复数形式出现，而此处要表达的意思是“呼吸过快经常来自于周期性的压力升高，颈部或背部的疼痛，精神创伤或手术”，所以应该选用 period的
10、复数形式，表示“周期性”。解析：sufferedfrom解析 词汇错误。当表示“患有(疾病等)”或者“长期地或习惯性受痛苦”时，suffer作不及物动词，用在 suffer from的结构中，故补上介词 from。解析：ThereforeHowever解析 语篇错误。前一句提到“过度呼吸”不会暗示长期性的健康问题，而此句则说“呼吸过快”可能是肺部疾病的征兆之一。故这两句之间是转折关系，而不是因果关系，应选择连接词 However。解析：breathlessbreathlessness解析 语法错误。这里应选用一个名词性的词，与 rapid breathing共同构成句子的主语，故用 breathless的名词形式 breathlessness。
