1、BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 111及答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 You work for a large company. You are going to be transferred to another department within your company. Write an email to all staff: telling them which department you are moving to saying when you will be moving department explaining what your new responsib
2、ilities will be. Write 40-50 words.二、 PART TWO 2 The company you work for is having problems with Sorenson, one of its suppliers. Your line manager has asked you to write a report giving details and recommending a solution.Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritte
3、n notes.Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your report.Write 120-140 words.BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 111答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 【正确答案】 Sample A Dear All I am writing to inform you that I am going to change a department next Monday 5 May. In My new position will take place in the Marketing department,
4、 where I am going to be responsible of promoting the new products. And also to ensure their productivity. Regards Band 3 The candidate has addressed all the content points. The answer is concise, and although it contains a number of errors, these do not impede communication. The overall effect on th
5、e reader is satisfactory. Sample B To: all staff From: Karen Miiller / Sales Manager Date: June 2nd, 2007 Subject: Department Transfer Dear Colleagues, I would like you to know that I will leave this department in order to take over a new job in the purchasing department. My new employment will star
6、t on July 1st, 2007 and my main duty will be to negotiate supply contracts. Thank you. Karen Band 5 The candidate has fully addressed all the content points. The language is natural and well controlled in its usage. The overall effect on the reader is very positive. 二、 PART TWO 2 【正确答案】 Sample C Rep
7、ort Our company is having problems with Sorenson, one of our main suppliers. The details of the problems are list below. Mainly there are 3 types of problem, late deliveries, unsatisfactory quality are errors with invoices. For the first one, late deliveries, the number of problems is 24. This figur
8、e is more than last year. For unsatisfactory quality, it is 17. Low quality products are more than before recently. The main factor is due the suppliers unsatisfactory quality. The third one, errors with invoices, there are 7 problems. Therefore, in the future we must check all invoices from supplie
9、rs. I recommend that we should send a problem list to Sorenson and ask them to reduce the problems at the lowest level. If the similar problems happen in the future, we have to cancel the contract with Sorenson. Band 2 The point concerning relative costs has not been covered, and therefore the targe
10、t reader would not be fully informed. Otherwise, the language range and cohesion are satisfactory, as are the format and register. Although errors do occur, these do not prevent the message being conveyed. Sample D This report aims to recommend a solution to the problems with Sorenson, one of our su
11、ppliers. We find that three essential problems should be paid attention to: Firstly, twenty-four times of late deliveries, much more than last year, has caused a lot of inconvenience. Secondly, we are dissappointed about their unsatisfactory quality of goods which almost made us lose our customers.
12、Thirdly errors with invoices brought us a lot of trouble. It is concluded that Sorensons costs are nearly 30 per cent higher than those of our other suppliers. We recommend that we turn to other suppliers and make it a rule to check all invoices from suppliers in future. On the whole, we suggest a appropriate way to discuss it with Sorenson. Band 4 All content points are covered, and the report is well within the recommended word limit. Language is generally accurate, and good range is demonstrated. Both register and format are appropriate and the report is well organised.
