1、专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 174及答案与解析 一、 PART VI WRITING 1 With the advent of the Internet, many students study with the help of the Internet while others still prefer to use the library as a reliable source of information. Which one do you prefer? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: T
2、he Internet or the Library? Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 2 Fake products are very harmful, but they still enjoy great popularity. They have brought about a
3、lot of social problems. Why can they get so widespread? What harmful effect can they bring to people? How to solve this problem? Choose one or two aspects to talk about it. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: The Harmful Effects of Fake Products Marks will be awarded for c
4、ontent relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 3 Man-made beauty is a new word that appeared in recent years. Many people, mostly young girls, beautify themselves by various operations. How do you comm
5、ent on this phenomenon? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My View on Man-made Beauty Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 4 With the de
6、velopment of society, more and more ordinary people are engaged in charity activities. Accordingly, a new form of charity comes into being, that is, micro-charity, in which ordinary people can take actions or donate small amounts of money to express their kindness. What is your view on micro-charity
7、? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My View on Micro-charity Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 174答案与解析 一、 PART VI WR
8、ITING 1 【正确答案】 The Internet or Library? Due to the convenience of obtaining information through the Internet, more and more students prefer to rely on it for information. Meanwhile some students are still using the library as a source of information. As for me, I use the library more frequently than
9、 the Internet. For one thing, I am of the opinion that the library is more of a reliable source of information. As is known to all, publications will have to go through strict censorship before coming out. In school libraries, librarians will order books according to the requirements of teaching and
10、 learning. In this way, readers can have access to reliable information. Furthermore, the library is a better place to study in. When you are in the library, with almost all the students being absorbed in their studies, you will be able to concentrate on your books in such an atmosphere. When using
11、the Internet, one will be more easily distracted by tabloid news. For another, although using the Internet is more convenient, I find it is unhealthy to study in front of the computer screen for long hours. There are warnings that radiation from computers may do harm to our body. Take myself for ins
12、tance. My sight has become weaker and weaker after unrestricted use of computer. In consequence, I have set a rule that limits my use of computer to one hour each time. In summary, despite the convenience of the Internet, I think studying in the library is a healthier experience, for library provide
13、s a better studying atmosphere and a more reliable information source. 【试题解析】 开头部分 作者首先介绍了两种不同的观点，之后通过 As for me， 引出自己的观点：比起使用因特网，更喜欢使用图书馆来获取信息。 中间部分 1)通过论述利用图书馆的优点和因特网的缺点来强调使用图书馆的益处，正反对比，论证有力。 2)在论证过程中，分别使用 For one thing， 和 For another， 来引出这两个方面。而在论述图书馆的优点时，用 Furthermore， 来连接其两点好处，过渡比较自然。 结尾部分 用 In
14、 summary， 进行总结，先肯定了使用因特网的便利性，之后强调利用图书馆学习的优点，重申主题。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 The Harmful Effects of Fake Products Nowadays, China is suffering from the boom of fake commodities. Fake products are so widespread in the market that almost everybody has the frustrating experience of buying one. Then, what harm
15、do they bring to us? On the one hand, fake products do harm to individual consumers. They can bring about great loss in both peoples property and life. For example, bad seeds result in bankruptcy of farmers. And another case in point is that if a consumer buys fake medicine, it wont cure him of his
