1、BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 11及答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 How to approach Writing Test Part One Part One counts for one third of the total marks in the Writing Test. You should spend no more than 15 minutes on Part One. You will be asked to write a note, memo, email or message to one or more people in your company T
2、he first bullet point of the instructions outlines the situation. The second bullet point tells you what you should write, who you are writing it for, and the points that must be included. It is best to follow the order of the points that are required, as you will lose marks if you leave out any of
3、them. Planning Read the instructions carefully so that you know what to do, and underline the key words. Writing Express yourself briefly and clearly For a memo or email you dont need to include to, from, date or subject. Try to use a range of appropriate vocabulary and grammatical structures. Make
4、the language suitable for the reader(s). Checking After writing, read what you have written, correct mistakes and make improvements. If you want to add anything, use a sign, e.g. *. Put a line through anything you want to omit. Dont rewrite the whole of your answer. Make sure the examiner will be ab
5、le to read your answer. Use a pen and your normal handwriting (do not write in capital letters). Check that you have written your answer in 40-50 words. You are a director of a manufacturing company. A foreign delegation will soon be visiting the company. You are responsible for supervising arrangem
6、ents for the visit. Write a memo to the office manager of your company: saying when the delegates will arrive explaining what he should show them telling him the arrangements for lunch. Write 40 - 50 words. 二、 PART TWO 2 How to approach Writing Test Part TwoPart Two counts for two thirds of the tota
7、l marks in the Writing Test.You should spend about 30 minutes on Part Two.You will be asked to write a report, proposal or piece of business correspondence.You will be given information, such as a letter, advertisement, or charts and graphs, as the starting point for your answer, and will be told wh
8、o to write to.About five handwritten notes will also be given. You must use all these notes when writing your answer, and will need to invent information in connection with some of them. If you leave out any of the five notes, you will lose marks.PlanningRead the instructions carefully so that you k
9、now what do, and underline the key words.Make an outline plan, putting the five notes into a suitable order.WritingStart your answer by briefly saying why you are writing.Express your ideas clearly.Try to use a wide range of appropriate vocabulary and grammatical structures.For a piece of business c
10、orrespondence, include suitable openings and closings (e.g. Dear Ms Smith and Yours sincerely with your signature), but no addresses.Do not present a report or proposal in the form of a letter.Make the formality of the language suitable for the reader(s).CheckingAfter writing, read what you have wri
11、tten, correct mistakes and make improvements. If you want to add anything, use a sign, e.g. *. Put a line through anything you want to omit. Dont rewrite the whole of your answer.Hake sure the examiner will be able to read your answer. Use a pen and your normal handwriting (do not write in capital l
12、etters).Check that you have written your answer in 120 140 words.You work for a small chain of clothing stores. The Managing Director has asked you to write a short report on last months performance.Look at the charts and table below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.Then, using
13、 all your handwritten notes, write the report for your Managing DirectorWrite 120- 140 words. BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 11答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 【正确答案】 Memo To: Jerry Carter From: Susannah Cowley Subject: Foreign delegation Jerry -The delegation is due at 9.30 next Friday. Theyll be interested in seeing the pr
14、oduction plant, and I suggest you also take them to the R&D section. Well have lunch at the Mermaid Hotel at I pm, and of course youre invited to join us. Thanks Susannah 二、 PART TWO 2 【正确答案】 To: Chris Sutcliffe, Managing Director From: Lynn Dent Subject: Performance in November This report covers N
15、ovembers results in branches A-D, compared with those in October MO NTH LY TURN OVER Only branch A saw an improvement in turnover, which was probably the result of an advertising campaign in the local media. Neither branch B nor branch D reported any change, while in branch C turnover fell considera
16、bly STAFF TURNOVER The only significant changes in staff turnover were in branches C and D. In C it rose sharply, from 2% to 8%, mainly because of dissatisfaction with the new manager on the other hand, there was an improvement in branch Ds previous high level of 10%. SALES BY PRODUCTTYPE Womens clothes, which are already the best selling goods, increased from 60 to 65% of total sales, at the expense of mens clothing. Childrens clothes were unchanged, at 20%.
