1、12019 中考英语写作金选（三）Passage-A(2018 贺州中考改编)书面表达。假设你是 Susan，在家里你的父母总是对你有很多要求，有时你是否感到厌烦？你是怎样解决的？请你根据下列表格提示用英语写一篇短文。父母的要求每天打扫房间；不能玩电脑游戏；晚上 10 点前必须睡觉你的看法 虽太严厉，但理解他们你的解决方式 与父母多交流；为父母做些家务要求：1.文章必须包括表格中所给提示内容，可以展开思路，自由地适当发挥；2不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息；3词数 80 左右。My_name_is_Susan.There_are_too_many_rules_in_my_family.I
2、_have_to_clean_the_room_every_day.I_am_not_allowed_to_play_computer_games_in_my_free_time.I_must_go_to_bed_by_10_pm.I_think_my_parents_are_too_strict_with_me.Sometimes_I_feel_bored，but_I_know_they_really_love_me.I_communicate_with_my_parents_as_much_as_possible，sharing_my_happiness_and_sadness_with_
3、them.And_I_often_help_them_do_housework.These_are_my_good_ways_to_get_on_well_with_them.Passage-B温馨提示：（短文书写于答题卡卷 II 规定的位置。 ）学校决定本周星期六（2011 年 5 月 14 日）晚上以班为单位召开家长座谈会，会议将于七点半开始，地点是本班教室。届时将通报孩子在校学习情况，并就如何促使孩子学好功课征求家长意见。请你代替八年级（4）班班主任杨老师用英语向林涛的家长写一份邀请书。要求：格式正确，语言流畅，表达清楚；书写规范，字迹清楚；词数：70-80._2_ 【参考范文】One
4、possible version：INVITATIONDear Mr/Mrs Lin;Im glad to invite you to come to our parents meeting in our school at 7:30 p.m. on Saturday, May 14th. We will hold the parents meeting in the classroom of Class 4, Grade 8.At the meeting we will tell you something about your sons study. We will also listen
5、 to your advice on how to improve all his lessons. We hope you can come on time.Hope to see you then!SincerelyMr. YangPassage-C请仔细审图，假设这是 Jane 的房间，请你根据提示词汇帮她描述一下房间内物品的摆放情况要求：以第一人称描述，不少于 40 词开头已给出，不计入总词数提示词汇：bed，shoes（鞋） ，picture，wall（墙） ，bookcase，clock，computer，CDsThis is my roomIts very clean!【参考范文
6、】31. This is my room（高分句型） Its very clean!（引出话题）There is a big bedMy shoes are near the bed（高分句型） My alarm clock is on the dresserThose are my picturesThey are on the wallWhere are my books？Look!They are in my bookcaseAnd on the desk are my computer and some CDs （具体介绍房间内物品的摆放情况） 【解析】这是一篇图片作文本文要求按照题目
7、要求结合图片中的内容完成这篇介绍房间摆设的作文写作中要包含房间内物品的摆放位置、注意方位的描述等根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系 高分句型： This is my room这是我的房间句子中 This is 表示这是什么，用以介绍某人或者某物 My shoes are near the bed我的鞋子在床附近这里 near the bed 表示在床附近这篇短文简明、扼要地介绍了房间的布局，并包含了文中所要求的基本信息其中句式灵活、多变，介词短语的准确使用为文章增色不少如 on the bed，under the bed
8、，Those are my pictures ，Where are my books？Look!，最为值得称道的是倒装句式的运用很到位，如 And on the desk are my computer and some CDs学习中再注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理Passage-D今天，你与妈妈在家里后电视新闻时，了解到我国刚刚颁布了对公共场馆的全面“禁烟令”。吸烟不仅浪费金钱，对自己、他人的健康以及环境造成极大危害，而且易引发火灾，甚至造成人员伤亡。因而，你与妈妈商定，由你用英文向身为烟民的爸爸列出吸烟的五点危害，力劝他戒烟。注意
9、：可以参考以下词汇：cause, waste, harm, pollute, lose【参考范文】1. Smoking can cause a lot of illness.2. Smoking will waste much money.3. Smoking is harmful for your health.4. Smoking will pollute the air.45. Smoking will make you lose some friends.Passage-E假设你是李华，上周末你参加了一次郊游(outing)。请根据下面表格中的提示信息写一篇题为“A pleasant
10、outing”的英语短文，参加某英文报纸的征文比赛。A pleasant outing时间 上周末参加者 你和 地点 北山公园(the North Hill Park)活动 骑自行车、爬山、野餐、做游戏感受 要求：（1）不要逐条翻译表格中的信息，可适当增减内容；（2）短文中不得出现真实的地名、人名和校名；（3）词数: 80110 个。参考词汇：go for an outing; climb the hill; have a picnicA pleasant outing_【参考范文】One Possible versionA pleasant outingLast weekend, I wen
11、t for an outing with my classmates. At 7:30 in the morning, we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb 5the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of the hill. After that, we walk
12、ed down the path and had a rest. Later, some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didnt go back until 4:00 p.m We were tired but very happy.What a pleasant outing it was! (106 words)Passage-F（故事与诗歌）经过三年的初中生活，同学们已经读过很多有益的故事。请用英语给我们介绍一个你最爱的故事。内容包括：1这个故事的主要内容；2你从这个故事中学到了什
13、么；3邀请大家都来读这个故事。作文要求：1不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。2. 语句连贯，词数 80 个左右。_【参考范文】书面表达Have you ever heard of the story Yu Gong Moves a Mountain? Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yu Gong. There were two mountains near his house. It took him a long time to walk to the other side. He began t
14、o move the mountains with his families. They put all the earth and stones from the mountains to the sea. Yu Gong was brave, because he kept trying and didnt give up. I hope everyone can spend some time reading the story. You can learn many things from it.6Passage-G话题作文-环境保护类如今，环境变得越来越糟糕。环境问题影响着我们的工作
15、、学习、生活等，而我们的工作、生活、生产又使环境污染越来越严重。如何保护我们的环境？请以“How to protect our environment？”为题写一篇短文。存在问题：1水污染和大气污染越来越严重； 2森林被破坏和砍伐； 3白色垃圾随处可见。要求：如何改善/保护环境？至少提出 34 条建议，80 词左右。How to protect our environment?The environmental pollution is more and more serious today.We have no clean water to drink because of water po
16、llution.And when trees are cut down，some animals disappear.There is more and more dirty smoke in the air.Peoples health has been greatly affected by air，noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life，its time for us to protect our world.As for me，we shouldnt throw away rubbish everywhere.And we should recycle，reduce and reuse things，for this can save money and reduce pollution.Use things for as long as possible.Dont use plastic bags.Also，we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful. 7
