1、大学英语六级改革适用(作文)模拟试卷 85及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Eliminating Fake and Unhealthy Advertisements. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1当今社会出现 很多虚假不健康广告 2这些广告产生的危害 3应该如何解决 2 For this part, you ar
2、e allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Development of Science and Technology. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1科学技术的发展促进了社会文明的进 步 2科技的发展带来了很多问题,如环境污染和食物安全 3为了解决这个问题,我们应当 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay ent
3、itled Low-carbon Life. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1近年来低碳生活逐渐成为热议话题 2推行低碳生活的措 施 3我认为 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled A Worldwide Wave of Learning Chinese. You should write at least 150 words following the outline
4、given below: 1目前世界上掀起一股学习汉语的热潮 2汉语热的原因和影响 3我的观点 大学英 语六级改革适用(作文)模拟试卷 85答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 Eliminating Fake and Unhealthy Advertisements Despite the existence of government administration, fake and unhealthy advertisements keep coming up in large numbers in modern society. Speculators an
5、ticipate this variety of ads would bring satisfactory profits. However, they are extremely wrong. Apparently, we come to realize that these advertisements bring widespread destruction to our life. For one thing, consumers are entitled to be clear about products, but fake ads violate the very right,
6、covering up the truth and even threatening our life and property. For another, in terms of economy, they are huge obstacles to fair competition, disturbing normal marketing orders. In consequence, the expansion of consuming demand is restricted, which hinders the economic development. In the light o
7、f what is mentioned above, some necessary measures must be taken to eliminate fake and unhealthy advertisements. The government is supposed to issue more related rules and regulations to protect consumers legal rights and impose severe punishments on those illegal merchants. Whats more, we should al
8、so endeavor to boycott these advertisements. 【试题解析】 第一段指出社会上出现很多虚假不健康广告。 第二段从两个方面阐述虚假广告给我们带来的危害。首先,虚假广告剥夺了消费者的知情权;其次,它扰乱正常的市场秩序,妨碍经济发展。 第三段表明自己的观点,我们应该采取措施清除虚假不健康广告。政府应出台相关规章制度,严厉打击违法的广告商;消费者也要努力抵制这种广告。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 On the Development of Science and Technology It is widely acknowledged that th
9、e development of science and technology makes our life more comfortable and convenient. The modern telecommunications shorten the distance between people, various transportation modes ensure smooth travel, and advanced medicine and medical treatment promote peoples health and prolong peoples lifespa
10、n. However, many severe problems arise in the process of scientific development. For one thing, environmental pollution is one of the most serious problems, some of which are caused by the advanced science and technology. For another, food safety is an increasingly important public health issue. It
11、is reported that food-borne diseases are a widespread and ever-growing public health problem, both in developed and developing countries. In short, the development of science and technology is a double-edged sword, which brings about both positive and negative influences. First and foremost, sustain
12、able development can be greatly promoted. In addition, we can make full use of its advantages to develop more “green“ food for the public. 【试题解析】 第一段指出科学技术的发展促进了社会的进步,改善了人们的生活条件,如现代通信技术和交通方式的发展为人们提供了便利,医疗的发达使人们的寿命延长。本段多用并列短语,丰富了表达方式,如 shorten the distance between people, ensure smooth travel, promot
13、e peoples healthand prolong peoples lifespan等。 第二段阐述了科技发展带来的一些问题,如环境污染严重,食品安全令人担忧。 第三段阐明自己的观点,即科学技术是把双刃剑,只有充分利用其优点,才能有效促进可持续发展。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 Low-carbon Life Every one of us is responsible for the greenhouse gases emitted in our daily life. Therefore, the notion of low-carbon life has come into
14、 existence and become popular all over the world. To live a low-carbon life needs everyones consciousness and daily efforts. Firstly, we should start off by calculating our own carbon footprints, which means that attention should be paid to details, such as what sort of apartment we live in, our per
15、sonal use of energy and travelling habits. Secondly, we should carry out the low-carbon concept in every aspect of our daily life. For example, we should use physical power rather than gasoline when we can, minimize the use of bottled water, and choose food thoughtfully. Last but not least, new low-
16、carbon technology should be adopted to help establish the low-carbon lifestyle. As far as I am concerned, it is meaningful to call on people to start a low-carbon life as soon as possible. This new lifestyle will not only contribute to the environmental protection but also bring us a much healthier
17、body. 【试题解析】 第一段指出随着环保意识的提高,应对气候变化和推行低碳生活已经成为近年来世界范围内热议的话题。 第二段从三个方面阐述了推行低碳生活的一些相关措施。首先,测量自己的碳足迹,以清楚地知道自己的碳排放量;其次,从生活中的小事做起,减少碳排放,降低能源消耗;最后,积极推广低碳技术在日常生活中的应用。第二句使用which引导的非限制性定语从句,进一步解释说明前面的主句内容;从句中又套用了 that引导的宾语从句,并用 such as导出一系列的例子。 第三段提出自己的观点。推广低碳 生活方式意义深远,它不仅带给我们健康的环境,还能让我们拥有更加健康的身体。末句使用 not onl
18、ybut also 连接两个动词短语,是一个有用的高分句型。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 A Worldwide Wave of Learning Chinese Nobody has failed to notice that more and more foreign people are becoming interested in China. A lot of schools and colleges have held Chinese classes, and a worldwide wave of learning Chinese has come into exist
19、ence. Generally speaking, there are two main reasons accounting for this phenomenon. For one thing, recent decades have witnessed the rapid development of China. With its increasing influence, Chinese people have gained more popularity and have successfully entered foreign peoples lives. For another
20、, cooperation between China and other countries has become so frequent that foreign people are eager to learn Chinese so as to communicate with us more successfully. Obviously, the popularity of learning Chinese has been a great opportunity for China to introduce its fabulous culture to the world. T
21、he more foreign people are addicted to Chinese, the more they will learn about China. As a Chinese student, I believe that it is our responsibility to introduce our language and culture to foreign people. Only in this way can our country be recognized and understood better in the world. 【试题解析】 第一段提出 ,现在世界上正在掀起一股学习汉语的热潮,越来越多的学校设立汉语课程。 第二段首先从两方面阐述出现汉语热的原因。一方面,中国的迅速发展有目共睹,国际影响力与日俱增,吸引了众多外国人的关注;另一方面,中国与世界各国之间的合作正在逐步加深,越来越多的人学习汉语以便更好地开展交流与合作。然后简要说明了汉语热的影响:促进中国文化的传播。 第三段表明自己的观点。作为一名中国学生,要积极向世界传播我们的语言和文化。末句使用 Only位于句首的部分倒装结构总结自己的观点。 【知识模块】 作文