1、2014 年名校模拟试题分类汇编英语 专题 20 书面表达【2014 届辽宁五校协作体摸底试题】书面表达（满分 25 分）假如你是英国的 Mike，你的朋友李华打算到国外留学，他写信询问你什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐。请你根 据下列要点给对方写一封回信：1. 语言是道硬门槛； 2. 适应能力很重要； 3. 兴趣爱好被看重； 4. 要有社会责任感。 注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Li Hua,Im glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. _ Yours, Mike
2、 解析：试题分析：本文是一篇应用文。也是高考常考的文体形式之一。文章给出了简单的汉语提示，成文时需要考生充分发挥想象力，使文章内容丰富。成文时应注意一下几点：1.文章内容要齐全；（1） 语言是道硬门槛； 2） 适应能力很重要；（3） 兴趣爱好被看重；（4） 要有社会责任感。2.时态：用一般现在时；3.人称：第一人称和第二人称；4.使用一些高级词汇、短语及句型，提高文章的档次；5.恰当运用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。【亮点说明】1.高级句型：Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in for
3、eign colleges and universities. the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed. 2.连词和插入语：As far as I know，Besides, Whats mo
4、re, Last but not the least,答案：Dear Li Hua, Im glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with othe
5、rs and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. Besides, you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. Whats more, your interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do with success. Last but not the least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility ar
6、e especially respected and welcomed. This is some of my advice, and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and good luck.YoursMike【2013 届江苏扬州中学高三最后一卷】书面表达（满分 25 分）请认真观察下面的漫画，简要描述漫画内容，并根据你对该漫画的理解，结合学习实际，谈谈自己的思考和看法。 参考词汇：缸：vat； 漏出来：leak out； 漏洞：loophole解析：试题分析：这是一篇看图作文，由图画中
7、所反映得问题来联系实际谈谈学习中存在的问题。写作时不仅要将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字进行描述，而且要就此联系实际而展开叙述。展开时需要围绕画面所反映的实质问题谈谈自己的思考和看法。写作时注意准确运用时态（因为是客观描述图画，又是谈谈自己的思考和看法，所以用现在范畴的时态），上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。【亮点说明】范文对图画的描述仅仅用了三句话：一个简单句，两个复合句。这充分显示了作者概括提炼图画所反映内容的能力。接着作者用“It reminds me of the problems in our study.”这个过渡句，就很自然地联系到我们的学习中存在的问题。将
8、图画中的“缸的漏洞”与“学习中的错误” 很紧密地挂起钩来，顺理成章。然后就对“学习中的漏洞”问题普遍存在的处理问题提出了自己的观点“小洞不补，则会吃大苦”，为后面的议论埋下了伏笔。最后一段为本文增添了亮点。范文中所用词汇非常丰富，且雅俗共赏。答案：One possible version:In the picture, four people are trying to fill a vat with water. Two men are carrying water while two others are pouring water into the vat. However, with
9、so many loopholes at the bottom of the vat, theyll never store any water, because no one tries to mend the holes.It reminds me of the problems in our study. While studying, we always try to read more books and do more exercises. However, we seldom pay attention to the mistakes weve made, nor do we t
10、ry to correct them. Therefore, “holes” are left. Day by day, there appear more and more “holes”, or rather the shortages. No matter how many books weve read, we have never mastered any knowledge because they have leaked out through the hole.So we should pay attention to the mistakes weve made and th
11、e holes we have in our study. Only in this way can we learn much knowledge and fill up our mind with it. 【2014 届四川省成都市高三摸底试题】书面表达（满分 35 分）作为即将进入高三的学生，将要面对更繁重的学习和生活压力，因此，保持积极心态非常重要。现在，请围绕“积极心态与健康、学习、交友及家庭生活四个方面的关系，以Keeping a Positive Attitude 为题目，写一篇英语短文，阐述你的观点及理由。注意：1.词数：120 字左右；。2.短文题目已给出，并不计入总词数。K
12、eeping ,a Positive Attitude解析：本文的话题是如何在健康，学习，交友及家庭生活四个方面保持积极的心态，写作中注意围绕要点组织材料，确定写作内容。写作中注意将“积极心态与健康、学习、交友及家庭生活四个方面的关系介绍清楚。在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。建议信作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略
13、。提出建议要切实可行，要符合英语习惯，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，要写得更为亲切直白。【参考范文】Keeping a Positive AttitudeHow times flies! It wont be long before we are in Senior 3, when we will be faced with more learning tasks and heavier pressure. Therefore, its crucial and necessary that we keep a positive attitude both in our study and dai
