1、BEC商务英语（初级）写作模拟试卷 75及答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 A new colleague, Marina Walker, has emailed you to ask for your help with writing a report on the German car market, but you cannot help her at the moment.Write an email to Marina: explaining why you cannot help her suggesting the name of another person sayin
2、g what relevant experience that person has. Write 30-40 words on your Answer Sheet.二、 PART TWO 2 Read part of a letter below from Peter Morgan, the Marketing Manager of Speedex, a delivery company. Im writing to tell you about an exciting new service that we at Speedex are offering in your area. We
3、are a small distribution company and can guarantee to deliver anywhere within the local area for the cheapest price currently available. If you are interested in our service, please contact me for further details. Write a letter to Peter Morgan: acknowledging his letter saying why you need a new del
4、ivery company explaining what type of goods you need delivering inviting him to visit you at your office. Write 60-80 words on your Answer Sheet. Do not include any postal addresses. Dear Mr Morgan BEC商务英语（初级）写作模拟试卷 75答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 【正确答案】 Sample A Im apologising but I cannot help you to write
5、your report. I know one person who could be interested on your work because he had experience on German market. The name is Lorenzo Maio Phone 0349027451 Gaia Band 3 The first content point is not covered, as the candidate does not give a reason why he/she cannot help Marina Walker with her report.
6、Sample B Dear Marina, I am writing to inform you that Im not able to help you with the report you mentioned because I am preparing a meeting at the moment. Please ask Chris, the German student for help. Kind regards Maja Band 5 This is a very good attempt at the task set, achieving all content point
7、s. No effort is required by the reader. 二、 PART TWO 2 【正确答案】 Sample C Dear Mr Morgan Thank you for your letter. We need a new delivery company because we want to have staideble partner. We need deliviring new equipment for computers. But all details I want to say. Band 2 Only two points successfully
8、 addressed, and the response is also very short at only 35 words. Sample D Dear Mr Morgan, Thank you for your letter. I beleive there is a great opportunity for us because the delivery company wed been working before has gone bankrupt, so were looking for a new one. Let me explain what type of goods
9、 we usually need to deliver. We run a small on-line shop in the Internet offering different types of hardware like personal computers and various networking eqipement. Currently were expanding in the local market so were interested in a long-term partnership with a delivery service, like yours. Coul
10、d you please think of a suitable day to visit our office? I look forward to your reply! Best regards, Mr P, CEO Band 5 This is a full representation of the task set. All the content points are achieved, and the language used is confident and natural. It would have a very positive effect on the reader.
