1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 120及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of consumer rights protection. You should write at least 120 words but
2、no more than 180 words. 2 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of childrens right to privacy. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
3、 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the problem of job-seeking. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minu
4、tes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on conceit. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 120答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 Consumer Rights Protection The above picture
5、has employed personification to reflect a universal social phenomenon in China. Several pigs are talking about their food, and it turns out that only the food on Mar. 15 is green and healthy, which symbolizes that only on Mar. 15 or so, consumer rights and interests can be focused and well protected
6、. Actually, consumer rights should be protected by every means consistently. Now comes the question of how to achieve this goal. Firstly, the central government and the local authorities should reinforce the depth and width of the protection of the consumer rights through varied means including lega
7、lization, supervision and other methods. Secondly, the government should establish some professional organs for the protection of consumer rights and interests and try to improve the effectiveness of the organs concerned. Thirdly, consumers themselves should raise the awareness of rights protection
8、and learn to seek help from accessible legal channels. Anyway, there is still a long way to go in the improvement and perfection of consumer rights protection. We still should make efforts for the benefit of all the consumers. 【试题解析】 消费者权益保护是一个关注度较高的问题。现实是，这项工作并不是始终如一地得到贯彻，每年三一五期间风头强劲，过后就偃旗息鼓了，那么这个问
9、题该如何解决 ? 第一段主要是通过对所给图片的观察和分析得出此篇写作的主题。本段首先用拟人的方式描述图片内容，然后引出要谈论的话题。末句 Now comes the question of how to achieve thisgoal使用倒装，为高分句型。 作者在第二段分别从三个方面提供了行之有效的改进办法。第一，中央政府以及地方政府应 该通过各种方式加强消费者权益的保护；第二，政府应该建立一些专业的机构来保护消费者权益，并提高这些机构的有效性；第三，消费者应该具有维权意识，学会向相关法律部门寻求帮助。 最后一个自然段总结全文。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Childrens Ri
10、ght to Privacy In this picture, a mother is curious about her daughters privacy, while her daughter wants to keep her own privacy, unwilling to be probed into. It is quite common in Chinese families that parents always want to probe into the privacy of their children in the name of love and protecti
11、on. Under such circumstances, children always feel uncomfortable. From my personal perspective, we should protect childrens privacy. First of all, children are independent human beings; parents should respect their right to privacy. Secondly, invasion of childrens privacy would hurt their self-estee
12、m, shake their confidence and worsen the parent-child relationship. Thirdly, children need a relatively free space for their spiritual development and parents should never deprive them of this right. As far as I am concerned, ones privacy, boy or girl, young or old, should be well protected. Parents
13、 should never infringe upon their kids privacy in the name of love. 【试题解析】 文章第一段首先指出图片的含义，接着说明中国家长经常以爱和保护的名义打探自己孩子的隐私。 第二段分三点从作者的角度分析我们需要保护孩子隐私的必要性。第一，孩子是独立的个体，家长应该尊重他们的隐私权；第二，侵犯孩子的隐私会伤害他们的自尊、打击他们的积极性、损害家长与孩子之间的关系；第三，孩子需要相对宽松的空间来发展自己，家长不应该剥夺孩子的这种权利。 第三段作出总结，说明任何人的隐私都应该得到保护。末句重申家长不应该以爱的名义侵犯孩子的隐私。 【知识
14、模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 College Students Job-seeking The above picture depicts a contrasting situation : on the one hand, with promising prospect in his mind, a college student graduates from university, looking forward to a decent job; on the other hand, so many job-hunters who have graduated from colleges
15、 rush into the job market and it is really hard to find an ordinary job. What shall we do? At first, from the national aspect, our government should keep a stable economic growth and provide more jobs for the college students. Besides, the government should establish active employment policies targe
16、ted on college students. Secondly, from the social aspect, the media as well as other organs should try to create a non-discriminatory hiring atmosphere. Meanwhile, our colleges should establish more majors which keep pace with the time and economic development. Lastly , college students themselves
17、should study hard and improve their comprehensive abilities in preparation for working in the society. In confrontation with the problems , we have no excuses to complain or to escape. Conversely, we should try to think out various solutions to solve the problem. 【试题解析】 本篇文章讨论的是一个社会热点问题：上学与就业。作者在第一段
18、便开门见山地点出了该篇文章的主题。首句用 on the one handon the other hand这一结构具体说明了图片的内容。末句用 What shall we do?这个特殊疑问句来引出作者的解决办法。 第二段分别从国家、社会、大学生的角度给出了详细而又行之有效的办法。使用过渡词 AtfirstSecondlyLastly 使文章的结构清晰、有条理。 第三段总结全文，指出大学生在面对问题时，没有任 何借口去抱怨或逃避，相反，我们必须仔细考虑各种办法来解决问题。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Conceit Brings Failure The picture given a
19、bove vividly describes a situation in which a little conceited spider finally tastes the bitter fruit cultivated by his conceit, or we call it arrogance, with tears falling from his eyes. Indeed, arrogance should always be avoided by all of us. As the old Chinese saying goes, “The modest receive ben
20、efit, while the conceited reap failure.“ Why? First of all, if one feels conceited, he or she will stop the pursuit of knowledge. Little by little, lagging behind is a certain result. There are so many examples which well demonstrate this point, and the famous wonder child Fang Zhongyong in ancient
21、China is a telling example. Secondly , those who are self-conceited tend to pay too much attention to themselves. Thus, they cannot concentrate on their original tasks. In a word , one loses by pride and gains by modesty. We should learn from this principle and behave ourselves modestly. 【试题解析】 文章的第
22、一段对 所给图片进行了简单分析并引出主题。 第二段首句引用了中国的谚语 The modest receive benefit， while the conceited reap failure “满招损，谦受益 ”。接着从不同角度阐述了这句谚语的合理性和必要性。第一，自负的人会停止追求知识，久而久之就会落后。接着用句型 There are so many examples which well demonstratethis point引出了中国古代方仲永的例子来说明此问题，论证有力。第二，自负的人过于关注自己，从 而不能集中注意力工作。 第三段重申主题，号召大家多些谦逊少些自满。 【知识模块】 作文
