1、大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 50及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the saying “To talk big about the lofty ideal without doing any practical work will get one divorced from reality.“ You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 wo
2、rds. 2 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled To Learn from Mistakes by commenting on the remark “Man errs so long as he strives“. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. Yo
3、u should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on population aging. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Nanny Theft. You should write at least 150 words b
4、ut no more than 200 words, and base your essay on the chart and the outline given below:1)下图为 2010年到 2012年保姆盗窃案占全部女性盗 窃犯罪的比例变化情况，描述此图表； 2)出现这种变化的原因是什么； 3)如何解决这个问题。 5 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled should the Seven-day May Day Holiday Be Resumed? You should write
5、 at least 150 words but no more than 200 words following the outline given below: 1)根据国家规定， “五一 ”黄金周被取消，增加了传统假日； 2)有些人建议恢复黄金周； 3)“我 ”的看法 大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 50答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 To talk big about the lofty ideal without doing any practical work, as the remark has it, will get one divorc
6、ed from reality. We should set ourselves realistic goals. Besides, we should start from now and transform our goals into concrete steps and then complete all steps one by one. (提出观点段 ) There are many facts supporting that ideality should be based on reality and its realisation lies in doing practica
7、l work. First of all, lofty ideal is difficult and even impossible to achieve. For example, it is definitely ridiculous for common people to set a goal as surpassing the Olympic champion, Usain Bolt, in running. Furthermore, to pursue an unrealisticgoal, people may find them painfully incapable and
8、may use all means to make it. For example, some athletes take stimulants to get good marks in race and be punished at last. In addition, people who aim too high but make no effort will cry with empty dreams at last. (论证观点段 ) All mentioned above tells us that to make dream come true, we must base it
9、on reality. When we set a goal, we should carefully consider its feasibility, Therefore, we should make efforts and strive for realistic goals. (总结观点段 ). 【试题解析】 本篇是评论性话题作文。文章要求针对 “离开社会实践而空谈远大理想。就会脱离实际 ”(to talk big about the lofty ideal without doing any practical work will get one divorced from rea
10、lity)这句话展开评论，首先要把这句话和我们之前做过的 “行动胜于空话 ”区别开，这里不是说了没做，而是说得和做得不得当(talk big和 without doing any practical work)将会导致脱离实际，区别开了这点也就把握住了论证重点，从中我们也可以看出，设定适当的目标而不是好高骛远是很重要的，因此可以用观点论证型行文。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Just as Goethe said, “man errs so long as he strives“, no one can avoid making mistakes. Therefore, what w
11、e need to do is to recognise and revise our mistakes.Besides,learn from them.(提出观点段 ) Many remarkable reasons account for this argument. First of all, from mistakes, we learn to be more careful. Therefore, in the process of finding mistakes, our capacity of observation is strengthened. We understand
12、 that success consists of details and we could not ignore the smallest mistakes. Furthermore, the process of finding and revising mistakes is also a process of changing our way of thinking. In many cases, when we find that we are wrong, we would try another way to carry out our plan. So, if there is
13、 no mistakes happening, learning would have no worth at all.(论证观点段 ) All mentioned above tells us that mistakes are inevitable but we can learn from them. Making mistakes is not totally a bad thing. Therefore, we should not see a “negative“ mistake every time as an end product, but rather as a “posi
14、tive“ beginning for progress in life. (总结观点段 ) 【试题解析】 本篇是评论性话题作文。文章要求评论 “只要一个人努力，他就会犯错误 ”(Man errs so long as he strives)这句话，结合文章要求的题目 (To Learn from Mistakes)，可知这句话在更深层次上的寓意是：要学会从错误中学习。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 According to the picture above, the rate of population aging of America has been increasing. I
15、n detail, the elders will run from 36 million in 2003 up to 87 million by the year 2050. Consequently, this picture has forcefully proved that the situation of population aging has become increasingly severe and its problems have come to the fore.(描绘图画段 ) Actually, many problems related to populatio
16、n aging emerge. Firstly, population aging may cause a decline in work force. That will consequently affect the productivity of the whole society. Secondly, with smaller families and escalating pace of life, it is even graver for families to care for aged members adequately. Thirdly, the aging of pop
17、ulation in China has to some extent resulted from the family planning policy.(说明原因段 ) As far as I am concerned, aging is an inevitable tendency and its high time for countries to prepare for responding to the aging crisis. For one thing, governments should improve their countrys pension insurance sy
18、stem. For another, family care and community services shall also be encouraged. In brief, we should develop old-age programmes and actively address the issue of the aging of the population. (阐述观点段 ) 【试题解析】 本题属于图画式命题作文。首先，抓住图画的主题 The graying of America，结合题目指令 express your views on population aging，从而
19、确定图画反映的是美国老龄化问题日 趋明显。仔细分析图中的数据可知， 2030年老龄人口将是 2003年的两倍， 2050年将达到 87,000,000。目前老龄化问题已经不只出现在美国，各国都在积极应对老龄化带来的问题。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 According to the chart, we clearly learn that there has been a rapid rise in nanny theft. As early as in 2010. the percentage of nanny theft was only 6.9% among the all t
20、he theft crimes committed by women. Then in 2011. it increased to 9.3%, and by 2012, the percentage had reached to 14.8%, more than twice of that in 2010.(描述图表段 ) Then why is the nanny theft rate on the rise? Firstly, it is because more and more women who are less educated and non-skilled choose to
21、be nannies. Sometimes, the nanny thieves were not aware what they were doing even after they had broken the law. Secondly, some of the nanny thieves were born in poor families, and when they found how superior the employers life is to theirs, they may probably feel unfair and steal for retaliation.
22、Thirdly, the negligence of management of the household service companies is also to be blamed. (说明原因段 ). As far as I am concerned, there are some methods that can be taken to lower the nanny theft rate. For one thing, the household service company should enhance the supervision of the nannies. For a
23、nother, the employers should not leave their possessions about. To conclude, it needs our mutual effort to prevent nanny theft.(阐述观点段 ) 【试题解析】 本题属于提纲式图表命题作文。提纲第 1点要求描述图表，提纲第2点要求分析图表中反映出的变化的原因，提纲第 3点要求提出解决问题的办法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文，写作的重点是对图表中数据的描述和对其所反映现象原因的分析。 【知识模块】 作文 5 【正确答案】 In recently years, the s
24、even-day May Day holiday was separated into several shorter holidays. Some people like this arrangement.However, others argue that the seven-day holiday should be resumed.(提出观点段 ) Those who hold the latter opinion believe that resuming the seven-day May Day holiday can stimulate the domestic demand,
25、 which is especially important in todays economy environment. Besides, they point out that if the seven-day May Day holiday is resumed, people who study or work outside their hometown will have more time to visit their family and friends. However, others still think differently.In their opinions, th
26、e present arrangement of legal holiday is good for passing our tradition on to the future generation. Besides, they think the seven-day holiday is part of the reason for the heavy traffic, the environmental problems and so on.(对比论证段 ) Weighing up these two arguments. I prefer the current arrangement
27、. For one thing, the present arrangement of legal holidays can bring peoples attention to our traditional holidays which are being threatened by western festivals. For another, it can ensure more holidays to relax ourselves. Taking the above-mentioned factors into consideration, I think the seven-day May Day holiday should be resumed.(表明观点段 ) 【试题解析】 本题属于提纲式文字命题作文。提纲第 1点指出一种做法，提纲第2点指出人们对这一做法的不同看法，提纲第 3点要求发表个人看法，由此可判断本文应为对比分析型作文，写作的重点是对两种对立观点的对比论证。 【知识模块】 作文