16、illness but may threaten his life. On the other hand, the production of fake commodities is a great danger to our society in many ways. Firstly, the good reputation of a well-known product may be ruined overnight by fake products. Secondly, fake products, usually associated with organized crime and
17、backed up by powerful multilayered corrupt bureaucrats, may cause chaos and ruin our society. Since fake products do great harm to individual consumers and to our society, it is high time that we did something to avoid being the victims of fake goods. Every one of us has the duty to fight against fa
18、ke products. 【试题解析】 开头部分 首先点明当今的社会现状，然后使用疑问句承前启后：假冒商品给我们带来了什么危害 ?很好地吸引了读者的注意力。 中间部分 1)用 On the one hand， 和 On the other hand， 从两个方面分析了假冒商品的危害。 2)在提及第二点时，作者分别使用了 Firstly， 和 Secondly， 进行列举，结构清晰，层次分明。 结尾部分 1)呼吁全社会采取行动杜绝假冒商品。 2)虚拟语气 (it is high time that)的使用加强了紧迫感，颇具说服力。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 My View on Ma
19、n-made Beauty The desire for a beautiful appearance is one of human natures. The plastic surgery may really mean something to some people. At least they become more beautiful. But every coin has two sides, and so does the man-made beauty practice for the following reasons. Firstly, ones appearance i
20、s Gods blessing. After breast enlargement surgery, many women look sexier than before. However, many of them are also diagnosed with mammary gland disease. The more serious problem is that they risk being unable to breast-feed. Secondly, advocating such a practice will mislead people to false judgme
21、nt of true beauty. The concept of beauty is quite rich in its content. It should include many virtues like honesty, diligence, etc. ,which should be the real mainstream of our aesthetic taste. The practice of man-made beauty will confuse those who are to develop a correct concept of beauty. Concerni
22、ng the above possible harm the practice may bring about, I am strongly against it and advocate true and natural beauty. Besides, people, especially women, should pay more attention to the cultivation of their inner beauty since the inner beauty outweighs the external beauty in the long run. 【试题解析】 开
23、头部分 首先指出爱美是人的天性。接着话锋一转，指出整容也有负面影响。 中间部分 1)用 Firstly， 和 Secondly， 引出整容给一个人带来的负面影响。 2)一些专业术语的使用显示了作者平时广泛的阅读面，考生也应注意词汇的积累。 结尾部分 1)用 Concerning the above possible harm 承接上文，总结论点，权衡利弊，得出结论。 2)用 Besides， 提出呼吁：应该注重内在美。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 My View on Micro-charity With the improvement of society and peoples
24、living standards, more and more ordinary people are engaged in a new form of charity micro-charity, which wins overwhelming support and benefits a lot of people. Micro-charity has emerged as a shining star in charity activities. It encourages ordinary people to explore those small demands of other p
25、eople which are easily ignored. Besides, compared with the traditional form of charity, micro-charity is totally grassroot charity which relies on ordinary people. Furthermore, micro-charity not only encourages people to find others demands but also involves themselves in charity to express their lo
26、ve and kindness. With its new concepts, micro-charity has its own advantages. Firstly, it is quite a convenient and easy way for people to involve in charity since it lowers the threshold for charitable participation. Secondly, micro-charity can draw a lot of attention through microblog and other ne
27、t platforms. Online charity information can be disseminated rapidly and widely. Lastly, it can put together all possible resources to solve problems, which makes charity sustainable. All these advantages make it possible to get people together, and, as a group, they can help others more easily and f
28、inally help our society make progress. To sum up, with its specific concepts and obvious advantages, micro-charity makes people see how easily they can achieve their personal value through performing good deeds instead of considering charitable work as reserved for the rich. In a word, micro-charity
29、 will surely help to make a better world. 【试题解析】 开头部分 开篇引出话题：随着社会的发展和人们生活水平的提高，一种新的公益形式 “微公益 ”应运而生，得到很多支持，并使很多人受益。 中间部分 1)阐述微公益的理念。首先指出微公益是公益事业的一种新形式，接着从三方面来阐述微公益的理念。 2)阐述微公益的优点。 运用了总一分一总结构：用一句话过渡到微公益的优点。接着分别用 Firstly， ， Secondly， 和 Lastly， 从三个方面阐述微公益的优点。 3)最后，用一句话作为该部分的总结。 结尾部分 重申观点，对全文进行总结。该范文在结构上逻辑清晰，条理分明，论证有理有据，语言流畅自然，长句的使用体现了作者较好的语言功底。 【知识模块】 作文
