1、考研英语（短文写作）-试卷 10 及答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_3.A Title: THE “PROJECT HOPE“ B Time limit: 40 minutes C Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the gi
2、ven opening sentence) D Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “Education plays a very important role in the modernization of our country.“ E Your composition must be written neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points) OUTLINE: 1. Present
3、situation 2. Necessity of the project 3. My suggestion（分数：2.00）_4.A Title: GOOD HEALTH B Time limit: 40 minutes C Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence) D Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “The desire
4、 for good health is universal.“ E Your composition should be written neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points) OUTLINE: 1. Importance of good health 2. Ways to keep fit 3. My own practices（分数：2.00）_5.A Title: ON MAKING FRIENDS B Time limit: 40 minutes C Word limit: 120150 words (not including the given
5、opening sentence) D Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend.“ E Your composition must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points) OUTLINE: 1. The need for friends 2. True fri
6、endship 3. My principle in making friends（分数：2.00）_6.Harmfulness of Fake Commodities（分数：2.00）_考研英语（短文写作）-试卷 10 答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_解析：3.A T
7、itle: THE “PROJECT HOPE“ B Time limit: 40 minutes C Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence) D Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “Education plays a very important role in the modernization of our countr
8、y.“ E Your composition must be written neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points) OUTLINE: 1. Present situation 2. Necessity of the project 3. My suggestion（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： THE “PROJECT HOPE“ Education plays a very important role in the modernization of our country. However, more than 37 million p
9、rimary and secondary school students in the poverty-stricken areas are obliged to quit school. Thus, a financial plan called Project Hope is advocated. The project, which brings the hope for children and promises a bright future for China, is quite necessary. As we know, being deprived of education
10、will not only result in exhaustion of human resources in those poverty-stricken areas, but also hold back the economic development of the whole country. So developing e ducation to arm youngsters with knowledge is an urgent task and a responsibility of the entire society. We should finance Project H
11、ope with money. Moreover, it needs our love and strong sense of responsibility for those children. As it says, “knowledge is a lamp leading people into the world of brightness and beauty“, so is Project Hope.)解析：解析： 本文中心突出，结构严谨。第一段指出了“希望工程”项目实施的背景，即教育的重要性和贫困地区教育资源的缺乏。第二段介绍了实施“希望工程”项目的必要性，它对孩子个人和整个社会
12、都有重要作用，文章脉络非常清晰。第三段简短有力，进一步延伸主题，指出社会大众可以进行资金支持和奉献爱心，最后以俗语作总结，画龙点睛。本文流畅不仅来自于思维的连贯，并且归功于诸多连词的应用。4.A Title: GOOD HEALTH B Time limit: 40 minutes C Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence) D Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given
13、 opening sentence: “The desire for good health is universal.“ E Your composition should be written neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points) OUTLINE: 1. Importance of good health 2. Ways to keep fit 3. My own practices（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： GOOD HEALTH The desire for good health is universal. Wherever yo
14、u are and whatever you do, staying healthy precedes a successful career and a happy life. People with good health can do work with full energy and confidence, and their progress in turn contributes to their health and happiness. On the contrary, a sick one usually lacks the vigor and interest to ful
15、fill his or her role in life, which deprives him or her of many opportunities to become successful and happy. Realizing the importance of good health is far from being enough. We must do something effective to keep fit. The best place to begin is at the dinner table. Eating less junk food and having
16、 a balanced diet is the first step for most people. The next step is to exercise regularly. Vigorous exercise can benefit not only the muscles but also the organs. Last but not least, don“ t damage the body with drugs, including cigarettes and too much alcohol. As far as I am concerned, I am neither
17、 indulged in food nor in such harmful substances as cigarettes or alcohol. Moreover, doing exercises is part of my routine life. Therefore, I am in good shape and always energetic.)解析：解析： 从结构上看，该范文按照提纲要求，分为三段论述。第一段采用了先总后分的写作方法，段首为题目中给出的主题句，接下来用正反对比的写法进行论证，使人印象深刻。第二段段首也是主题句，并用 The best place to begin
18、The next step 和 Last but not least 分别引导对保持身体健康提出的三点建议，段落内部层次分明。第三段呼应上段的建议，谈了自己的实际情况，并在段尾进行了总结。5.A Title: ON MAKING FRIENDS B Time limit: 40 minutes C Word limit: 120150 words (not including the given opening sentence) D Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the
19、 given opening sentence: “As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend.“ E Your composition must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points) OUTLINE: 1. The need for friends 2. True friendship 3. My principle in making friends（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： ON MAKING FRIENDS As a human being,
20、one can hardly do without a friend and the fact has been self-evident. Without the help of honest friends, we can hardly get over the difficulties and hardships we come across. But not all who are friendly to us or company us in the social gatherings can be called true friends. Based on mutual under
21、standing instead of on mutual benefit, true friendship must be sincere and unconditional. It consists in sincerity, mutual trust, and self-sacrifice, both in times of happiness and at moments of crisis. Therefore, true friends always stand by you and do things really good for you no matter what happ
22、ens. My principle in making friends is to make as many good friends as possible. As long as you are honest and sincere, I will try my best to make friends with you.)解析：解析： 本文以提纲为依据，层次清晰。首段指出交友的必要性。第二段论证何为真正的友谊，条理清晰。第三段直接点明交友之道。本文连词使用广泛，比如：第二段末 Therefore 这一连词的应用，起到收尾的作用，自然引出该段的结论，使行文连贯。第三段中的 As long
23、as 顺接上文，并再次强调中心。6.Harmfulness of Fake Commodities（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Harmfulness of Fake Commodities Fake commodities have almost found their way into every field. Compared with the genuine products, they have more attraction for the consumers because of their much lower prices. This, of course, c
24、auses great economic losses to the genuine-product manufacturers. Besides, as fake commodities are often of poor quality, they damage the credibility of the genuine products. Fake commodities also cause much trouble to consumers. For example, if something goes wrong with the fake commodities, consum
25、ers won“t enjoy the free after-sale services provided by the genuine-product manufacturers, which may bring about economic losses to consumers. Furthermore, fake commodities can be dangerous and sometimes even harm the lives of consumers. For example, it“s reported that some consumers died after dri
26、nking fake wine. So fake commodities are serious problems in our country which deserve attention from all angles. The legitimate producers should safeguard their legal rights by powerful precautions and, at the same time, try to improve their products and cut their prices so as to attract more consumers. The authorities should also redouble their efforts to forbid the production and sale of fake commodities. At last, consumers should free themselves from the temptation by cheaper fake commodities and not give them any opportunities.)解析：