14、ly lifeKeeping a positive attitude does us a lot of good. First of all, it can help us stay healthy physically. Meanwhile, its also beneficial to our study, for we can usually learn much more effectively when keeping a positive attitude. Besides,its easier for us to make more friends and get on bett
15、er with our family if we keep a positive attitude.Now that a positive attitude can bring so much happiness to us, why not try our best to keep it as much as we can in spite of everything?【2014 届新余一中宜春中学高三联考】书面表达（满分 25 分）The saying goes“Attitude is everything, details determine success or failure. ”请
16、用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己对上述观点的一些看法。注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语;除诗歌外，文体不限; 词数为120左右。解析：试题分析：本文是开放式作文，也是话题作文，要求考生根据英文提示，结合生活中的一个事例，根据所给的英语提示，写一篇话题作文。这种“开放式”的论述文的命题形式给考生很大的自由发挥空间，对写作的布局谋篇提出了较高要求，要求考生既要会发表观点认识，又要会进行描写叙述。这种写作命题有利于立体考查学生的语言知识、创新思维能力和价值观，具有较强的选拔功能。在写作中不要忘了用高级的词汇和复杂的句型表达，主要是学过的知识适当的运用，也要注意句与句的关联，使文章更连贯。【亮点说明】文
17、中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如 But sometimes it is the details that determine our success, for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what were doing.这句话有强调句，宾语从句和定语从句，还有 We may find that when faced with lots of work, the faster we do it, the more mistakes we will make.这句话运用了状语从句的省略和 the mor
18、e，the more 这样的句型，we should keep it in mind that quality comes first, without which quantity is of no significance.这里用了 it 做形式宾语，文章还注意了句子的衔接如：first，Whats more, As far as Im concerned,等等。答案：Some people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldnt pay much attention to details. But so
19、metimes it is the details that determine our success, for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what were doing.Since we have realized the importance of details, what should we do? First, we should form the habit of being careful, because a careful person will rarely overlook details
20、. Whats more, we should learn to keep the balance of quantity and quality. We may find that when faced with lots of work, the faster we do it, the more mistakes we will make. Why? Because when we work at high speed, the only thing we care about is quantity in which case we are more likely to neglect
21、 the details.As far as Im concerned, we should keep it in mind that quality comes first, without which quantity is of no significance.【2014 届浙江温州十校第一次联考】书面表达（满分 30 分）Growing Pains（成长的烦恼 ）是大陆较早引进的一部美国情景喜剧，讲述的是西佛一家的三个孩子在成长中遇到一些故事。而你们在自己的成长过程中也一定碰到过一些挫折，失败，而长大的标志是你在这些经历中获得了一些宝贵的财富。请以 Gains from Growing
22、 Pains 为题，写一篇不少于 120 词的英语短文。 （开头已经给出，不计入字数。 ）要求：1. 描述成长过程中的一件令你烦恼的事情。2. 说说此事最终带给你的启示和收获。Growing up is not always a very enjoyable time. 解析：试题分析：此篇书面表达是夹叙夹议的记叙文。描述成长中的烦恼以及它所带来的收获，内容贴近生活，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作内容。考生在写作之前要认真审题，把握两个要点，即烦恼和收获启示；注意文章的时态，要求让“你”描述成长过程中的烦恼，所以要用一般过去时，而且用第一人称。同时要注意句子的衔接。【亮点说明】文中定语从句和非谓
23、语的使用不但使文章衔接紧凑，而且为文章增色不少，比如“Now looking back, I am so glad that my parents encouraged me to take music lessons , which can enrich my life” . “Everybody is to experience growing pains ,which are just small pains in life.”，此外“we will realize our growing pains are actually growing gains.”也为点睛之笔。文章描述精彩感人
24、，读后会给人带来深刻启示。答案：Growing up is not always a very enjoyable time. It means we have to work hard. As for my childhood, my parents made me learn to play the violin so I had no time to play with other friends. I got very annoyed .I hated music, just because it was what they wanted me to do. Sometimes I f
