1、1第四节 短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该增加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改 ：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出 修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。AMany have heard shark fin soup.This famous and expensive dish is especially popular in south
2、ern China.But do you realize that youre killing a whole shark each time you enjoy a bowl of shark fin soup?When people catch sharks，they cut off their fins and throw the shark back the ocean.Without a fin，a shark can no longer swim and slowly die.This is not only cruel，but also harmful to the enviro
3、nment.Sharks are the top of the food chain in the oceans ecosystem.If their numbers drop too low，it will bring danger to all ocean life.Many believe that sharks can never be endangered because they are the strongest at their food chain.But in fact，around 70 million sharks are caught and traded in th
4、is industry every year.The numbers of some kinds of sharks have falled by over 90 percent in the last 20 to 30 years.Environment protection groups around the world，such as WildAid and the WWF，are teaching the public about “finning”They have even asked governments to develop laws stop the sale of sha
5、rk fins.So far，no scientific studies shows that shark fins are good for healthy，so why eat them？Hel p save the sharks!BRethink，Reuse，Recycle!Do you often throw away things you dont need anymore？Have you ever thought about how these things can actually be put to good use？Nothing is a waste if you hav
6、e a creative mind.You have probably never heard of Amy Hayes，but she is a unusual woman.She lives in a house in the UK that she built herself out of rubbish.The windows and doors come from old buildings around her town that was pulled down.The top of the house is an old boat turned upside down.And t
7、he gate in front of her house is made from rocks and old glass bottles.Amy recently won a prize from the Help Save Our Planet Society.The president said， “Amy is an inspiration to us all.”Amy isnt the only one who is good in recycling.Jessica Wong from Hong Kong uses old clothes that people dont wea
8、r anymore make bags.She has been doing this for a few years now.She opened a small shop where she sells her bags，and she has also set up a website to sell them online.She especially likes to use old jeans make handbags.Her bags are cute and useful.“I plan to write a book about new ways to use old cl
9、othes， ” she said.“I hope people can read my book and enjoy it！”Wang Tao sets up a small business in Shanghai four years ago.He is known as using iron and other materials from old cars to make beautiful art pieces.Some are large pieces that look like animals or humans，and some are smaller pieces you
10、 can put in home.The more popular works can even be see in art shops around the city.Wang Tao hopes to set up a “metal art”theme park to show people the importance of environmental protection.Not only 2can the art bring happiness to others，but it also shows that even cold，hard iron can be brought back to life with a little creativity.参考答案452
