1、专业英语八级（社会热点类写作）模拟试卷 3及答案与解析 一、 PART VI WRITING (45 MIN) Directions: Write a composition of about 400 words on the following topic. 1 “Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, they in fact, prevent people from developing into truly stro
2、ng and independent individuals.“ Do you agree to the foregoing statement? Write an essay of about 400 words. You should supply an appropriate title for your essay. In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument wit
3、h appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 2 In many countries it is no
4、w possible to turn on the television and view government at work. Watching these proceedings can help people to understand the issues that affect their lives. Do you believe the following statement: “The more kinds of government proceedings - trials, debates, meetings, etc. - that are televised, the
5、 more society will benefit“. Write an essay of about 400 words. You should supply an appropriate title for your essay. In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you s
6、hould bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 3 It is said that people, especially younger generations are paying less
7、and less attention to dealing with people with politeness and appropriateness. Some people hold the idea that courtesy is no longer a necessity in current society. What is your idea on this? Write an essay of about 400 words. You should supply an appropriate title for your essay. In the first part o
8、f your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and
9、appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 专业英语八级（社会热点类写作）模拟试卷 3答案与 解析 一、 PART VI WRITING (45 MIN) Directions: Write a composition of about 400 words on the following topic. 1 【正确答案】 Luxuries Actually Weaken Us Do modern luxuries serve to undermine our t
10、rue strength and independence as individuals? The speaker believes so, and I tend to agree. Consider the automobile, for example. Most people consider the automobile a necessity rather than a luxury: yet it is for this very reason that the automobile so aptly supports the speakers point. To the exte
11、nt that we depend on cars as crutches, they prevent us from becoming truly independent and strong in character as individuals. Consider first the effect of the automobile on our independence as individuals. Cars have diminished our independence in a number of significant respects. Weve grown depende
12、nt on our cars for commuting to work. We rely on them like crutches for short trips to the corner store, and for carting our children to and from school. Moreover, the car has become a means not only to our assorted physical destinations but also to the attainment of our socioeconomic goals, insofar
13、 as the automobile has become a symbol of status. In fact, in my observation many, if not most, working professionals willingly undermine their financial security for the sake of being seen driving this years new SUV or luxury sedan. In short, weve become slaves to the automobile. Consider next the
14、overall impact of the automobile on our strength as individuals, by which I mean strength of character, or mettle. I would be hard-pressed to list one way in which the automobile enhances ones strength of character. Driving a powerful SUV might afford a person a feeling and appearance of strength, o
15、r machismo . But this feeling has nothing to do with a persons true character. In contrast, there is a certain strength of character that comes with eschewing modern conveniences such as cars, and with the knowledge that one is contributing to a cleaner and quieter environment, a safer neighborhood,
16、 and arguably a more genteel society. Also, alternative modes of transportation such as bicycling and walking are forms of exercise which require and promote the virtue of self-discipline. Finally, in my observation people who have forsaken the automobile spend more time at home, where they are more
17、 inclined to prepare and even grow their own food, and to spend more time with their families. The former enhances ones independence: the latter enhances the integrity of ones values and the strength of ones family. To sum up, the automobile helps to illustrate that when a luxury becomes a necessity
18、 it can sap our independence and strength as individuals. Perhaps our society is better off, on balance, with such “luxuries“. However, by becoming slaves to the automobile we trade off a certain independence and inner strength. 【试题解析】 本文最大的亮点在于缩小了论证的切入点，以小见大。题目较为宽泛时，不少考生容易泛泛而谈，反而不得要领，本文为他们提供了一个很好的借
19、鉴。作者没有铺开摊子，提及所有的奢侈品种类，而是从中选择了较具代表性的、更能说明问题的汽车为例进行论述，这样既有说服力，又让读者感觉言之有物。 【知识模块】 社会热点类 2 【正确答案】 Not All Governmental Proceedings Need Televising Anything that makes a countrys government more transparent is certainly a good thing, at least in democratic countries. These societies have a great deal to
20、gain by being able to watch their elected government officials in action. But to broadly state that the more government proceedings that are televised, the more society will benefit is to ignore the fact that sometimes, less is more. Some types of proceedings can even be adversely affected if televi
