1、12019 中考英语写作优享题（4）A2009 年 3 月至今，北京八达岭野生动物园发生了多起游客违反入园规则而导致的人员伤亡事件，这些悲剧发人深省。俗话说“没有规矩，不成方圆” ，作为中学生，我们应该遵守哪些规则，请结合下图和要点提示，写一篇英语短文。要点提示：1.遵守交通规则；2不插队；3遵守入园规则；4补充两点其他的规则。要求：1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；2条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于 80；3文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。提示词汇：jump the queue(插队)；fence(围栏)Were living in a harmonious socie
2、ty but sometimes we can see some bad behaviors around us.As teenagers，we should follow these rules.Firstly，we must obey the traffic rules whenever were in the street.Secondly，we shouldnt jump the queue if were in public places.Next，we need to follow the zoo rules because its safe to do so.Then，we mu
3、stnt spit or throw rubbish here and there.Lastly，we ought to say no to smoking and fighting that arent allowed at school.In a word，as long as we pay attention to those rules，we can live happily.B2假设你是李华，上周末你参加了一次郊游(outing)。请根据下面表格中的提示信息写一篇题为“A pleasant outing”的英语短文，参加某英文报纸的征文比赛。A pleasant outing时间 上
4、周末参加者 你和 地点 北山公园(the North Hill Park)活动 骑自行车、爬山、野餐、做游戏感受 要求：（1）不要逐条翻译表格中的信息，可适当增减内容；（2）短文中不得出现真实的地名、人名和校名；（3）词数: 80110 个。参考词汇：go for an outing; climb the hill; have a picnicA pleasant outing_【参考范文】One Possible versionA pleasant outingLast weekend, I went for an outing with my classmates. At 7:30 in
5、the morning, we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of the hill. After that, we walked down the path and had a rest. Later, some gir
6、ls danced under the trees and some 3boys played games happily. We didnt go back until 4:00 p.m We were tired but very happy.What a pleasant outing it was! (106 words)C假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Jack 来信，说他暑假期间要来中国交流学习。他学了两年中文，但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给 Jack 写封回信，提几点建议，要点如下：1. 大胆自信；2. 放慢语速；3. 借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式。注意：1. 词数
7、 80100；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：自信的 confident 肢体语言 body languageDear Jack，How is everything going? I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer. _Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua【参考范文】One possible version:4Dear Jack，How is everything going? I am very
8、glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer. Its not necessary to worry about your Chinese. Id like to share my ideas，which I think might help.First，be brave enough to speak Chinese when you communicate with others. Its of great importance to be confident about yourself. We Chinese are ve
9、ry friendly so you neednt be afraid of making any mistakes. Second，its better to speak slowly and clearly. In this way you can make yourself understood more easily. Whats more，sometimes you can use drawings or pictures，and as you know，body language is also widely used across cultures and very often
10、it really works.Best wishes!Yours，Li HuaD（旅游与交通） 根据要求完成短文写作。2016 年底以来，国内共享单车突然就火爆了起来，请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。内容包括：1共享单车目前在你所在城市的使用情况；2你对使用共享单车的看法(骑共享单车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等)；3呼吁同学们骑共享单车，绿色出行。作文要求：1不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。2. 语句连贯，词数 80 个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Nowadays, online shared bikes are becoming more
11、and more popular almost in every city in China._5_【参考范文】书面表达Nowadays, online shared bikes are becoming more and more popular almost in every city in China. In order to protect the environment, our city began to use shared bikes to reduce the traffic this year. Lots of people use shared bikes in thei
12、r daily life.In my opinion, it is not only convenient for people to go out but also its good for the environment. Whats more, we can take exercise with it so that it can make us healthy.All in all, riding shared bikes is a good choice. As students, its our duty to make our society more beautiful. Le
13、ts take action!E假如你叫张强，在昨天下午的篮球比赛中不小心伤了左臂，医生建议你在家休息两天, 因此你要向班主任赵老师请假。请根据以上信息写一则 40 词左右的请假条。Asking for LeaveMay 10th Dear Miss Zhao,Im sorry to tell you that I cant go to school today. Thank you! Your student,Zhang Qiang【参考范文】One possible version:Asking for Leave6May 10thDear Miss Zhao,Im sorry to te
14、ll you that I cant go to school today. I hurt my left arm (1 分) in the basketball match (1 分) yesterday afternoon (1 分).The doctor told me to have a rest at home for two days (1 分), so I will/ have to ask for two days / two-day leave (1 分). I hope Ill get well and return to school soon.Thank you!You
15、r student,Zhang QiangF你的房间一定很漂亮吧！请你为大家描述一下你的房间，不少于 5 句话。【参考范文】My roon is very tidy. I have a clock, it is on the white wall. My quite is on my bed. Where is my bag? Its under the table. My toy is in the box. I like my room very much. Do you like my room?G7如今助人为乐现象在我们日常生活中随处可见 你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部“将吸收新成员假如你是
16、王林，你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封自荐信要求：1表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；2要点须包括表格和四幅图片的信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等；3词数：80 左右 信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数部分参考词汇：helpwith/do； cross the road； give seats to； pick upDear headmaster，I am a student from Class 1，Grade 9Id like to be a member of Helping Hands Club_I am looking forward to your reply
17、Yours，Wang Lin【参考范文】I am healthyI work hard at my lessonsI like helping othersI get on well with my classmates and often help them with their lessonsOn my way home，Ioften help old people cross the streetOn the bus，Ialways give my seat to those who need helpSometimes，Ipick up rubbish in the parkIf Ij
18、oin the club，Ican do more for othersBesides，Iwill be able to make more friendsI will be glad if Iam accepted 【解析】Dear headmaster， I am a student from Class 1，Grade 9Id like to be a member of Helping Hands Club I am healthyI work hard at my lessonsI like helping othersI get on well 8with my classmate
19、s and often help them with their lessonsOn my way home，I often help old people cross the street 【高分句型】On the bus，I always give my seat to those who need help 【高分句型】Sometimes，I pick up rubbish in the park （通过图画介绍自己）If I join the club，I can do more for othersBesides，I will be able to make more friends
20、I will be glad if I am accepted 【高分句型】 （计划和打算） I am looking forward to your reply Yours， Wang Lin这是一篇图画作文内容是用英语写一封自荐信，希望加入“爱心俱乐部“时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时人称主要为第一人称 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1描述图画；帮助同学学习，帮助老人过马路，让座，拾垃圾 2计划和打算； 常用到的重点短语： work hard 学习努力 get on well with sb 与某人相处的好 help
21、 sb with sth 帮助某人做某事 give sth to sb 给某人某物 pick up 捡起 be able to 能 make friends 交朋友 【高分句型】 1On my way home，I oftenhelp old people cross the street on ones way to sp 在某人去某地的路上，home 是副词，故省略 to help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事 2On the bus，I always give my seat to those who need help give sth to sb 给某人某物 9who 作为关系
22、词的定语从句，修饰先行词 those，who 作为从句的主语 3I will be glad if Iam accepted if 引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则 一般现在时的被动语态 am/is/are+过去分词本题实际是应用文写作，所给材料是图画较为详细，动笔前先要认真看懂图画确定写作内容，注意不能遗漏要点根据要点内容可知要用简单句，包括主系表结构，主谓宾结构等根据所给内容本文人称主要是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态写作时要灵活运用，注意主谓一致，单词拼写正确，尤其要注意短文开头结尾书信的书写格式 应用文写作不同于其他作文的一个特点就是格式问题，另外就是写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依
