1、考研英语二（作文）模拟试卷 109 及答案解析(总分：14.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：7，分数：14.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_3.Directions: Despite the mountains of information warning us of the danger of smoking, teenager smokin
2、g is on the rise. In this section, you are asked to write an essay on the consequences of teenage smoking. You can provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：2.00）_4.Directions: We often donate money to the needy in many ways. But sometimes pe
3、ople are worried about where the money actually goes. What do you think? In this section, you are asked to write an essay on donating. You can provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：2.00）_5.Directions: We sometimes hear the sad news of sui
4、cide in universities. Is there any way to prevent this from happening again? In this section, you are asked to write an essay on the best way to prevent suicide in universities. You can provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：2.00）_6.Direct
5、ions: Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes draw much attention from the public; their age, income, family, marital status etc. often appear on tabloid press. Entertainment reporters rack their brains to seek more private information about them. In this section, you are asked to w
6、rite an essay on public figures and their own privacy. You can provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：2.00）_7.Directions: Instant foods, instant communication, faster transportationall of these recent developments are designed to save time
7、. Ironically, though, instead of making more leisure time available, these developments have contributed to a pace of human affairs that is more rushed than ever before. In this section, you are asked to write an essay on a major disadvantage of “instant“ technology. You can provide specific reasons
8、 and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：2.00）_考研英语二（作文）模拟试卷 109 答案解析(总分：14.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：7，分数：14.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_解析：3.Directions: De
9、spite the mountains of information warning us of the danger of smoking, teenager smoking is on the rise. In this section, you are asked to write an essay on the consequences of teenage smoking. You can provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分
10、数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： It is very hard to see any advertisement or promotion about cigarettes. Still, cigarettes manage to find their way to teenagers. At their tender age, teenagers might be tempted by the illusion that smoking is cool. That is mainly why more and more teenagers develop a habit of smo
11、king. The major consequence of teenage smoking is the harmful impact on health. As is known to all, smoking is the major cause of lung cancer and many other respiratory diseases. Once developed, the smoking habit is addictive and hard to get rid of. This means those young smokers will have a longer
12、smoking history than those adult smokers and are more prone to smoking-induced illnesses. In addition to this, we should be aware that the lung is a delicate organ. When it is impaired, it is hardly reversible. In conclusion, teenagers should be warned about the health hazard caused by smoking and t
13、hey shall not develop the habit of smoking simply because it is “cool“ or “awesome“. What is really awesome is a healthy life.)解析：解析：本题要求考生对“青少年吸烟的后果”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，全文可以安排如下： 第一段指出越来越多青少年吸烟的原因容易受到香烟的诱惑，以为吸烟是很酷的行为。 第二段阐述后果：青少年吸烟的一大恶果是对健康的摧残。重点讲述对肺部的伤害。另外，香烟一旦上瘾就难以戒掉。 第三段总结全文：青少年不应以为吸烟“很酷”就对香烟上瘾。4.Di
14、rections: We often donate money to the needy in many ways. But sometimes people are worried about where the money actually goes. What do you think? In this section, you are asked to write an essay on donating. You can provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at le
15、ast 150 words.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Donation is a charitable act to benefit the most disadvantaged and it is a generous offer to those in need. Sadly, sometimes, the donated money and goods are embezzled or taken by the charity organizations. And thus I think it is wise to adopt a third-party organi
16、zation to audit the donation and publish the results periodically. First of all, the involvement of a third-party organization will ensure the impartiality of the charity foundation. People are worried about the whereabouts of their donation, because there is no watchdog to monitor the charity found
17、ation. Once an impartial auditor is in the picture, a check-and-balance system will be established. Secondly, publishing the auditing results will guarantee the transparency, which in turn will lead to the increased accountability of the operation. When the results are made accessible to the donors,
18、 every penny must be accounted for. In conclusion, by obliging a third-party auditor to periodically review and release the whereabouts of the donation, more and more people are willing to make donations because they are assured that every penny really counts.)解析：解析：本题要求考生对“捐赠”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，全文可以安排