21、sed, making society worse off rather than giving it a benefit. One example of the possible negative effects of televising all governmental proceedings was the trial in the United States of accused murderer and former National Football League superstar O.J. Simpson. The trial was televised and became
22、 a huge media spectacle, captivating the nations attention during the entire trial. Attorneys were well aware that the proceedings were being televised and almost behaved as if they were acting in a movie. The spotlight was so unrelenting that the circus atmosphere affected even the judge. The parti
23、cipants played to the cameras rather than focusing on the task at hand. Largely because of television, many people would argue that justice was not served during this particular trial. One of the problems with stating that the more governmental proceedings that are televised, the better off a societ
24、y is, is that people might come to believe that they are seeing everything when in fact, a television camera can only see part of what is happening no matter how many cameras there are. Much of what happens in government takes place “behind the scenes“, not necessarily in full view of the cameras in
25、 the meeting place. While to an extent “seeing is believing“, quite often it is what you dont see that makes the difference. Another problem with the statement is that it assumes that people actually watch the proceedings when they are broadcast. There is a television channel in the United States th
26、at broadcasts Congressional proceedings every day, but few people watch it. Only when some big issue comes up for a debate or for a vote does a significant number of people tune in. Society can certainly benefit from the television coverage of certain governmental proceedings. Politicians can be hel
27、d accountable for their actions while they are being “watched“ by the television cameras. No longer can they hide in anonymity while they are conducting the business of the people. But not all governmental proceedings should be televised. There are times when secrecy is an absolute requirement for m
28、aking sure that the correct decisions are made. 【试题解析】 本文开篇通过简单对比提出作者针对题目 “少即是多 ”的观点，第二段首先进行例证，继而义提出两点理由支撑自己的主张，符合议论文由具体到抽象、由容易理解到较难领会的议论顺序。其中的理南 “曝光率更多可能反而容易催生幕后交易 ”更是神来之笔，从较新颖的角度切入，使读者更加为之叹服。 【知识模块】 社会热点类 3 【正确答案】 Politeness - Still a Must People today enjoy great material wealth due to hard work,
29、 but some complain that people today are less polite than they used to be. Extremists argue that people do not need to have the conventional social norms, such as saying hello to other people, because those manners are a waste of time. However, I think politeness is important in many aspects of mode
30、rn life. First, in dealing relationships with family and friends, people need to be polite and considerate. Many young people today claim that they are too busy to call their parents and contact their friends. Once, I refused to spend time talking with parents, using the excuse that I had too much w
31、ork. The consequence was that my mother got angry and hung up the phone. Our relationship was strained, but I soon realized my rudeness and apologized to my mother. My mother forgave me because I showed my respect and concern for her. This situation is also true for friends. Politeness is a bond in
32、relationships with close family members and friends. Second, in a working environment, one needs to obey the basic social norms of courtesy for interpersonal communication. Consider a rude colleague who is always short and unpleasant with his coworkers. Not many people are willing to work with him,
33、because he does not show any basic skills or ability to deal with people. On the contrary, a coworker who smiles and acts respectfully towards others will certainly be more popular and easier to work with. Obviously, politeness will never be outdated, no matter how busy the world becomes. Third, in
34、the political realm and entertainment industry, celebrities need to show a gracious and friendly manner in order to maintain a positive image. All politicians have a hectic agenda. But when they are giving a speech to the public, politicians need to dress appropriately and speak in a certain way. Pa
35、tience when answering questions is also a must. Similarly, a famous movie star or a pop singer needs to show a friendly attitude towards any crazy fan. Otherwise, the printing media will make a big deal out of his/her unappreciative manner towards fans. In conclusion, though the world today drives p
36、eople to work like machines, politeness is a prerequisite for people to have a satisfying home life and a fulfilling career. 【试题解析】 文章开头以一个转折连词 however引入了作者自己的观点。文章亮点主要有二：其一，主题部分既有正面论证，又有反面论证，如第二段中作者援引自己的切肤之痛，便是通过反汪来说明忽视礼貌会带来怎样的严重后果和对别人的伤害；第三段中从正反两方面说明，对比一目了然，使读者更易把握；第四段主要从正面说明，人情人理。其二，文章层次分明，从人们最为熟悉且每日面对的生活与工作入手，先说明了在日常人际交往中礼貌的重要性，继而上升到社会名流的角度，说明作为公众人物，礼仪也是不可或缺的。 【知识模块】 社会热点类
