1、大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 69及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Never Lose Confidence by commenting on the saying, “The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today. “ You should write at least 150 words but no more than 2
2、00 words. 2 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Voice Your Opinion by commenting on the saying, “Silence is golden.“ You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Determination O
3、utweighs Talent by commenting on the saying, “ There is no such thing as a great talent without great willpower.“ You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Live With a Goal by commenting on the saying, “ The
4、 world makes way for the man who knows where he is going. “ You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 69答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 Never Lose Confidence How important is confidence? According to the former US President Franklin Roosevelt, “The only limi
5、t to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today. “ In other words, if you have faith in your capabilities and future, it will make you one step nearer to your goal. For one thing, if you are a confident person, a stronger believer in your dream, you can easily attract people and persuad
6、e others to help you achieve your dream. Thats what Barack Obama did when he was running for the US presidency and what numerous people did before and after him in order to be successful. For another, when you have confidence, you can accomplish things even if others are not supportive. Such example
7、s could be found among scientists and actors alike who proved themselves to the world finally despite the fact that they were previously misunderstood or wrongfully judged by others. Therefore, under no circumstances should one lose confidence, because it is what makes the dream come true. 【试题解析】 这是
8、一篇议论文，主要讨论的是自信的重要性。 第一段以 How important is confidence?提出论点，紧接着引用美国前总统罗斯福的名言 “实现明天理想的唯一障碍是今天的疑虑 ”开门见山地指出自信对成功的重要作用。一问一答，突出重点，自然而然写出自己的立场。 第二段对引言进行评论，以递进的方式论证了自信可以为自己赢得支持，从而获得成功。一方面，自信的人相信梦想，很容易吸引别人并说服他们帮助自己实现梦想。奥巴马就是凭借着自信成功竞选美国总统，古来今往的无数成 功者都是这么做的。另一方面，一个自信的人即使没有人支持也可以凭借自信实现自己的目标。许多不被人看好的科学家和演员向世人证明了自
9、己。 第三段总结全文。在任何情况下人都不能失去自信，自信照亮梦想。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Voice Your Opinion The old proverb that “Silence is golden.“ is certainly true in many circumstances. Indeed, silence is considered one of the many attributes a person possesses. However, it is not always golden, especially in our modern society.
10、Firstly, silence may dull our sense of righteousness. It is a shame to keep silent when we see our friends being bullied or a strangers wallet being stolen. When our rights are violated, silence and tolerance will make things worse. Secondly, it may ruin our best chance of getting promotion or achie
11、ving success. If we keep silent and are afraid to express ourselves, we will lose the precious opportunities to show our talent and ability. Besides, silence is not golden when one needs to claim responsibility or when the one we love is expecting our response. Therefore, when the situation calls fo
12、r it, we should no longer remain silent. Tell people what we think and how we feel, and then well have ourselves understood. 【试题解析】 这是一篇议论文，讨论了当今社会应信奉 “沉默是金 ”，还是应表达意愿。 第一段先承认 “沉默是金 ”有其合理之处，也被认为是人的一种优秀品质，而后However笔锋一转，指出 “沉默是金 ”并非完全适用于当今社会。 第二段对引言进行评论，从三个方面论证保持沉默的不良后果。第一，沉默会麻木我们的正义感。 It is a shame to
13、 keep silent when we see our friends being bullied or a strangers walletbeing stolen中 It为形式主语， when引导时间状语从句，句式多变。第二，沉默让我们错失成功的良机，失去展示自己能力的机会。第三，在责任感面前，沉默不是金。 第三段总结全文。说出来自己的观点，让别人知道我们的所思所想。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 Determination Outweighs Talent Balzac, a famous French writer once said, “There is no such t
14、hing as a great talent without great willpower.“ It means that the willpower to succeed is more important than the talent. To many people, to be successful requires a lot of things, such as diligence, skill, talent, and even luck. However, the determination to succeed triumphs over all, because if y
15、ou dont possess the willpower to excel at something, your talent may wither away. Many of my acquaintances achieve their goals not only because they are hard-working or exceptionally talented, but because they have set their mind to accomplish what they desire. Likewise, I have borne witness to many
16、 others who were equally talented or qualified, but didnt become who they deserve to be simply because they overlooked their ability and lacked the determination to try to make changes in their life. Therefore, determination is a crucial factor that determines peoples success. A person with a strong
17、er will is more likely to realize his life goals. 【试题解析】 这是一篇议论文，讨论的是毅力和才华的重要性。 第一段引用法国作家巴尔扎克的名言点明文章的主题：毅力比才华更重要。 第二段对引言进行评论，从正反两方面论证毅力对成功起到的关键性作用，用自己身边的人举例说明。成功的人不仅是因为他们努力、有才华，更因为他们有不达目的，誓不罢休的精神。很多同样有才华的人没有作出应有的成就，因为他们忽视了自己的天赋，缺乏毅力。第一句 中 to besuccessful不定式形式作主语，本段也不乏名词性从句、定语从句等，结构紧凑，篇章连贯。 第三段总结全文。毅
18、力是决定人生成败的关键因素，意志力强的人更容易成功。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Live With a Goal As the saying goes, “The world makes way for the man who knows where he is going.“ It signifies that we should live with a goal that can point us in the right direction of our life. Frankly speaking, a goal in life is of tremendous signi
19、ficance to our life. For one thing, a proper aim helps turn our ideas into reality, as we are better motivated when we want to attain the goal we have set. For another, by setting goals we could take good control of our life, without spending our time or energy wondering about what to do. With a cle
20、ar direction and certain plans, we will readily get what we want. In conclusion, we should live with a target, as a goal-oriented life is an active way of living. Without a clear purpose, we might feel at sea, squandering our time and opportunities. 【试题解析】 这是一篇议论文，主要讨论的是生活应有目标和方向。 第一段指出，在我们的人生之旅中，目标可以为我们指点迷津，指明人生的方向。 第二段 对引言进行阐述，论证了设定目标的积极意义。有目标的人有动力把想法变为现实，成功后有成就感。通过设定目标，我们可以有效地掌控生活。明确的目标和合理的计划有助于我们取得成功。 第三段总结全文。 In conclusion自然过渡到这一段，得出结论：我们要树立目标，积极生活；如果没有明确目标，我们就如迷途的羔羊，白白浪费了时光和机遇。 【知识模块】 作文