19、如下： 第一段由所捐的物资遭到慈善组织的挪用或侵吞人题，指出应该让第三方机构来审计捐款并定期公布结果。 第二段阐述原因：其一，引入第三方机构能保证慈善组织的公正性。其二，公布审计结果能确保透明性，从而能督促慈善组织对自身的运行负责。 第三段总结全文。5.Directions: We sometimes hear the sad news of suicide in universities. Is there any way to prevent this from happening again? In this section, you are asked to write an essa
20、y on the best way to prevent suicide in universities. You can provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Due to the increasing pressure, a larger number of university students are feeling depressed. Some of them even go to ex
21、treme and end their lives. To resolve this issue, I think the best way is to involve students in the community service. First of all, students can make some friends in the process of serving the community. Through different kinds of activities, students can make lots of friends with various backgrou
22、nds. When issues arise, these friends will shed different lights on the issues. Solutions could be found from a broadened and enlightened perspective. Secondly, by serving the community, sense of achievement will be established among university students. Usually, university students commit suicide s
23、imply for the reason that they do not think they are worthy enough to live on. If they are committed to the community service, they could see the difference they have made and find out the meaning of life. In conclusion, university students are encouraged to contribute to the local community. By doi
24、ng so, they can find more friends and gain a meaningful purpose of life.)解析：解析：本题要求考生对“防止大学生自杀的最佳途径”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，全文可以安排如下： 第一段由学生所承受的压力入题，指出最好的办法是让学生投入到社区服务中。 第二段阐述原因：其一，在社区服务过程中，学生可以结交一些朋友。当我们有困难时，这些朋友能从多角度为我们分忧。其二，社区服务能使在校大学生建立起成就感，找回生命的意义。 第三段总结全文。6.Directions: Public figures such as actors, p
25、oliticians, and athletes draw much attention from the public; their age, income, family, marital status etc. often appear on tabloid press. Entertainment reporters rack their brains to seek more private information about them. In this section, you are asked to write an essay on public figures and th
26、eir own privacy. You can provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Public figures are expected to be role models for the common people. If they fail to live up to this expectation, scandals would take place and they may face
27、 their career disaster. Despite this, I think their private life should be out of the public scrutiny. The protection of privacy should be honored by all people, no matter they are public figures or not. Otherwise, tragedy might follow. Take Princess Diana as an example. She was killed in a car cras
28、h, which was caused by the relentless chasing of tabloid reporters. This tragedy is a wake-up call for all the media and the Internet users who tend to abuse their power and pry into the private life of public figures. In fact, relevant laws stipulate what kind of information is accessible to the pu
29、blic and no one should be above these laws. In conclusion, even role models have their innermost feelings that are not going to be shared by all.)解析：解析：本题要求考生对“公众人物是否应该有个人隐私”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，全文可以安排如下： 第一段从“公众人物应是普罗大众的模范”入题，转折指出普罗大众不应过问公众人物的私生活。 第二段阐述原因：其一，所有人都应尊重别人的隐私，以戴安娜王妃为例加以说明。其二，相关的法律规定了何种信息是可以向
30、公众公开的，公众不能越界。 第三段总结全文。7.Directions: Instant foods, instant communication, faster transportationall of these recent developments are designed to save time. Ironically, though, instead of making more leisure time available, these developments have contributed to a pace of human affairs that is more ru
31、shed than ever before. In this section, you are asked to write an essay on a major disadvantage of “instant“ technology. You can provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Ten years ago, letters were outdated by e-mails, whic
32、h is now old-fashioned by Weibo in China or twitter in the West. The communication is increasingly instant and readily accessible. Yet, a major disadvantage of “instant“ technology is the impatience developed along the way. “Instant“ technology rushes things through and leads to the impatience of it
33、s users. People can no longer wait for things to happen. A recent study shows that if a webpage takes more than 30 seconds to show up, Internet users tend to quit this webpage and switch to another one. Once the habit is developed, “old habit dies hard“. It is very difficult to calm yourself down wh
34、en you have to spend days to read a novel; when you have to sit quietly in a 2-hour concert; and when you have to stand in the line and wait to be served. In conclusion, a major setback of the “instant“ technology is programming people to think that Rome could be built in a day. Without any doubt, the jelly-built Rome would fall apart into pieces.)解析：解析：本题要求考生对“即时技术的一大缺点”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，全文可以安排如下： 第一段从电子邮件、微博和推特入题，转折指出“即时”技术的一大缺点是让人变得越来越容易急躁。 第二段阐述原因：其一，“即时”技术讲求“迅时即达”，导致了用户十分容易不耐烦。并举网页加载速度、阅读小说、听演唱会和排队等例子，说明我们如何变得不耐烦。 第三段总结全文。
