1、英语写作自考题-9 及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、B(总题数：1，分数：20.00)1. Attaining Success in CollegeSucceeding in college is not only important to getting an education, but also crucial in this day and age to success in the work place. To me, the three most important things for attaining a successful college exp
2、erience are having smart classroom conduct, taking advantage of campus resources, and making college the first priority._Making good use of campus resources is also of great importance to college success. The school library has many resources for the growth of the students mind. With computers and c
3、opy machines for individual use, computer labs and writing labs are there not just for learning purposes but also for actual help with writing papers. The “office hours“ will help the students build a close relationship with their professors and give them access to the professors mind. From the prof
4、essors the students can acquire possible extra information that may put them ahead of their study. All these resources are free, since they are funded by student tuitions. So taking good advantage of the resources can only make the students education more attainable.Finally, any students who want to
5、 assure success must establish school as the top priority. Personally I have watched some students slowly loosen up; I have seen a pattern of partying and a lack of motivation. Many of the freshmen have no idea why they are in college, and their “eyes“ often tell it all. This world is so rich in dis
6、tractions that it is hard to keep a strong focus, especially if one is just starting his or her academic career. It is said that the first semester is often the most “unsuccessful“ one. This certainly rings true for me. I made mistakes in this regard and eventually learned that, to achieve success,
7、school must always be placed above other things.In my college experience, I have observed and learned how to achieve success. I wish someone had told me earlier the importance of having that smart classroom conduct, of fully utilizing the school resources, and of making college my top priority. Then
8、, my college beginnings would not have been so rocky and tough.（分数：20.00）_二、B(总题数：1，分数：20.00)2. Alfred NobelA Man of ContrastsAlfred Nobel, the great Swedish inventor and industrialist, was a man of many contrasts. He was the son of a bankrupt, but became a millionaire; a scientist with a love of li
9、terature, an industrialist who managed to remain an idealist. He made a fortune but lived a simple life, and although cheerful in company he was often sad in private. A lover of mankind, he never had a wife or family to love him; a patriotic son of his native land, he died alone on foreign soil. He
10、invented a new explosive, dynamite, to improve the peacetime industries of mining and road building, but saw it used in war to kill and injure his fellow men. During his useful life he often felt he was useless: “Alfred Nobel,“ he once wrote of himself, “ought to have been put to death by a kind doc
11、tor as soon as, with a cry, he entered life.“ World-famous for his works he was never personally well-known, for throughout his life he avoided publicity. “I do not see,“ he once said, “that I have deserved any fame and I have no taste for it.“ But since his death, his name has brought fame and glor
12、y to others.He was born in Stockholm on October 21, 1833 but moved to Russia with his parents in 1842, where his father, Immanuel, made a strong position for himself in the engineering industry. Immanuel Nobel invented the landmine and made a lot of money from government orders for it during the Cri
13、mean War but went bankrupt soon after. Most of the family returned to Sweden in 1859, where Alfred rejoined them in 1863, beginning his own study of explosives in his fathers laboratory. He had never been to school or university but had studied on his own and by the time he was twenty was a skillful
14、 chemist and an excellent linguist speaking Swedish, Russian, German, French and English. Like his father, Alfred Nobel was imaginative and inventive, but he had better luck in business and showed more financial sense. He was quick to see industrial openings for his scientific inventions and built u
15、p over 80 companies in 20 different countries. Indeed his greatness lay in his outstanding ability to combine the qualities of an original scientist with those of a forward-looking industrialist.But Nobels main concern was never with making money or even with making scientific discoveries. Seldom ha
16、ppy, he was always searching for a meaning of life, and from his youth had taken a serious interest in literature and philosophy. Perhaps because he could not find ordinary human lovehe never marriedhe came to care deeply about the whole of mankind. He was always generous to the poor: “Id rather tak
