1、1满分作文的 3 大技巧按要求升级下面的考生作文(2017全国卷)假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友 Eric 写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：1球队活动；2报名方式及截止日期。注意：1词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。考生习作Dear Eric，Im writing to invite you to join our school team. Students have told me that our school team is recruiting new members. I know that you like playing ta
2、ble tennis，so I want to know whether you would like to join it. Team members not only get trained after school every day，but are often offered chances to watch table tennis competitions. That has done good to me. If you are interested in it，you can visit the school website to sign up before the clos
3、ing date，June 15. Im sure it will be a great choice if you join the school team. Yours sincerely，Li Hua 我来提升作文升级第一步 让词汇高级亮丽利用高级词汇升级文中加黑体词汇1told _informed_ 2like _be keen on_ 3want to know _wonder_ 4chances _opportunity_ 5do good to _benefit/be of benefit to/be beneficial to_ 6sure _convinced_ 作文升级第二
4、步 让句式丰富多变按要求升级句式并将黑体词语替换为升级后的词汇21利用被动句改写句_I have been informed that our school team is recruiting new members. _ 2利用分词作状语升级句_Knowing that you are keen on playing table tennis， I wonder whether you would like to join it. _ 3利用倒装句升级句_Not only team members get trained after school every day， but are of
5、ten offered opportunities to watch table tennis competitions. _ 4利用非限制性定句从句合并句升级为倒装句后的句和句_Not only team members do get trained after school every day，_but are often offered opportunities to watch table tennis competitions，which has benefited me most. _ 誊写升级后的作文_Dear Eric，Im writing to invite you to
6、join our school team. I have been told that our school team is recruiting new members. _Knowing that you are keen on playing table tennis， I wonder whether you would like to join it. Not only team members do get trained after school every day but are also often offered opportunities to watch table tennis competitions， which has benefited me most. If you are interested in it， you can visit the school website to sign up before the deadline，June 15. Im convinced it will be a great choice if you join the school team. _ _Yours sincerely，_ _Li Hua_
