1、BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 116及答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 The staff in your office have decided to spend their holidays together this year. While reading the news you are attracted by the advertisement of the Grand Palazzo Hotel in Italy. No one in your office has ever been to Italy. So you want your secretary to c
2、ontact the hotel through telephone. Write a short message to Ms. Emily Malan, your secretary: suggesting the visit to Italy. give the hotel telephone number to her. ask her to contact that hotel. Write 30-40 words. 二、 PART TWO 2 You are the manager of the Personnel Department of a company. Your comp
3、any has conducted a survey of training needs.Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.Then using all your handwritten notes, write your proposal.Write 120-140 words.BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 116答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 【正确答案】 To: Emily As no one in the office has been
4、to Italy, it will be a good idea to visit it first. We will stay in the Grand Palazzo Hotel and the telephone number is 8097753333. Please contact them to get further information. 【试题解析】 本文是对商务信息的考查，是部门领导写给自己秘书的信息，内容是建议部门员工去意大利旅游，告知秘书意大利一家宾馆的电话，让秘书与宾馆联系。文章是上级写给下级的，故言简意赅，将内容讲清楚即可。 二、 PART TWO 2 【正确答案
5、】 Proposal on Staff Training Priority Introduction The objective of this proposal is to compare the staff needs, and make precedence to the more important and needed ones. Findings Sales staff require for the English training would clearly bring more orders. It also meets the demand of new staff at
6、trade department for the development strategy, which should be considered first. Furthermore , computer skills should be expanded to administration staff to bring more productivity and better investment, despite the cost is expensive. It would be helpful to reduce the budget by using internal traini
7、ng for the new staff. The current communication ability are working well, we should postpone this part. Recommendations The most important and urgent training is English. New staff should be trained internally and computer skills and presentation skills need to be organized. 【试题解析】 本文是对商务建议书的考查，内容要求是作为公司的人事经理，根据员工培训需求的调查，写一篇关于员工培训重点的建议书。内容方面，首先根据题目所给的信息，介绍此建议书的目的和所要建议的主题；要从题目中所给的不同员工培训的需求也不一样这一事实，简述其原因；最后紧扣主题，强调自己的建议和看法。结构和形式方面要按照商务建议书的格式书写，语言要准确，用词要合理，句式力求丰富多变。