17、e care 6f the stomachs of the living than the glory of the dead in the form of stone memorials.“ He once said, his greatest wish, however, was to see an end to wars, and thus peace between nations, and he spent much time and money working for this cause until his death in Italy in 1896. His famous w
18、ill, in which he left money to provide prizes for outstanding work in Physics, Chemistry, Physiology or Medicine, Literature, and Peace, is a memorial to his interests and ideals. And so, the man who felt he should have died at birth is remembered and respected long after his death.（分数：20.00）_三、B(总题
19、数：1，分数：60.00)3.The examination system has come to be the main theme of modern education. Some people are in favor of the important role of examination in the realm of education. Other people maintain that such an examination system should be abolished. Should examination be abolished? What is your o
20、pinion? Write an essay of about 300 words to support your ideas.（分数：60.00）_英语写作自考题-9 答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、B(总题数：1，分数：20.00)1. Attaining Success in CollegeSucceeding in college is not only important to getting an education, but also crucial in this day and age to success in the work place. To
21、me, the three most important things for attaining a successful college experience are having smart classroom conduct, taking advantage of campus resources, and making college the first priority._Making good use of campus resources is also of great importance to college success. The school library ha
22、s many resources for the growth of the students mind. With computers and copy machines for individual use, computer labs and writing labs are there not just for learning purposes but also for actual help with writing papers. The “office hours“ will help the students build a close relationship with t
23、heir professors and give them access to the professors mind. From the professors the students can acquire possible extra information that may put them ahead of their study. All these resources are free, since they are funded by student tuitions. So taking good advantage of the resources can only mak
24、e the students education more attainable.Finally, any students who want to assure success must establish school as the top priority. Personally I have watched some students slowly loosen up; I have seen a pattern of partying and a lack of motivation. Many of the freshmen have no idea why they are in
25、 college, and their “eyes“ often tell it all. This world is so rich in distractions that it is hard to keep a strong focus, especially if one is just starting his or her academic career. It is said that the first semester is often the most “unsuccessful“ one. This certainly rings true for me. I made
26、 mistakes in this regard and eventually learned that, to achieve success, school must always be placed above other things.In my college experience, I have observed and learned how to achieve success. I wish someone had told me earlier the importance of having that smart classroom conduct, of fully u
27、tilizing the school resources, and of making college my top priority. Then, my college beginnings would not have been so rocky and tough.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(To begin with, attaining success in college involves smart classroom conduct consisting of regular class attendance and active class participation
28、. Attending class regularly, the students can have access to all the information provided by the professors who always give clues to concepts that will be tested on later. In addition, the students need to get fully involved in class activities. Regular interaction with the professors not only gives
29、 them a chance to clear any questions they may have, but also gives the professors a chance to see how well they learn. And learning with their peers can be fun, too. Therefore, smart class conduct is crucial to achieving success in college.)解析：解析 这是一篇说明文，是关于在大学中如何取得成功的文章。中心思想句是首段最后一句：To me, the thr
30、ee most important things for attaining a successful college experience are having smart classroom conduct, taking advantage of campus resources, and making college the first priority. 其中的关键词分别是：having smart classroom conduct, taking advantage of campus resources, and making college the first priorit
31、y。文章要求补充第二段，也就是第一个主体段。第一个主体段所对应的段落大意关键词是：having smart classroom conduct。即段落围绕“为什么 smart classroom conduct在成功中作用重大”展开即可。 第一段：开头段，成功地度过大学生活不仅能获得教育，同时对今后在工作岗位上的成功也有至关重要的影响。作者认为对于如何成功地度过大学生活需要做好三件事，即好的课堂表现，充分利用大学的资源，把大学作为优先的选择。这部分分别对应三个主体段落，是整篇文章的限定语。 (1)be crucial to 对于是至关重要的 Succeeding in college is n
32、ot only important to getting an education, but also crucial in this day and age to success in the work place. 成功地度过大学生活不仅能获得教育，同时对今后在工作岗位上的 成功也有至关重要的影响。 Speed is crucial to our success. 速度对于我们的成功至关重要。 (2)take advantage of利用 Take advantage of campus resources 利用大学资源 第三段：主体段二，对应的是：taking advantage of
