1、BEC商务英语（高级）写作模拟试卷 92及答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 The line graph below shows two different records of transactions of a warehouse.Based on the information from the graph, write a report of the difference between the two records.Write 120 -140 words on your Answer Sheet.二、 PART TWO 2 Your company is going to
2、organise some creative events to strengthen the relationship between employees and celebrate the 50th anniversary of your company. Write a proposal to your line manager offering some bright corporate event ideas describing briefly your ideas stating the reasons for you to choose these ideas explaini
3、ng how to put the ideas into practice manifesting the influence of these events on the company. BEC商务英语（高级）写作模拟试卷 92答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 【正确答案】 The following report aims to reveal the discrepancies between the records of transactions of a warehouse held by the manager and the Department of Informatio
4、n Systems. The two records of the transactions throughout the year will be compared to show where the difference is. According to the managers informal, but accurate records of the number of transactions, an average of about 5000 transactions were made per month during the year. In contrast, the mon
5、thly number of transactions was averaged at 4000 according to the computerized record of the Information Systems Department. The difference between the two records was consistent throughout the year. A discrepancy of around 1000 was found in almost every month. For example, in October, when the larg
6、est number of transactions was reported in both records, the managers record showed 938 more transactions than the computerized record. Similarly, in August, 1041 more transactions turned up in the manager s record. In conclusion, the managers record consistently showed substantially more transactio
7、ns than the computerized record. Considering the accuracy of the former record, certain errors must have occurred when the transactions were processed via computers. 二、 PART TWO 2 【正确答案】 The aim of this proposal is to put forward some creative ideas of corporate activities. The line manager asked me
8、 to do this. Here I will put forward three pieces of suggestions that concentrate on relaxing the staff, the development of critical skills of employees and enhancing the communication among employees. Firstly, I suggest a party be held. We feel a lot of pressure during our daily routine work and I
9、think its completely necessary for the company to organise parties for us to relax. A party will take people out of their everyday routines and let us know its time to relax. After all, all work and no play make Jack a dull boy. Secondly, I would suggest some business simulation games, in which the
10、employees develop their critical skills. For example one activity might concentrate on communication, feedback, leadership and team skills whilst another will cover problem solving, decision making, managing resources and budgets. Participants learn more by practical experience than theory, and they
11、 can learn about themselves and others. Team roles and skills are key components in a business management game therefore team building development is enhanced and the practical value of group dynamics is demonstrated. Finally, I would like to suggest some activities that change the way the team thin
12、ks. For example, try the Failure Strategies team improvement activity. The Failure Strategies activity finds new solutions to old problems with creative brainstorming, and looks at problems from a new perspective. Use this activity when we want to inspire more creative thinking or when the group has an important goal to accomplish.
