1、英语写作基础自考题模拟 23 及答案解析(总分：92.00，做题时间：90 分钟)1.He got his first computer when he was fifteen. (simple sentence) （分数：2.00）_2.Independence Hall in Philadelphia is now restored. Fifty years ago it was in bad shape. (compound sentence) （分数：2.00）_3.Mr. Parker seems trust-worthy. Many people talk about his th
2、ree years spent in prison. (compound sentence) （分数：2.00）_4.Several other factors are pushing prices up, regardless of this currency phenomenon. (periodic sentence) （分数：2.00）_5.Morris often complains about things. He forgets about his sense of humour. (sentence with a modifying phrase) （分数：2.00）_6.I
3、want neither your sympathy nor do I want your pity. (sentence with parallel structure) （分数：2.00）_7.I had planned to return her camera. I borrowed it last week from her. She was not at home. I kept it for another day. (long sentence) （分数：2.00）_8.They are true sisters. It is clear from the facial rese
4、mblance between them. (sentence with a subject clause) （分数：2.00）_9.He had sent several text messages to her cellphone. There was no reply from her. He made up his mind to give her a call directly. (compound-complex sentence.) （分数：2.00）_10.They got lost in the jungle. John found a native. The native
5、led them out of the wet, dark jungle. (compound-complex sentence) （分数：2.00）_11.I choose English as my major, he specializes in biology. （分数：3.00）_12.Please give these clothes to those people. Who are deep in trouble. （分数：3.00）_13.I prefer dancing to swim when it comes to entertainment. （分数：3.00）_14.
6、Climbed up to the tree, he shouted and waved his hand to the rescue team. （分数：3.00）_15.Economists are applauded or ignored when the economy is strong; are criticized when it is weak. （分数：3.00）_16.Choose the best topic sentence from the group below by writing A, B, C or D.（分数：5.00）A.The branches are
7、growing over the back fence.B.The backyard needs a lot of work.C.The trees need trimming.D.Some branches are covering the telephone lines.17.Read the following paragraph and underline the topic sentence. Americans might be embarrassed because their Japanese friends are so formal with them. Japanese
8、might feel insulted because American acquaintances greet them casually. Still, the forms of greeting in both countries only show respect for others. It just happens that Americans and Japanese have a different way of looking at human relationships and thus have a different way of showing respect. （分
9、数：5.00）_18.Read the following paragraph carefully and choose the best topic sentence from the four possible answers that follow the paragraph by writing A, B, C or D Topic Sentence: _ At the turn of the century we“re faced with many social and economical problems, of which environmental pollution mi
10、ght be the most critical and vital. Every day when we look up, the sky is sadly gray. The moment we walk on the pavement or ride a bike in the street, we will smell the strong, thick gas emitted out of cars and trucks, along with much terrible noise. Each time we turn on TV, a couple of bad news abo
11、ut global warming and acid rains will flow into our ears. Our earth, as the single homeland we are able to count on now, is sufficiently eroded by air and land pollution.（分数：5.00）A.We“re faced with many serious problems.B.It is high time for us human beings to protect our own homelandthe earth.C.Air
12、 pollution is becoming serious.D.We must protect our land from erosion.19.How could they be shocked to see the same in real life? 20. They do believe that the violence they see is normal and acceptable. 21. Children do not have enough experience to realize that TV shows present an unreal world and t
13、hat commercials lie in order to sell products that are sometimes bad or useless. 22. They do believe they will make more friends if they use a certain soapor some other products. 23. All educators and psychologists agree that the “television generations“ are more violent than their parents and grand
14、parents. 24. Unfortunately, television“s influence has been extremely harmful to the young. 25. By the time they are out of high school, most young people have watched 15,000 hours of television, and have seen about 18,000 killings or other acts of violence. 26. They believe and want to imitate what
