1、1关于 zoo1.写作步骤：定基调列提纲、写句子巧衔接添佳句成篇章2.写作任务：假如你是一位导游，近日有来自美国的外宾团要来参观你们市，第一站参观的是鑫海动物园，请你根据以下提示提前准备要介绍的内容。提示：最好的地方鑫海动物园规模大(占地面积约 210,000 m2)动物数量多(约 1000 只)种类丰富注意：适当运用最高级和比较级思路点拨：1. 定基调体裁：介绍某地，属于说明文。时态：一般现在时。人称：介绍某地，可用第三人称。2. 列提纲、写句子列提纲 写句子告知游览地点Hello! Welcome to my town! It is (1)_(最大最漂亮的市) in our provinc
2、e (省). There are many good places to visit but I think the best place is Xinhai Zoo.规模The zoo is new and it is (2)_(比其他两个动物园大) in our province. It is about 210,000 m2.动物数量The number of animals is the largest in our province. There are about 1,000 animals in total (总共).介绍游览地点动物种类The zoo has the most
3、kinds of animals.We have (3)_(最可爱的熊猫), the funniest monkeys and the biggest elephants.The tortoises (乌龟) are (4)_(比其他动物慢) but they are the most interesting.Do you want to see (5)_(最危险的动物)?2Come and see the wildest (最野性的) lions and the scariest tigers.祝福语 At last, I hope your trip will be an enjoyabl
4、e one.3. 巧衔接文中写动物种类丰富时，可以重复使用最高级，关键词的重复是一种很好的衔接手段。4. 添佳句It is our first stop and it will be an unforgettable stop.它是我们参观的第一站，也将是难忘的一站。5. 成篇章Hello! Welcome to my town!_At last, I hope your trip will be an enjoyable one.参考答案2. 列提纲、写句子(1) the biggest and most beautiful town(2) bigger than the other two
5、 zoos(3) the loveliest pandas(4) slower than other animals(5) the most dangerous animals5. 成篇章Hello! Welcome to my town! It is the biggest and most beautiful town in our province. There are many good places to visit but I think the best place is Xinhai Zoo. It is our first stop and it will be an unf
6、orgettable stop.The zoo is new and it is bigger than the other two zoos in our province. It is about 210,000 m2. The number of animals is the largest in our province. There are 3about 1,000 animals in total. Also the zoo has the most kinds of animals. We have the loveliest pandas, the funniest monkeys and the biggest elephants. The tortoises are slower than other animals but they are the most interesting. Do you want to see the most dangerous animals? Come and see the wildest lions and the scariest tigers.At last, I hope your trip will be an enjoyable one.