33、campus resources, 这段主要从充分利用大学的资源这个角度来阐述。然后讲到图书馆能增长同学们的知识；计算机室不仅能帮助学生学到相关的计算机知识，同时还能为写论文起到辅助的作用；教授的“坐班时间”不仅能使学生和教授建立紧密的关系，还能使学生有机会了解教授的思想，得到有价值的信息。这些资源都是免费的。可见，充分利用大学的资源能让学生有更多的收获。 (1)make good use of充分利用 Making good use of campus resources is also of great importance to college success. 充分利用大学的资源对于成
34、功地度过大学也很重要。 (2)give someone access to 给某人的机会 The “office hours“ will help the students build a close relationship with their professors and give them access to the professors mind. 教授的“坐班时间”能帮同学和教授建立紧密的关系，并且使他们能够有机会理解教授的思想。 第四段：主体段三，对应的是：making college the first priority，讲到任何想取得成功的人必须把大学当成第一选择。就个人而言
35、，作者看到很多学生慢慢地堕落。有很多大学新生不知道为什么要上大学，从他们的眼中就能看到这一点。这个世界有太多的诱惑，这使人很难集中精力做一件事情，尤其是对那些刚开始学术生涯的人而言。人们常说，大一往往是最不成功的。这对我再正确不过了，最终我明白，要取得成功，学校的教育必须放在第一位。 第五段：结论段，通过我自己的大学经历，我懂得了如何取得成功。但我特别希望曾经有人告诉我这三件事的重要性，如果那样的话，我的大学的开始阶段就不会过得那么艰辛。 文章的结构很明确，总分总。所以第二段需要补充的就是关于要有好的课堂表现的方面。联系现实，可以选择几个典型的表现加以说明。比如按时上课，积极参与课堂活动。然后
36、简单地阐述一下其意义。最后再用一句话点一下本段的主题。 下面看一下句子的组织： (1)获得成功 get/achieve/attain success (2)明智的课堂表现 smart classroom conduct (3)包括 consist of/include/contain (4)上课 attend class/class attendance (5)获得 have access to/get/attain (6)参与 get involved in/take part in/join in (7)交流 interact with/communicate with (8)成功地度过大
37、学生活涉及到明智的课堂表现。这些表现包括按时上课和积极地参与课堂活动等。 Attaining success in college involves smart classroom conduct consisting of regular class attendance and active class participation. (9)按时上课有助于学生全面地获得教授传授的知识，这些知识往往与考试的内容相关。 Attending class regularly, the students can have access to all the information provided b
38、y the professors who always give clues to concepts that will be tested on later. (10)学生需要充分地参与到课堂活动中去。 Students need to get fully involved in class activities. (11)经常和教授交流，一方面使学生有机会把不懂的问题弄明白，另一方面，使教授有机会了解学生对于知识的掌握程度。 Regular interaction with the professors not only gives them a chance to clear any q
39、uestions they learn, but also gives the professors a chance to see how well they learn. 连接词的补充 表示先后顺序 First, second.表示递进 Furthermore/moreover/what is more/in addition to/besides 表示总结 consequently/in summary/in conclusion/finally 表示对比 here. there/this. that/the former. the latter/some. others/on the
40、one hand. on the other hand二、B(总题数：1，分数：20.00)2. Alfred NobelA Man of ContrastsAlfred Nobel, the great Swedish inventor and industrialist, was a man of many contrasts. He was the son of a bankrupt, but became a millionaire; a scientist with a love of literature, an industrialist who managed to remai
41、n an idealist. He made a fortune but lived a simple life, and although cheerful in company he was often sad in private. A lover of mankind, he never had a wife or family to love him; a patriotic son of his native land, he died alone on foreign soil. He invented a new explosive, dynamite, to improve
42、the peacetime industries of mining and road building, but saw it used in war to kill and injure his fellow men. During his useful life he often felt he was useless: “Alfred Nobel,“ he once wrote of himself, “ought to have been put to death by a kind doctor as soon as, with a cry, he entered life.“ W
43、orld-famous for his works he was never personally well-known, for throughout his life he avoided publicity. “I do not see,“ he once said, “that I have deserved any fame and I have no taste for it.“ But since his death, his name has brought fame and glory to others.He was born in Stockholm on October
44、 21, 1833 but moved to Russia with his parents in 1842, where his father, Immanuel, made a strong position for himself in the engineering industry. Immanuel Nobel invented the landmine and made a lot of money from government orders for it during the Crimean War but went bankrupt soon after. Most of
45、the family returned to Sweden in 1859, where Alfred rejoined them in 1863, beginning his own study of explosives in his fathers laboratory. He had never been to school or university but had studied on his own and by the time he was twenty was a skillful chemist and an excellent linguist speaking Swe
46、dish, Russian, German, French and English. Like his father, Alfred Nobel was imaginative and inventive, but he had better luck in business and showed more financial sense. He was quick to see industrial openings for his scientific inventions and built up over 80 companies in 20 different countries.
47、Indeed his greatness lay in his outstanding ability to combine the qualities of an original scientist with those of a forward-looking industrialist.But Nobels main concern was never with making money or even with making scientific discoveries. Seldom happy, he was always searching for a meaning of l
48、ife, and from his youth had taken a serious interest in literature and philosophy. Perhaps because he could not find ordinary human lovehe never marriedhe came to care deeply about the whole of mankind. He was always generous to the poor: “Id rather take care 6f the stomachs of the living than the glory of the dead in the form of stone memorials.“ He once said, his greatest wish, however, was
