1、考研英语二（作文）-试卷 13 及答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_3.We see a lot of advertisements almost everyday and everywhere. Some advertisements are good, but some a
2、re not so good. In this section, you are asked to write an essay on the positive/negative effects of some advertisements. You can take either stand and provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：2.00）_4.Do you sometimes receive anonymous calls
3、 or massages, not knowing how those people get your name and phone number? In this section, you are asked to write an essay on one way to keep our information safe. You can provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：2.00）_5.Successful sports p
4、rofessionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think it is fully justified, while others think it is unfair. Which side do you agree with? In this section, you are asked to write an essay on sports professionals“ earning. You can take either sta
5、nd and provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：2.00）_6.There are many fake commodities nowadays. They range from daily commodities to expensive goods. What is your opinion about these commodities? In this section, you are asked to write an
6、essay on fake commodities. You can provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：2.00）_考研英语二（作文）-试卷 13 答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based o
7、n the following information.（分数：2.00）_解析：3.We see a lot of advertisements almost everyday and everywhere. Some advertisements are good, but some are not so good. In this section, you are asked to write an essay on the positive/negative effects of some advertisements. You can take either stand and pr
8、ovide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Advertisements are a powerful tool, through which products and services are imprinted into viewers“ minds. But advertisements are essentially filled with sales gimmicks, the negative e
9、ffects of which warrant our attention. The first negative effect of advertisements is misleading the audience. More often than not, sales languages in advertisements are equivocal. They invite the audience to imagine their own favourable fantasy, which is seldom true in reality. The second negative
10、effect of advertisements is encouraging excessive consumption. The provocative language in advertisements paints an attractive picture to lure audiences to purchase a certain product. They declare that by owning this perfume, you will be sexy, and that by having that perfume, you will be elegant. If
11、 you want to feel elegantly sexy, buy both of them. Therefore, consumers are consuming the concepts associated with the products, rather than the products themselves. In conclusion, advertisements might mislead us and lead to over spending on some fanaticized images.)解析：解析：本题要求考生对“广告的正面或负面影响”提出个人的意见
12、按照题目的要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段指出广告充斥着营销的陷阱，其负面的影响值得我们注意。第二段具体分析其负面影响：其一，广告会误导观众。其二，广告会鼓励无度的消费。以香水广告为例加以说明。第三段总结全文。4.Do you sometimes receive anonymous calls or massages, not knowing how those people get your name and phone number? In this section, you are asked to write an essay on one way to keep our inform
13、ation safe. You can provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： When you want to register in a new BBS forum, chances are that you are required to fill in the real name and cell phone number to enter a lucky draw. This simple
14、yet potentially threatening act opens you to identity exposure. One way to keep your information safe, as I see it, is to double check the credentials when you are asked to give out information in the Internet forums or instant messaging tools. The major advantage of doing this is that it will lower
15、 the risk of exposing yourself to the online fishing websites. Usually, those fishing websites would be disguised as the authentic trading platform to lure Internet users and deceive them into entering their identity information. To avoid this, Internet users must make sure that the webpage address
16、is officially registered. Checking the credentials would help you form a habit of being alert to all kinds of potential frauds. In conclusion, in the Internet age, we should not disclose our information unless we are absolutely sure of the authenticity of the webpage.)解析：解析：本题要求考生对“保障个人信息安全的方法”提出个人的
17、意见。按照题目的要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段由在 BBS 论坛上注册人题，指出我们要反复核查网站的资格证书，以保障个人信息的安全。第二段阐述原因：其一，能降低被钓鱼网站钓到的风险。其二，有助于我们形成习惯，提高警觉，以防各种欺诈行为。第三段总结全文：我们不要轻易透露个人信息，除非我们对网页的真实性有绝对的把握。5.Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think it is fully ju
18、stified, while others think it is unfair. Which side do you agree with? In this section, you are asked to write an essay on sports professionals“ earning. You can take either stand and provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答
19、案： Sports stars are not only famous among young people but also envied by many middle-aged men, who long for wealth. An internationally renowned tennis player could make 100 million US dollars a year, an amount average people could not even dream about. However, I think sports professionals deserve
20、this high pay. First of all, the career of professional players is usually risky, which is worthy of high returns. Shoulder injuries during practice, tissue damage in games and irreversible symptoms after operation, all haunt each and every sport professional. With high risks come high returns. This
21、 is fully justified. Second, it requires years of efforts and commitment to become a sport professional. No matter how talented one can be, he still needs to get drilling, exercises and training. David Beckham, for example, confessed that he had to kick the football many times a day to refine and pe
22、rfect his shooting skills. There is nothing wrong about the rewards if one is working hard for them. In conclusion, I think sports professionals are justified to earn a lot of money.)解析：解析：本题要求考生对“职业运动员赚那么多钱是否公平”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段从网球运动员的收人人题，指出职业运动员获得如此高收入是应得的。第二段阐述原因：其一，职业运动员的职业生涯充满风险，因此高
23、回报也是合理的。其二，要成为职业的运动员需要长年的努力和投入。以大卫贝克汉姆为例加以说明。第三段重申观点：职业运动员应该拥有高收入。6.There are many fake commodities nowadays. They range from daily commodities to expensive goods. What is your opinion about these commodities? In this section, you are asked to write an essay on fake commodities. You can provide spec
24、ific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Nowadays, there are countless fake commodities on the market. They do harm to both consumers and society. Therefore, everyone should do his best to fight against fake commodities. First, manufac
25、turers of genuine products should be responsible for their products. Once they find fake commodities with the same brands as theirs, they must report to the organizations concerned, warn consumers not to buy them, and teach them how to distinguish the fake from the genuine. Second, consumers must le
26、arn to protect their own interests and not to be led astray by false advertisements. If any fake commodity is found, just inform the relative supervising departments immediately. Only by doing so can the government take effective measures to drive fake commodities out of the market and protect consu
27、mers“ rights. Last but not least, those who produce or sell fake commodities should be severely punished. All in all, fake commodities have negative impact on both consumers and society. We should eliminate them from the market.)解析：解析：本题要求考生对“假冒产品”提出自己的看法。按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段从假冒产品在市场随处可见人题，明确自己的态度。第二段从三个方面阐述应如何行动：其一，正品的生产商应该对他们的产品负责。其二，消费者必须学会保护自身利益不被虚假广告误导。其三，应该对贩卖假冒产品的人进行严惩。第三段总结全文，发出号召。
