1、大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 76及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Innovation. Your essay should start with a brief description of the picture. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 2 For this part, you are allowed 3
2、0 minutes to write an essay entitled On Verbal Abuse. Your essay should start with a brief description of the picture. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Smoking. Your essay should start with a bri
3、ef description of the picture. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Charity. Your essay should start with a brief description of the picture. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200
4、words. 大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 76答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 On Innovation The picture depicts two men who are trapped in two bottles respectively. The man on the left looks helpless for he simply cannot find a way out, while the other man on the right breaks the bottle with a hammer and walks out w
5、ith a happy look. It is not difficult to get across the message conveyed by the picture to break the bottlenecks one has to resort to innovation. This is particularly true for China today. Firstly, as labor costs in China keep rising, to save cost and maintain its competitive edge in the global mark
6、et, China has to rely more on technological advances brought by innovation. Secondly, innovation should be encouraged to inject vitality into Chinas traditional and lifeless systems in all fields, so as to improve efficiency and better meet the demands of Chinese people. Lastly, innovation in key se
7、ctors, such as energy-saving technology may define Chinas future role as a world leader or follower. To conclude, standing still and doing nothing may lead to destruction, while innovation will ensure a brighter future. 【试题解析】 本文讨论了创新求变的重要性。 第一段对漫画进行了描述，通过两个人不同的结果解释了漫画的寓意，并用破折号注明：要想突破瓶颈，必须要创新。 第二段对漫
8、画进行评论，以中国自身情况为例说明创新的原因及重要性。首先，随着劳动力成本的不断增加，中国要更多依靠创新带来的技术进步保持竞争优势。其次，为提高效率，满足中国人民的需求，要将创新深入到各个领域。最后，创新决定中国在关键领域能否处于领先地位。 第三段总结全文，固步自封危害很大，创新才能保证光明的未来。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 On Verbal Abuse It is apparent in the picture that a man is angrily pouring out such a stream of curses as “Ignorant idiot“, “Your
9、e useless“ and “Stupid“ with his eyes and mouth wide open. No doubt, under the heavy pressure of modern society, people have become just too easily irritated to avoid verbal abuse. For one thing, verbal abuse will exert a negative influence on ones own image and scare others away, which leads him in
10、to a mess in interpersonal relationships. Besides, for executives, verbal abuse plays a damaging role in the future development of their firms. Overuse of swear words can stimulate revenge attacks of some rebellious souls and unconsciously incur terrible disasters. For another, an excess of bad word
11、s can harm listeners self-esteem and confidence, which may destroy their great dreams and even their whole life. In short, verbal abuse, a sort of indecent manner, will harm others without benefiting oneself. Thats why we should behave ourselves without offending others by speaking out swear words c
12、onsciously or unconsciously. 【试题解析】 本文主要讨论的是对说脏话的看法。 第一段主要对图片进行描述。由于现代社会的重压，越来越多的人容易动怒，不知不觉说出脏话。 第二段阐述对说脏话这种行为的观点，脏话损人不利己。一方面，脏话有损自己的形象，容易让别人误解。第一句的 which leads him into a mess in interpersonal relationships是一个非限制性定语从句，起补充说明的作用，为亮点句式。领导层说脏话不利于公司的发展，有可能遭来报复，还可能无意招致灾难。另一方面， 听多了脏话的人自尊和自信心会降低，他们的梦想甚至生活都
13、深受影响。 第三段总结全文，重申说脏话的危害，告诫我们不要说脏话。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 On Smoking In the picture, we can see a burning cigarette with the smoke curling in a shape similar to the word “life“. Combined with the alarming phrase “SMOKING KILLS“ under the picture, we can explicitly tell the fact demonstrated in the pictur
14、e that smoking is equal to slow suicide. It is well known that a cigarette contains many chemical substances such as tar and carbon monoxide. Burning cigarettes can produce certain poisonous substances. Therefore, smoking can not only kill smokers but also non-smokers around them. For one thing, the
15、 hazardous chemicals damage smokers lung cells, blood circulation, sympathetic nerves and respiratory tract, which can shorten their lifespan. For another, non-smokers exposed to second-hand smoke are at high risk of many health problems. In a word, smoking is no less than slow suicide. It destroys
16、both smokers and non-smokers health. People thus should try their best to give up smoking to protect not only the health of their own but also that of others. 【试题解析】 本文主要讨论的是吸烟有害健康。 第一段对图片进行简单描述，吸烟等于慢性自杀。最后一句比较复杂，主语是we，后面 that引导的从句是 fact的同位语。 第二段阐述吸烟的危害。烟草含有大量有害化学物质，抽烟不仅危害吸烟者本人的健康，还会危及周围的非吸烟人群。有害成分会
17、伤害吸烟者的肺细胞、血液循环、交感神经和呼吸道。二手烟对被动吸烟者的健康也造成了极大的伤害。 第三段总结全文，为了自己和他人的健康，请远离香烟。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 On Charity In this picture, we can see a big hand is throwing a coin while five small hands rising high are scrambling for it. This is exactly a reflection of the imbalanced awkwardness in the field of charit
18、y the donations are too few to meet the needs of disadvantaged groups. This is particularly true of China, a developing country with the largest population in the world. In our country, people who need help such as the disabled, the poor, the left-behind children and those suffering from natural dis
19、asters account for a large proportion while the institutions and organizations for charity and public undertakings are few and far between. In addition, a lack of transparency in fund managment leads to a heavy loss and waste of donations, leaving those in need with almost nothing. To improve this,
20、the concerted efforts of government, enterprises and individuals are essential If more and more people are willing to donate while fewer people need help, the picture that five hands contending for one coin will not been seen any more. 【试题解析】 本文主要讲述慈善事业 “僧多粥少 ”的局面。 第一段简要描述图片内容，目前慈善事业很尴尬，满足不了弱势群体的需求。 第二段由 This is particularly true of China自然过渡，指出在中国这种情况尤其明显，并说明导致这种局面的原因。中国人口众多，需要帮助的人群比重相应也大，但慈善和公益组织却比较少。另外，慈善机构资金运转不透明也是一个重要原因。 第三段总结全文，建议政府 、企业和个人一起努力来解决这一问题。 【知识模块】 作文
