1、专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 40及答案与解析 SECTION A COMPOSITION (35 MIN) 1 Violent TV programs have been blamed for increasing crime rate, especially delinquency rate in many cities. Although we should not say that violence is directly related to TV viewing, we have to admit that they are related, to some extent. Wri
2、te a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Violent TV Programs Cause More Crimes 2 The development of information technology has made the world smaller, and made people become more and more isolated from each other at the same time. What do you think are the reasons for this phenome
3、non, and how to deal with the problem? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: People Are Becoming Isolated from Each Other 3 In order to control the population, China has been on the policy of birth control for many years. However, presently many people are worrying about the
4、 aging of population. What kind of problems in your opinion may the aging of population bring to us? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Problems Caused by the Aging of Chinese Population 4 It is believed that a persons social skills contribute a lot to his success. Some u
5、niversity students who cannot land a job after graduation realize that they have acquired sufficient knowledge, but they do not have enough working experience and more importantly proper interpersonal skills. Many students therefore seek every chance to improve themselves in this regard. Write a com
6、position of about 200 words on the following topic: The Importance of Social Skills 专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 40答案与解析 SECTION A COMPOSITION (35 MIN) 1 【正确答案】 Violent TV Programs Cause More Crimes Nowadays, it seems that violent programs enjoy great popularity among people, especially among teenagers. Some peop
7、le assert that violent TV programs cause violence. As far as I am concerned, the disgraceful violent TV programs should be largely responsible for the rising crime rate in modern society. In the first place, violent TV programs tend to obscure the difference between the good and the evil, harming th
8、e social morals and values. As we know, even an adult sometimes cannot distinguish them, needless to say a teenager. Consider the case of a boy who imitates the acts of violence on TV just out of curiosity without knowing that he is doing something that he would regret for the rest of his life. In t
9、he second place, violent TV programs can gradually change peoples behavior, misleading them to believe that violence is the most effective way to resolve conflicts. Nowadays, as soon as you turn on your TV, violence is vividly presented before you, with the success of the criminals encouraging you,
10、the luxurious booty tempting you. We may draw the conclusion that violent TV programs have in a large sense caused the crime rate to rise not only because of their destructive influence on peoples morality, but also because of their vicious effect on peoples behavior. 【试题解析】 本题是一个给定观点型题目。要求考生就暴力电视节目
11、导致犯罪率上升的问题加以分析。一定要注意的是，题目中特别提到青少年犯罪的问题，因此文章的内容应该倾向于探讨暴力电视节目对青少年的影响。此外，还要注意到题目中所提到的 两者之间相关的程度问题，并非直接关系，但在某种程度上一定有所影响。提出自己的观点时，最好要表明一下自己所认定的程度，是 partly还是 largely。我们可以从以下几个方面来探讨暴力电视节目对犯罪率上升的影响： 影响 1：暴力电视节目会混淆善恶，破坏社会道德观和价值观。对于尚未形成正确的人生观、世界观的青少年来说，这一点是非常容易误导他们的。青少年往往因好奇而模仿。 影响 2：暴力电视节目会潜移默化地改变人们的行为，误导他们认
12、为暴力是解决争端的最有力方法。 影响 3：暴力电视节目往往夸大现 实，宣扬个人英雄主义或犯罪合理的论调，促使一些本来就有犯罪动机的人付诸实践。 范文主要选取了影响 1、 2，论述了暴力电视节目的危害。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 People Are Becoming Isolated from Each Other Though the development of information technology has made the world smaller, I think people are becoming more and more isolated from ea
13、ch other. There are three reasons for this. Firstly, due to fierce competition, modern people have to work hard in order to keep up with the step of city life, so that they have less time to communicate with each other. Everybody is busy all the time. Moreover, living in apartments in different bloc
14、ks, people are far away from each other. It is not convenient for them to meet each other freely. Finally, the popular use of telephones and overwhelming dependency on the Internet prevent modern people from seeing and visiting each other quite often. Nowadays, instead of writing letters and sending
15、 postcards, people simply send an e-mail or make a phone call to send good wishes in a few minutes. In some sense, people are becoming mechanic. In order to solve the problem, people need to be fully aware of the fact that the modern ways of communication cannot fully take the place of the tradition
