1、1第四节 短文改错假定英语课上老师 要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处 。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该增加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。AIf you go to another country,what kinds of things would you buy?Would you buy a camera in
2、Japan,some beautiful cloth in France,or a watch in Switzerland?No matter what you may buy,you might think that products were made in those countries.However,you could wrong.Kang Jian is a 17yearold student from Shanghai.Last year he went to visit his aunt and uncle in San Francisco.He found it inter
3、esting that so many products in the local shops made in China.“I wanted to buy a toy car for my cousin,but even though most of the toys were American brands,they were made in China.”Toys are not the only things made in China.“I wanted to buy a pair of basketball shoes,”he explains.“But I had to visi
4、t five or six stores before find a pair made in America!”He realized that Americans can hard avoid buying products made in China.“In fact,” he continues,“there were many another things there made in Chinafootballs,handbags ,pet foods,mobile phones.Even American flags are made in China!” Kang Jian th
5、inks its great that China is so good at making these everyday things.However,he hopes that in the future China will also get best at making hightechnology products that people can buy in all parts of the world.BBeauty in Common ThingsEach different part of China has it own special forms of tradition
6、al art.These usually try to show the things that are important in life such as love,beauty and family.The most common things,from paper to clay to bamboo,are turned into objects of beautiful.According to Chinese history,sky lanterns were first used by Zhuge Kongming.He send them out to ask for help
7、when in trouble.Today,sky lanterns are used at festivals and other celebrations.They are made from bamboo and covered with paper.When the lanterns are lit,they slow rise into the air like small hotair balloons for all to see.They are seen as bright symbols of happiness and good wishes.Paper cutting
8、has been around for over 1,500 years.Paper cutting sounds very easy and it can be difficult to do.The paper,u sually red,is folded before it is cut with scissors.The most common pictures are flowers,animals and things about Chinese history.During the Spring Festival,they are putted on windows,doors
9、and walls as symbols of wishes for good luck and a happy new year.Chinese clay art is famous because the clay pieces are so small but they look very really.The pieces are usually cute children or lively characters from a Chinese fairy tale or history story.The pieces are carefully shaped by hand fro
10、m a very special kind of clay and then allowed to airdry.After dry,they are fired at a very high heat.They are then polished and painted.Finally,materials such as wood or paper are added to make different things.It takes several weeks to complete everything.These small pieces of clay art show the love that all Chinese people have for life and beauty.2参考答案355