25、elt puzzled and trapped. I even didnt understand why I was a child.Now looking back, I am so glad that my parents encouraged me to take music lessons , which can enrich my life. I come to realize why my parents are always pushing me along. Everybody is to experience growing pains ,which are just sma
26、ll pains in life. A little hard work and sweat never hurt us.If we realize these pains are just small bumps on our road to success, we will realize our growing pains are actually growing gains.【2014 届安徽池州一中月考】书面表达（共 1 题，满分 25 分）最近，你们班英语课上老师组织一次主题为“Does beauty really make much sense?”的讨论。根据下面同学们的讨论结果
27、用英语写一篇 120 字左右的短文并谈谈自己的观点。1.学生观点 1：一副好面孔就是一张通行证,在社交、求职、竞争中起着重要作用。2.学生观点 2：漂亮不等于胜任工作,只有追求内在完美才是真正的美。3.你的观点参考词汇：通行证：pass 社交: social communication 内在美：spiritual beauty.Does beauty really make much sense?Last week in our English class, we had a very heated discussion on the topicdoes beauty really make
28、much sense? _ 解析：试题分析：要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。注意文章文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如 Some students think that a good face is a pass, Not only can it ma
29、ke you become more confident but also it makes you impressive in the job interview.还运用了 What I want to say is that; 主语从句及倒装句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：As far as I am concerned 等等。答案：One possible version:Does beauty really make much sense?Last week in our English class, we had a very heated discussion on the topi
30、cdoes beauty really make much sense? Some students think that a good face is a pass. Good appearance often makes a big difference in social communication, social competition, job hunting and so on. Not only can it make you become more confident but also it makes you impressive in the job interview.O
31、ther students hold different opinions. Good appearance doesnt make any difference. Spiritual beauty is more important. A beautiful person is not necessarily one with good looking, but one with a great talent and kind heart.As far as I am concerned, both physical beauty and spiritual beauty are very
32、important. What I want to say is that we should never ignore our spiritual beauty training while simply pursuing good appearance.【2014 届安徽望江中学月考】书面表达(满分 25 分)根据下面的提示，写一则字数为 100120 的口头通知，用学校广播向同学们发布。事件：英国残疾人史密斯将来校演讲；时间：4 月 25 日下午 24 点；地点：学校第三教学楼 302 室；内容：他将介绍他是如何克服困难的。他 8 岁时，在一次事故中失去左腿和右臂。通过努力，他能生活自理
33、并学有所成；听完演讲后进行讨论：如何鼓励、帮助残疾人；怎样向史密斯教授学习等。解析：试题分析：这是一篇文字提纲式作文，就“英国残疾人史密斯将来校演讲”发出的口头通知。写作时不仅要注意叙述的顺序要清楚尤其是时间地点排列的顺序要讲究，而且还要要特别注意写作时准确地运用时态：这份口头通知时态比较复杂。涉及到一般现在时，一般将来时以及一般过去时。【亮点说明】范文叙述的逻辑顺序清晰；时间、地点状语的安排得很巧妙(from 2 to 4 oclock on the afternoon of April 25 in Room 302, the No.3 teaching building.)，充分显示了作者
34、的语言功底。范文用时态运用准确。范文以简单句为主，复合句为辅，非常符合口头通知的特点。范文灵活表达要点的方法最值得我们效仿。如在表达“通过努力，他能生活自理并学有所成”要点时，范文没有照字面去直译，而是这样来表达的“He struggled in his life and managed to look after himself. He also achieved great success in his work.”答案：One possible version:Attention, please!Ive something to tell you. Professor Smith-an
35、English disabled person will come to our school to give us a lecture from 2 to 4 oclock on the afternoon of April 25 in Room 302, the No.3 teaching building. His lecture is about how he smoothed away /overcame all sorts of difficulties he had met. When he was eight years old, he lost his left leg an
36、d right arm in an accident. He struggled in his life and managed to look after himself. He also achieved great success in his work.After the lecture we will have a discussion in groups on how to encourage disabled people, how to help them and how to learn from Professor Smith.(Thats all. )Thank you!
