1、BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 112及答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 You recently attended an exhibition and saw some equipment you think your company should buy.Write an email to your companys Purchasing Manager: saying what the equipment is suggesting how the equipment could benefit the company explaining why it is importan
2、t to place an order soon. Write 40-50 words.二、 PART TWO 2 The number of staff leaving Parkside, one of your companys retail stores, is high compared to another of its stores. Your line manager has asked you to write a report about the situation.Look at the information below, on which you have alread
3、y made some handwritten notes.Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your report.Write 120-140 words.BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 112答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 【正确答案】 Sample A I have a piece of good news to inform you. I saw a new model of laser-printer on the exhibition of last week. It is beautiful and of go
4、od quality. Because many companies are very interested in it, I think wed better make an order soon to replace the old one in our office. Band 3 All content points are covered, and the range of language is satisfactory. Both the format and register are appropriate, and although there are some errors
5、, these do not obscure communication of the message. Sample B I am writing to suggest that we could buy an overhead projector I saw in an exhibition. It would be useful to do the presentations of the new products. The XP3 model has the latest technology and, if we order it soon, the supplier will gr
6、ant us a 20% discount. Regards. Band 5 All points are covered, and language is controlled and concise, and demonstrates a wide lexical range. The register is consistently appropriate, as is the format. 二、 PART TWO 2 【正确答案】 Sample C For number of Parkside staff leaving stores problem, I made a report
7、 as follows: At first, look at draw, from this one you can see, Year 2007. Highgate lost 4 person. Parkside lost 5. Until 2008, Highgates rate is reduced, but Parksides rate is grew so high more staff leaving will make the store pay more time errors are numerous and impede clear communication of the
8、 message. Sample D Report on staff turnover Introduction This report aims to explain the high staff turnover 2008 in Parkside and to propose measures to improve staff loyalty. Findings The figures clearly show that the high number of staff leaving the stores is a problem that only affects the Parksi
9、de store in 2008. While staff turnover in the Highgate store remained on a low level the number of staff leaving Parkside shoot up from 5 to 20. This unfortunately has a bad impact on customer service. Research amongst staff revealed their requirements. Firstly staff requires more training what woul
10、d also benefit the company as the service is likely to improve. Another good idea is the introduction of a bonus scheme for valued staff that would improve staff loyalty. Unlike the mentioned proposals the request for a longer annual lave could not be met. Recommendations It is recommended to offer
11、both the requested training opportunities and a bonus scheme for valued staff. Band 5 All content points are clearly covered, and the report is well organised with good cohesion. Both the register and format are consistently appropriate. Generally, the language used is accurate, and a good range of structures and vocabulary is demonstrated.