15、 they see. 26 22 20 （分数：2.00）20.Youth workers Bill Nash and Jim Boyle are house-hunters, not so much for a house as for a concerned family willing to house and feed troubled youngsters temporarily. They try to give prompt (及时的) attention to those who cannot or will not live at home. There are numero
16、us parents who want to find houses for their children to live in by themselves. For some, leaving home may have been the result of a hasty decision, based on a scorching(灼热的) remark and the subsequent tempest(风暴)within the family. The cooling-off period away from the family is the time to soothe(安抚)
17、feelings. With sympathetic outsiders, youngsters have a chance to redeem (弥补) themselves. The hope, of course, is that they will learn to relate to adults again and quickly resume the normal life of harmony with their own families. Some people refrain from offering their homes, expressing vague fear
18、s of the harmful effects on their own children. But this has not been the case, even when the problem of the “visitor“ was the illegal use of narcotics(麻醉剂). One parent remarked, “With us, it worked the other way. The honor of drugs became real to my own son. We got a lot more than we gave.“ The “vi
19、sitor“ really helped the family avoid the danger of becoming drug addicts. （分数：10.00）_21.Write a letter according to the following situation: Your name is Wang Tao. You are the dean of Biology Department, Beijing University of Medical Science. You heard from Prof. David Zhang that Prof. Paul Johnson
20、, Chief Director of Genetic Engineering Lab, University of Pennsylvania, was coming to China. Write a letter to invite him to give some lectures to the staff and students in your department. (150-200 words) （分数：30.00）_英语写作基础自考题模拟 23 答案解析(总分：92.00，做题时间：90 分钟)1.He got his first computer when he was fi
21、fteen. (simple sentence) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：He got his first computer at fifteen.解析 本题考查将复合句改写为简单句。“at fifteen”也可写成“at the age of fifteen”或“at age fifteen”。2.Independence Hall in Philadelphia is now restored. Fifty years ago it was in bad shape. (compound sentence) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：Independence
22、Hall in Philadelphia is now restored, but fifty years ago it was in bad shape. fifty years ago Independence Hall in Philadelphia was in bad shape, and it is now restored.解析 本题考查把两个句子组合成并列句。通读题目可知两句间是转折关系，故可用 but 连接，构成具有转折意义的并列句。或者重新组合，用连词 and 构成具有并列意义的并列句。3.Mr. Parker seems trust-worthy. Many people
23、 talk about his three years spent in prison. (compound sentence) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：Mr. Parker seems trust-worthy, but many people talk about his three years spent in prison.解析 本题考查将两个句子组合成并列句。题目前后两句具有转折关系，可用 but 连接构成并列句。4.Several other factors are pushing prices up, regardless of this currency phe
24、nomenon. (periodic sentence) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：Regardless of this currency phenomenon, several other factors are pushing prices up.解析 本题考查松句和掉尾句之间的转换。5.Morris often complains about things. He forgets about his sense of humour. (sentence with a modifying phrase) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：Often complainin
25、g about things, Morris forgets about his sense of humor.解析 本题考查含修饰性短语的句子。可将前句转换成状语，后句作为完整的句子，并将人称代词换为“Morris”。6.I want neither your sympathy nor do I want your pity. (sentence with parallel structure) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：I want neither your sympathy nor your pity.Neither do I want your sympathy nor
26、do I want your pity解析 本题考查含平行结构的句子。“neither.nor.”前后须结构一致，要么同为平行词语，要么同为平行句子(若是句子，必须倒装)。7.I had planned to return her camera. I borrowed it last week from her. She was not at home. I kept it for another day. (long sentence) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：I had planned to return her camera which I borrowed last w
