1、BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 68及答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 James, one of your employees has been in sewice for ten years. As the HR(Human Resources) Manager of your company, you wish to write a letter of congratuIatiOns to James： stating the purpose of your letter. thanking him for his contributions and loyalty. givi
2、ng him your good wishes. Write 40-50 words. Write on the opposite page. 二、 PART TWO 2 How to approach Writing Test Part Two Part Two counts for two thirds of the total marks in the Writing Test. You should spend about 30 minutes on Part Two. You will be asked to write a report, proposal or piece of
3、business correspondence. You will be given information, such as a letter, advertisement, or charts and graphs, as the starting point for your answer, and will be told who to write to. About five handwritten notes will also be given. You must use all these notes when writing your answer, and will nee
4、d to invent information in connection with some of them. If you leave out any of the five notes, you will lose marks.Planning Read the instructions carefully so that you know what do, and underline the key words. Make an outline plan, putting the five notes into a suitable order.Writing Start your a
5、nswer by briefly saying why you are writing. Express your ideas clearly Try to use a wide range of appropriate vocabulary and grammatical structures. For a piece of business correspondence, include suitable openings and closings (e.g. Dear Ms Smith and Yours sincerely with your signature), but no ad
6、dresses. Do not present a report or proposal in the form of a letter Make the formality of the language suitable for the reader(s).Checking After writing, read what you have written, correct mistakes and make improvements. If you want to add anything, use a sign, e.g. *. Put a line through anything
7、you want to omit. Dont rewrite the whole of your answer Make sure the examiner will be able to read your answer. Use a pen and your normal handwriting (do not write in capital letters). Check that you have written your answer in 120-140 words. Your company is willing to pay for you to attend a manag
8、ement training course. You have received a leaflet about a suitable course. Read the leaflet below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes. Then, using all your handwritten notes, write a proposal for your Training Manager, explaining why you would like to attend the course. Write 120
9、-140 words. BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 68答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 【正确答案】 DearJames, This Friday will mark your 10th anniversary as a member of the AutoGiant. Congratulations!We would like to take this opportunity to thank you for these past ten years of fine workmanship and company loyalty. We are hoping that you
10、 will enjoy being with us for many years to come. Best， Hulio 二、 PART TWO 2 【正确答案】 To: Coralie Jenkins, Training Manager From: Noel Roberts Subject: TRAINING COURSE I would like to attend the Introduction to management training course which is described in the attached leaflet. BENEFITS The programm
11、e looks very useful, particularly the section on communication skills. This is because I am not very good at talking to other staff about poor standards of work The course includes work in small groups, and that is how I learn best. Hearing Other peoples ideas is stimulating. Participants will be gi
12、ven notes on key topics. These will be hand)4 both for me and for some of my colleagues. DATES I would prefer to attend the September course, as I have arranged to take annual leave in July, PRICE There is a 5% price reduction for early booking, so I hope that you will agree to book the course for me before the end of May,
