1、1第四节 短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及 一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号() ，并在其下面写出该增加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多 者(从第 11 处起)不计分。AFull Moon，Full FeelingsChinese people have been celebrating the MidAutumn Festival and enjo
2、y mooncakes for centuries.Mooncakes are in the shape of a full moon in the Midautumn night.They carry peoples wishes to the families they love and miss.There are many traditions folk stories about this festival.However，most people think that the story of Change is the most touching.Change was Hou Yi
3、s beautiful wife. After Hou Yi shooted down the nine suns，a goddess gave him a magic medicine thank him.Whoever drank this could live forever，and Hou Yi planed to drink it with Change.However，a bad man，Fang Meng，tried to steal the medicine when Hou Yi was not home.Change refused to give it to him an
4、d drank it all.She became very light and flew up the moon.Hou Yi was so sad that he called out her name to the moon every night.One night，he found that the moon was such bright and round that he could see his wife there.He quickly laid out her favorite fruits or desserts in the garden.How he wished
5、that Change could come back! After this， people started the tradition of admiring the moon and sharing mooncakes to their families.BThe Spirit of ChristmasMany would agree that when we think of Christmas，we probably think of gifts，Christmas trees and Santa Claus.But behind all these things lie the t
6、rue meaning of Christmas：the important of sharing and giving love and joy to people around us.The story in A Christmas Carol is perhaps the best example of this.A Christmas Carol is a famous short novel writes by Charles Dickens.It is about an old man named Scrooge who never laughs or smiles.He is m
7、ean and only thinks about him.He doesnt treat others nice.He j ust cares about whether he can make more money and he hates Christmas.On Christmas Eve，Scrooge sees the ghost of Jacob Marley，his dead business partners.Marley used to be just like Scrooge，so he was punished after he died.He warns Scroog
8、e to change his ways if he doesnt want to end up like him.He also tells Scrooge to expect three spirits visit him.That night，three ghosts visit Scrooge.First，the Ghost of Christmas Past takes him back to his childhood and reminds Scrooge of his happy days as a child.Then the second spirit，the Ghost
9、of Christmas Present，takes him to see how others are spending Christmas this year.Everyone is happy，even poor people.The last one，the Ghost of Christmas Yet to Come，takes him to the future.Scrooge sees that he is dead，but nobody cares.He is so scared that he wakes up in his bed and finds out it is o
10、nly next morningChristmas Day!He decides to change his life and promises to be a better person.He happily celebrates Christmas with his relatives.He also gives gifts to people in need.He now treats everyone with kindness and warm， spreading love and joy everywhere he goes.And that is the true spirit of Christmas!2参考答案455
