1、1第四节 短文改错假定英 语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该增加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改： 在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。AFor this months Young World magazine，I interviewed 19yearold Asian pop star Candy Wang.Candy
2、 told me that she used to really shy and took up singing to deal with her shy.As she got better，she dared to sing in front of her class，and then for the whole school.Now shes not shy anymore and loves singing in front of crowds.I asked Candy how life was difference after she became famous.She explai
3、ned that there are many good things，like being able to travel and meet new people all the time.“I didnt use to be popular in school，but now I get ton of attention everywhere I go.” However，too many attention can also be a bad thing.“I always have to worry about how I appear to others，and I have to b
4、e very careful about what I say or do.And I dont have much private time anymore.Hang out with friends is almost impossible for me now because there are always guards around me.”What does Candy have to say to all those young people who wants to become famous？“Well，”she begins slowly，“you have to be p
5、repared to give up your normal life.You can never imagine how difficulty the road to success is.Many times I thought about giving up， but I fought on.You really require a lot of talent and hard work to succeeding.Only the very small number of people make it to the top.”BHow time flies！Three years mi
6、ddle school life reminds me many happy events.One of it is never forgotten.It is well worth remember.One day，Wu Mingjuan，m y best classmates found that I was quite sad about my English composition，so there were many mistakes.I didnt know how correct them.She told me how to do well in a patient way.S
7、he also suggests that I should do more reading and writing.I did as she told me.At last my English composition won the first prize in the school composition contest.At that time I realized of the meaning of “Practice makes perfect.” My classmates great help brought me great happiness.Happiness always go along with me in my middle school life.参考答案234
