1、BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 34及答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 You need to inform your marketing team about a radio advertising campaign for one of your companys new products. Write an email to your team: reminding them which new product it is explaining why youve chosen to advertise on radio saying what you expect the a
2、dvertising campaign to achieve. Write 40-50 words. 二、 PART TWO 2 The staff at your company were recently asked what they thought about working conditions. Your line manager has asked you to write a report summarising their opinions and suggesting possible improvements. Look at the information below,
3、 on which you have already made some handwritten notes. Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your report. Write 120-140 words. BEC商务英语（中级 ）写作模拟试卷 34答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 【正确答案】 Sample A To: All staff I believe everyone already to known about our new product TE - 128. According to our budget,
4、I decided to advertise on radio. I hope m using this channel let the public well know our this product and opening a new market. Marlene Band 2 All the content points are addressed, and the format of the memo is appropriate. However, there are several language errors which are distracting and these
5、would tend to have a negative effect on the target reader. Sample B Dear team members. I am writing to inform you that we are told to make an advertising campaign for the new products - video players. Taking the cost of the advertisement into account. I have chosen to advertise them on radio. I beli
6、eve it would have a great success. Yours sincerely. Band 3 All the content points have been addressed relatively clearly, and an attempt has been made to expand upon the prompts and avoid lifting language from the question paper. Some language errors occur, but these are relatively minor and do not
7、obscure the message. 二、 PART TWO 2 【正确答案】 Sample C Report on satisfaction - level of staff members Introduction This report aims to show weather our staff members are satisfied with their working conditions or not. Findings ? The recent meeting shows clearly that our staff is quite satisfied with th
8、e working conditions. Especially, a lot of them have praised our pension scheme and our childcare vouchers. ? Nevertheless, some complained about unflexible working hours, as they have to take care of their children at home. ? Apart from this, the poor condition of some office areas was mentioned. A
9、 lot of them are dissatisfied with the dirt on the floors and the old-fashioned computer systems. ? Finally, I would suggest to increase the number of days off, as most members feel quite exausted after 6 months without holiday. Conclusion In my opinion, we should try to improve working conditions f
10、or this will lead to more productivity in the end. Band 5 All the content points have been addressed and the target reader would be fully informed. The report is effectively organised, making use of headings and discourse markers. The range of vocabulary and grammar is good, and where errors occur t
11、hey are minor. The register and format are consistently appropriate. Sample D Report on: Staff opinion about working conditions This report aims to summarise the results of the last staff meeting. Findings First, most of the employees are really satisfied with the new smoking policy. But there are a
12、lso some problems. Due to the fact that many employees have to care for children they would rather prefer flexible working hours. Furthermore some office areas are in a poor condition, most important is that a few of them do not have sunlight at their workplace. There is also a problem with the paym
13、ent when going on holiday, which is too less for our workers. Conclusion In conclusion the opinions about this topic are much better compared with last year, but there is still a lot to do. Recommendation: It is suggested to create a bonus system for increasing holiday payment and not of least to increase productivity. Band 3 All the content points are covered and despite a number or language errors, the message is clearly conveyed. The report has been organised into sections, although at times paragraphing is in need of attention.