16、al ones. Sending e-mails cannot have the same effect as writing letters or face-to-face talk. Traditional ways should be encouraged and people should write letters and visit each other as often as possible. 【试题解析】 本题是一个给定观点型题目，要求考生围绕给定的论题或材料进行论证。这里指出了当前中国社会生活中存在的一个比较矛盾的现象 随着信息技术的发展，世界越来越小，人们却彼此越来越孤立
17、。题目要求考生对此展开分析，提出自己的观点和看法，然后进行论证。 本 题的论点是当前的一个热点话题，可说的话很多，因此在具体的写作思路上也多种多样，例如：分析这一问题产生的原因；该问题的危害性；解决该问题的建议等等。按照题目要求，考生应该首先分析该问题产生的原因，继而提出解决问题的建议。 问题成因： 1工作、竞争压力的增大使现代人太忙而无暇交友； 2随着城市化进程的深入，人们往往离得比较远，不方便相互拜访； 3手机、网络等现代通讯技术的发展使现代人改变了交往方式； 4现代人的生活观念已与先前不同，他们更喜欢享受个人的私生活； 5还有一部分人是为了避免不必要的麻烦而不愿 与人交往，等等。 解决办
18、法： 1即使工作再忙，也应该保持正常社交，因为与人交流是缓解压力的有效方式； 2鼓励使用传统的交流方式，比如写信或面对面交流； 3现代人可以选择结伴出游或周末聚会的形式进行交往，等等。针对不同的问题，应该有相应的解决方案。 范文主要采用了原因 1、 2、 3以及解决办法 1、 2进行写作。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 Problems Caused by the Aging of Chinese Population The aging of population can be seen from the increase in the populations mean ages,
19、which means the decline of the proportion of the population of children. As regards for China, citizens over 60 will rise to 31 percent of the whole population by 2050. The problems caused by the aging of population in our country are very serious. The problems of the aging of population are mainly
20、manifested in two aspects. Aging has brought serious challenges to our country, such as the shortage of manpower and the weakened defense power. In my view, for China, a developing country, the biggest problem is the financial burden. China has entered the aging society long before achieving the goa
21、l of building an overall well-off society. To give the elderly a safe and comfortable life, the countrys old-age security system, medical insurance system and pension system should be increasingly improved, which means a huge sum of money. Secondly, the aging population might also be the challenge t
22、o individuals and families. The filial children have to spare a large portion of energy and time to support their parents, which will inevitably increase their burden and stress. The impious children can choose to live freely, but leave their parents in the misery. The aging population has become a
23、huge threat to the economic development and the improvement of peoples living standards, so it is important for China to cope with the aging problem in advance. 【试题解析】 本题属于给定观点型题目，要求考生就人口老龄化这一问题进行阐述。中国一直都是人口大国，而丰富的劳动力资源也曾对我国的经济发展起到过重要的作用，但是现在中国即将面对的是严重的人口老龄化现象，人口老龄化会给中国带来什么样的问题，本文要求考生提出自己的观点和看法。我们可以
24、从以下三方面着手，对人口老龄化问题进行探讨： 现象阐述：因科学的发达、社会的进步等多种因素的作用，人的寿命日益延长，使到达老年期的人数在总人口中的比重逐渐增加。而中国到 2050年总人口中超过六十岁的人将占到三成以上 ，人口老龄化问题会十分严重。 问题阐述： 1人口老龄化可能带来劳动力短缺、国防兵源不足、用于老人退休、养老的费用增加、社会负担加重等各种问题。 2对于个人，特别是老年人而言，他们可能会面临更孤单、更困难的生活。 3人口老龄化对经济发展和劳动生产率的提高产生一定的消极影响。 4人口老龄化必然会引起家庭规模和家庭结构的变化，使家庭的养老功能不断削弱。 提出建议：就中国而言，人口老龄化
25、将给社会和经济发展带来巨大的挑战，所以应尽早完善各种体系，做好应对措施。 范文主要通过现象阐述，结合问题阐述 1和 2，并提出建议的方法进行写作。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 The Importance of Social Skills In modern society, one can never pass a day without coming into contact with others. The proper choice of words on a particular occasion, an eye contact and even a smile can m
26、ake a great difference in a persons life and career. One can acquire personal happiness by learning social skills. People with good social skills are naturally more popular than their less socially adept peers. This can, on the one hand, guarantee better support to call on when experiencing difficul
27、ties, and on the other hand, help to develop and sustain friendship. Perfect social skills can also enhance a persons self-esteem and confidence, from which a person derives great happiness. In addition, good social skills promise a better career. Healthy and productive relationships at work mean mo
28、re valuable suggestions from colleagues, which contribute enormously to a persons career. Moreover, as teamwork is becoming increasingly important, working as a compatible member of a group and exchanging ideas effectively are of crucial importance to a persons development. In conclusion, good socia
29、l skills help develop positive relationships and definitely serve as an advantage at workplaces. Therefore, the importance of good social skills should never be underestimated. 【试题解析】 本文是给定观点型的考题，要求考生就培养大学生社交技能的重要性发表自己的看法。对于此类题目，考生可以现代社会为背景，从人际交往的客观需要出发，说明良好的社交技能对于个人、家庭乃至社会的各个方面所起的重要作用。 思路 1：首段分析当前的社会背景，强调社交技能很重要。第二段可以从社交技能在一个人的生活和事业两 方面所起的作用来具体说明其重要性。最后总结全文，重申社交技能在工作、生活中的重要性。 思路 2：首段仍旧是背景分析。第二段可以从个人、家庭和社会三个层面分析社交技能的重要性，比如，个人生活更幸福，事业更成功，家庭更和睦，社会也更和谐。第三段总结全文。 范文采用思路 1进行写作。 【知识模块】 作文
