1、大学英语六级改革适用(作文)模拟试卷 154及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on obstacles by referring to the saying “Obstacles are things a person sees when he takes his eyes off his goal.“ You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can
2、do to overcome obstacles. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 2 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on preparation by referring to the saying “By failing to prepare, you are preparing to fail.“ You can give examples to illustrate your point and the
3、n explain what you will prepare to avoid failure. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Challenge yourself with something you know you could never do, and what youll find is that you can
4、 overcome anything.“ You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain in what ways you can challenge yourself daily to improve yourself. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on success by referrin
5、g to the saying “You can never cross the ocean until you have the courage to lose sight of the shore.“ You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to make the first step to success. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 大学英语六级改革适用(作文)模拟试卷
6、 154答案与解 析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 There is a saying that goes, “Obstacles are things a person sees when he takes his eyes off his goal.“ Simple as it sounds, the intended meaning is more than profound. It is indicated in the quote that if we stick to our goal, we will triumph over any adversity
7、and no longer see them as obstacles. For instance, I once had to make a tough decision after my failure in the college entrance examination: to accept what life throws at me or to try it again. Since college was my dream, finally I decided to do it again despite the prospect that I had to bear more
8、pressure than ever. Life didnt let me down again due to my determination and hard work. Adversity is a challenge for cowards but an opportunity for the brave. Therefore, every time adversity blocks my way, I always tell myself not to fear and keep reminding myself of where I am heading. Moreover, I
9、will cope with obstacles by analyzing the problems and finding the solution to them. I have faith that I can overcome any obstacle and finally get to my destination. 【试题解析】 这是一篇名言分析型作文。首先要求考生就 “当人的视线不放在目标上时,他就看到了阻碍 ”这句名言做出评论,提出自己的观点并举例加以阐述,最后说明能做些什么来克服阻碍。根据题目要求,文章的结构可安排如下: 第一段:简单引述名言: 第二段:论证名言,并举例说明
10、; 第三段:讲述自己会怎样克服阻碍。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 There goes a famous saying, “By failing to prepare, you are preparing to fail.“ It is indicated in the remark that the importance of preparation can never be underestimated. If one doesnt get well prepared before taking action, chances are good that he/she will
11、be doomed to fail. Getting ready is the secret to success. If you dont develop adequate abilities, gather enough experience or prepare yourself mentally, you can hardly succeed. The sports world abounds in examples which demonstrate this point. Li Na, the greatest Chinese female tennis player, had p
12、racticed hard for many years and played countless matches both at home and abroad and suffered so many losses before she won the championships in the French Open and the Australian Open. James Harden, one of the NBA talents, used to be a bench player for the Thunder, but years of preparation made hi
13、m the backbone of the Rockets. As a college student, in order to avoid failure in the future, what I can do is to make full use of everyday. In other words, I will master as many core skills and knowledge as possible, and get myself ready for my future career. 【试题解析】 这是一篇引语分析型作文。首先要求考生就 “不做准备,那就准备失败
14、 ”这句名言做出评论,并提出自己的观点;其次要求考生列举例子来阐述自己的观点;最后要求考生陈述自己可以如何准备以避免失败。根据题目要求,文章的结构可安排如下: 第一段:简单评述名言,亮明观点: 第二段:举例论证观点: 第三段:讲述自己会怎样做准备以避免失败。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 A famous saying goes, “Challenge yourself with something you know you could never do, and what youll find is that you can overcome anything“, which mea
15、ns that by attempting something really difficult and outside of your comfort zone, you will tap into your potentials and discover how strong you really are. I find no better example than my English learning experience. Before college, I was quite good at English reading and writing, but my oral Engl
16、ish was rather disappointing. Whats worse, I was so shy that I even seldom spoke in public. I thought I could never speak fluent English. However, my fondness of English encouraged me to open my mouth. Constantly, I challenged myself to make English speeches in class and practiced speaking with fore
17、ign teachers. Two years later, I made great strides in oral English and could speak English with foreigners freely. You never know how potential you are until you challenge yourself. Therefore, I think there are many things I can try to challenge myself daily to better myself, such as getting up ear
18、ly each day and learning more English words, talking to one stranger each day, ditching one bad habit in a month. 【试题解析】 这是一篇引语分析型作文。首先要求考生就 “用自己认为决不可能做到的事情来挑战自己,你会发现自己可以战胜一切 ”这句名言做出评论,并提出自己的观点;其次要求考生列举实例来阐述自己的观点,最后要求考生阐述自己在日常生活中可以如何挑战自己。根据题目要求,文章的结构可安排如下: 第一段:简单评述名言,提出观点。 第二段:举例论证自己的观点。 第三段:讲述自己在日常
19、生活中可以怎样挑战自己。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 There is such a saying, “you can never cross the ocean until you have the courage to lose sight of the shore.“ This saying not only emphasizes the importance of courage for success but also indicates that courage is the first step toward success. Indeed, having the co
20、urage to take the first step to act is quite essential for success. As we all know, human beings are great thinkers, capable of coming up with brilliant schemes. Yet from scheme to success there is a long way to go. Without the boldness to make the first step, no scheme can translate into success. T
21、ake Bill Gates as an example. If he had not been bold enough to choose to drop out of Harvard and embark on a software business venture, he might not be able to build up his Microsoft empire. As a college student, I think the first step to success for me is to dedicate myself to study and to learn m
22、ore useful skills, which will pave the way for my future career. I know for sure that if I dont work hard, I have no chance to savor the beautiful scenery beyond the ocean. 【试题解析】 这是一篇名言分析型文章。首先要求考生就 “没有勇气告别海岸,就永远无法跨越海洋 ”做出评论,并提出自己的观点;其次要求考生利用举例论证的方法阐述自己的观点;最后还要说明自己怎么做来迈出成功的第一步。根据题目要求,文章的写作思路安排如下: 第一段:简要评述题中的引语,指出其深意; 第二段:通过举例论述,来阐述自己的观点; 第三段:说明自己怎么做来迈出成功的第一步。 【知识模块】 作文