37、【2014 届广东珠海市高三 9 月摸底】基础写作 (共 1 小题，满分 15 分)假如你叫李华，现正在美国加利福尼亚州上大学，你的一个朋友刘英写信向你了解美国加利福尼亚州的情况，请根据以下内容提示给他回信简介加利福尼亚州。地理方面 面积 42.4 万平方千米，美国西部，西濒太平洋，美国面积第三大的州人口方面 约 38,000,000 人；据说 15000 前印第安人首先进入；16 世纪欧洲人开始进入；19 世纪中世界各地的人带着发财梦进入；未来将还会有人因喜爱加州的气候和生活方式进入。语言方面 58% 的人把英语作为母语来讲，42% 的人讲其它语言。加利福尼亚州： California；太平
38、洋：the Pacific ；印第安人：Indians【写作内容】请根据以上内容给朋友写回信，内容包括：1、加里福尼亚的地理方面的信息;2、人口及其语言方面的信息;3、信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入句子数。【写作要求】只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。Dear Liu Ying,Your letter reached me yesterday. You would like me to tell you something about California, so now I am writing to you._If you want to k
39、now more, you may go to https:/en.wikipedia.org/wiki/California#History. Best wishes to you.Yours ever,Li Hua解析：试题分析：考生首先要仔细审题，要点是以提纲形式出现的，做题时包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。因为只能使用 5 个句子表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要点，考生要
40、多使用复杂句，一句话中要多包含些信息。【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如 would like sb to do, is located in 还运用了 It is said that，It is believed that 句式; who 引导的定语从句及 only in the 16th century did Europeans come to settle.倒装句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：As for language 等等。答案：One possible version:Your letter reached me yesterday. You would
41、 like me to tell you something about California, so now I am writing to you. California, the third largest state in size in the USA with a population of more than 38 million, is located in the west of the United States on the Pacific in the west. It is said that the first settlers were Indians who g
42、ot there 15000 years ago and only in the 16th century did Europeans come to settle. In the 19th century, people from all over the world came rushing into California with the dream of becoming rich. It is believed that in the future more people, attracted by the climate and lifestyle, will keep immig
43、rating to California. As for language, only 58% of Californians speak English as their native language, while the others speak other languages. If you want to know more, you may go to https:/en.wikipedia.org/wiki/California#History Best wishes to you. Yours ever,第二节【2014 届广东珠海市高三 9 月摸底】读写任务 (共 1 小题,
44、满分 25 分)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文。Children in kindergarten are learning social skills. For this reason, its important to tell the children what will make them become good citizens when they grow up. Its up to parents, teachers and all others involved with a kid to teach these skills.Teaching ki
45、ds to pick up things by themselves is a good way to teach them not to throw things on the ground. For example, if a class has to make paper cutouts (剪下的图样), after cutting, have the children pick up the wastepaper and place it in the wastebasket.The golden rule of good citizenship should be taught at
46、 this age. The rule is “One should treat others as one would like others to treat oneself”. Teachers should ask their students how they want to be treated. There are many answers, such as not being treated in bad manners. The teacher should explain that others dont like to be scared, so you should not scare (使惊恐) others either.Following the laws is good citizenship(公民义务). Proper games can be played in the classroom. Games have rules, and all students in the class should foll