27、eek from her, but she was not at home. so I kept it for another day.解析 本句考查将句子改写为长句。题目共有四个句子，根据语意关系，可以首先将第二句转换成定语从句修饰首句的“camera”；第三句和前面句子具有转折关系，故用“but”连接构成并列句；末句是在其前一句转折的基础上所导致的结果，故用“so”连接构成另一个并列句。8.They are true sisters. It is clear from the facial resemblance between them. (sentence with a subject
28、 clause) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：That they are true sisters is clear from the facial resemblance between them.解析 本题考查将句子改写为含主语从句的句子。该题可在句首添加 that，由 that 引导从句作主语从句，再把后句主语去掉，与主语从句连接即可。9.He had sent several text messages to her cellphone. There was no reply from her. He made up his mind to give her a call
29、directly. (compound-complex sentence.) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：After he had sent several text messages to her cellphone, there was no reply, so he made up his mind to give her a call directly.解析 本题考查将句子改写为并列复合句。通读题目发现，第三句为前面动作基础上产生的结果。根据题目要求和题目中动作先后顺序，可在句首增添“After”，使其引导首句作从句，这样就组成了一个并列复合句。10.They got lo
30、st in the jungle. John found a native. The native led them out of the wet, dark jungle. (compound-complex sentence) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：They got lost in the jungle, but John found a native who led them out of the wet, dark jungle.解析 本题考查将若干句子组合成并列复合句。通过分析各句之间的关系可以确定，前两句是转折关系，可用“but”连接构成并列句，而第三句则作为第二
31、句中“native”的定语从句。11.I choose English as my major, he specializes in biology. （分数：3.00）_正确答案：()解析：I choose English as my major, and he specializes in biology.解析 本题考查串句的修改，根据串句的修改方法，本题可选择通过添加连接词使原题成为并列句的方法。12.Please give these clothes to those people. Who are deep in trouble. （分数：3.00）_正确答案：()解析：Please
32、 give these clothes to those people who are deep in trouble.解析 本题考查修饰语错置引起的病句。本题可把后面的从句与其前的主句直接连接起来合并成一个句子。13.I prefer dancing to swim when it comes to entertainment. （分数：3.00）_正确答案：()解析：I prefer dancing to swimming when it comes to entertainment.解析 本题考查错误的平行结构。“prefer.to.”结构中，介词 to 前后要求连接相同词性或成分的词或
33、结构，所以题目中“swim”应改成“swimming”。14.Climbed up to the tree, he shouted and waved his hand to the rescue team. （分数：3.00）_正确答案：()解析：Climbing up to the tree, he shouted and waved his hand to the rescue team.解析 考查垂悬修饰语的修改。题目中“climbed”一词在句中无逻辑主语，故可将其转换成-ing 形式作后面主句的状语成分。15.Economists are applauded or ignored
34、when the economy is strong; are criticized when it is weak. （分数：3.00）_正确答案：()解析：Economists are applauded or ignored when the economy is strong; they are criticized when it is weak.解析 本题考查破句的修改。题目中分号前后应分别是一个独立的句子，所以可为分号后面的部分增添主语，使之成为一个完整的句子。本题也可改为：Economists are applauded or ignored when the economy
35、is strong, and criticized when it is weak.16.Choose the best topic sentence from the group below by writing A, B, C or D.（分数：5.00）A.The branches are growing over the back fence.B.The backyard needs a lot of work. C.The trees need trimming.D.Some branches are covering the telephone lines.解析：解析 主题句的作用
36、是概括一个段落的中心意思，所以往往是一个表示一般概念的句子。主题句的范围太大或者太小都会使作者无法展开段落。必须要通过某些限制性的词语将内容范围限制到一定程度，因此主题句应包括主题和限制词语。此题主要考查的是主题句的范围。此题比较简单，因为 A、C、D 选项范围过窄，无法展开描述，只有 B 选项可以展开描述“花园里都需要哪些工作”。17.Read the following paragraph and underline the topic sentence. Americans might be embarrassed because their Japanese friends are s
37、o formal with them. Japanese might feel insulted because American acquaintances greet them casually. Still, the forms of greeting in both countries only show respect for others. It just happens that Americans and Japanese have a different way of looking at human relationships and thus have a differe
38、nt way of showing respect. （分数：5.00）_正确答案：()解析：Americans might be embarrassed because their Japanese friends are so formal with them. Japanese might feel insulted because American acquaintances greet them casually. Still, the forms of greeting in both countries only show respect for others. It just
39、happens that Americans and Japanese have a different way of looking at human relationships and thus have a different way of showing respect. 解析 主题句是段落中表达中心思想的句子，它告诉读者这段话所讲的内容，统率全段。段落中的其他句子都应与主题句所提出的思想有关：说明它、展开它、为它服务。主题句通常位于段首，但有时也出现在段中或者段尾。在这段话中，前面几句主要是说美国人会因为日本人太正式而尴尬，而日本人会因为美国人太随便而觉得受到了冒犯。第三句话是说无论如何在这两个国家中问候都显示了对别人的尊重。最后一句话是对这种差异的解释，也是一个总结，所以是主题句。18.Read the following paragraph carefully and choose the best topic sentence from the four possible answers that follow the paragraph by writing A, B, C or D Topic Sent
