1、1第十一讲 八年级下 Units 12考纲话题:安全与救护安全与救护是近年来的热门写作话题。该话题作文的命制主要围绕校园安全、交通安全、急救知识、自我保护等主题展开,通常以安全须知或建议、规则等形式出现。【提分好词】校园安全1.push ones way 挤着前进2.run in the hallways 在走廊里跑3.fight with 和打架4.wait in line 排队等候5.keep away from 远离6.keep in order 维持秩序交通安全1.follow the traffic rules 遵守交通规则 2.traffic lights 交通信号灯3.on on
2、es way to 在某人去的路上 4.pass by 经过 5.get in the way of 挡的路;妨碍急救知识1.get hurt 受伤2.keep cool 保持冷静23.first aid 急救4.prevent.from.防止5.as soon as possible 尽快6.take action 采取行动其他1.make sure 确保2.lead to 导致3.be in (great ) danger 处于(极大的)危险中 4.ask.for help 向寻求帮助【提分好句】重要性1.The cost of breaking the traffic rules is
3、terrible.违反交通规则的代价是沉重的。2.Safety comes first.安全第一。3.Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers.对青少年来说,自我保护是最重要的技能之一。4.We should treasure our lives.我们应该珍爱生命。如何做1.No matter what happens, I should keep cool.无论发生什么,我都应该保持冷静。2.Following these ways, Ill surely be able to protect myse
4、lf from being hurt.遵照这些方法,我一定能保护自己免受伤害。3.We are supposed to control the time of playing computer games.我们应该控制玩电脑游戏的时间。34.We shouldnt accept the things given by strangers.我们不应该接受陌生人给的东西。5.Everyone should watch out when crossing the road.每个人过马路时都应该小心。6.Parents warn us not to play on the road.父母告诫我们不要在
5、路上玩耍。7.We must follow the traffic rules and not cross the street when the red light is on.我们必须遵守交通规则,不闯红灯。8.Last but not least, we should ask adults for help at once when in danger.最后但同样重要的一点,当身处险境时,我们应该立即向大人求救。9.In a word, taking these points above seriously can help us keep safe and enjoy our scho
6、oldays.总之,认真对待上述要点有助于我们维护自身安全,享受我们的在校时光。假定你是王伟,你的英国笔友 David 来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。家庭安全:小心用火用电,外出时关好门窗;游泳安全:不独自去游泳,不去河、湖游泳;交通安全: 过马路要当心,不在马路上玩耍。提示词:electricity(n.电)注意:1.词数 80100;2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;4.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。4【审题指导】本题为安全类话题作文,审题时需注意提取以下信息:1.主题:假期安全2.体裁:应用文3.人
7、称:第一人称4.时态:以一般现在时为主思路点拨:根据题干要求可知,回信的基本要点已给出,写作时可先初步确定该部分内容的表达形式,再根据实际生活经历对这些要点加以补充,最后对所构思内容加以润色, 以使行文流畅、表达层次分明。【思维模板】5【高分佳作】Dear David,Glad to receive your email.Our school has made many safety rules for us to follow.Let me tell you something about them.We are asked to be careful with electricity wh
8、en we are using it.It is dangerous to play with fire, for it may cause terrible accidents. We should make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave.Besides, we are not allowed to swim alone, especially in deep rivers or lakes.If we really want to, we must go to the swimming pool with our paren
9、ts or teachers. Whats more, following traffic rules is also very important.Everyone should watch out when crossing the road.And our school warns us not to play on the road.I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first.Have a good summer holiday!【得分点拨】运用含时间状语从句和原因状语从句的复合句使语言表达流畅,富有层次感妙用短语,言简意赅巧用副词,为语言增色Whats more 进一步深化文章层次6Yours,Wang Wei
